Arhi FF : Peek-a-boo #1 [ Completed ] - Page 6

Originally posted by: Barun_Gf

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The story and cncpt is awesum

i lyked d chp 1

its really different

punctuality is wat defines arnav singh raizada ..👏👏

arnav is muma boy ,.. dats really waisa v nw a days who is muma boy heehehhe😆😆

so he was thinking of love and c d destiny made him meet his love of life ..

ahhh his angel in white salwar kameez he wa moving lyk anythng to catch a glimpse of her wowww dats so intresting first tym in lyf arnav singh raizada is geting attracted to someone 😊😊

and d mostt awesum part of d story for me was dis

After getting into the car, he had not got a moments peace. Her long hair, her white clothes, her beautiful lips, her soulful eyes, he could never forget them. Real or fantasy, they were now imbibed in his memory, etched in his heart. As he entered the gardens of the venue with a smile on his lips only one thought struck his mind, something had shifted in his universe. He could feel, he wasn't the same man anymore

Dis lones made O shape kii yeahh finally dey met and for me i think its love first at sight for arnav 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: Angel2001

1, 2, 3..
Aaahhh!!! Yayayayay! *jumps up & down in excitement*
A new new new story which I am really really really really reaalllyyy looking forward to reading!! :D

The banner.. Its amazing! And the way you've put the character sketch is good :)


Ok, Arnav's father seems like a family-guy-who-loves-his-wife-&-children.
Don't even get me started on Arnav!
He is like the most lovable guy one could ever get <3

He looks like this typical guy-next-door who is lovable, caring, responsible, succesful, loves his family and adores his sister. He wants a girl whom he can understand and love her immensely .
Hope I've pretty much nailed his character sketch :)

Oh and I absolutely loved loved LOVED the way you wrote the para when Arnav sees Khushi for the first time. It was beautifully written <3

What can I say? I want to read more & more chapters!

Jaldi lao please saaare chapters :D

Originally posted by: dj_arshifan

Will read & edit the res tomorrow! 😳

Right now busy studying for test!

Hope u don't mind😳

Originally posted by: dewdrop6

Mints!! :)
This is vry interesting!
m loving it :D

Originally posted by: Nidsubh007

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So sorry for taking forever to unreserve this!

Mints you have done it once again! What a fantastic start. You had me completely engrossed in all the details of the story. I love how you showed the thought process of both father and son.

The entire description of Arnav seeing Khushi for the first time was beautifully penned down! I felt like could see Khushi through his eyes.

It reminded me of this song.

ek ladaki ko dekha to aisa laga

jaise khilata gulaab

jaise shaayar ka khvaab

jaise ujali kiran

jaise ban mein hiran

jaise chaandani raat

jaise narami baat

ek ladaki ko dekha to aisa laga...

Originally posted by: mints23

Thank you so much for your lovely comment!!

Yes, this is going to be a mushy, romantic story that will always bring a smile on your face...

Really hope I live up to all your expectations!! 😊