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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Aimz and Ayesha awesome concept, lovely CS
Im eagerly waiting to read more



Originally posted by: ..dinu..

luvly concpt guys..cont soon



Originally posted by: disismeenu4u

nice concept ... both of you👍🏼..

looking for ward to the story



Originally posted by: sonakshigupta

Awesum concept guys...eagerly waiting 4 u all 2 update :)



Originally posted by: priyal_TaaRey

Awesome concept ...
Very interesting ...
Update soon 😊



Originally posted by: soumiluvztaarey

Damn interesting concept
Update soon n PM me

Sry for late comment :(



@all Thanks a lot, everyone..

@soumiluvztaarey Please don't be sorry, dear..😊 You commented and that's really important for both of us..😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...

Amazing CS...


Waiting for the story..

Do PM me please!


Thank you so much, dear..😛
Will definitely pm you..😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Hello!! Friends!! How are you all???😊

Thanks a lot each and everyone for liking the concept and encouraging both of us... 😳

Your likes and comments mean a lot to us...So thank you once again..🤗

So, Guys, Here we are with the first update of this story.. Hope you like it..😳


Part 1


The flight from Delhi had landed half an hour ago..An old looking couple was waiting eagerly for someone'They were becoming more and more impatient by each passing second..Ofcourse, they would..As the person arriving was not less than a daughter for them, whom they were gonna meet after 12 years'Now that the time had come, they were not ready to wait for some more time..They were Mr. and Mrs. Singhania, Rey's parents'

Rey's Mom(R.M)'Pata nahi ye ladki kahan reh gayi.. Mujhse to ab aur intezaar nahi hota..Kitni badi hogayi hogi na meri bachi.. 12 saal baad aaj dekhoongi main.. Photos main to dekha hai laikin ab to haqeeqat main miloongi us se main..

Rey's Dad(R.D)'Sahi keh rahi hain aap'Pata nahi aur kitna intezaar karwayegi ye ladki..Aane do use main to baat hi nahi karoonga us se aur bohot dantoonga..

Someone'Handsome maine aisa kya kardiya ke ab aap mujhse baat bhi nahi karoge..

They turned to see who that was and their happiness had no limits..

R.M'Taani tum aagayi..

She goes to her and gathers are in a tight hug'

Taani'Beautiful, kaisi ho aap??Maine aap ko bohot bohot miss kiya..

R.M'Kabhi nahi sudregi tu badmash..Kitni baar kaha hai maine ke aise mat pukaara kar..

Taani gives a naughty smile and says

Taani'Sorry beautiful, that's not possible..Aap beautiful ho to ho.. Kyun hain na handsome..

And then she winks at Rey's dad..

R.D'Ab tu apni Ma ke paas hi rahegi ya mujhse bhi milegi..

Taani rushes towards him and they hug each other'

R.D'Mera Bacha.. Maine tujhe bohot yaad kiya..Teri har shararat mujhe yaad aati thi..

Taani'Acha.. aisa hai.. Now don't worry Handsome main aagayi hoon na to apni shararat se aapko pareshaan kar doongi..

R.M(teasing tone)'Kuch der pehle koi keh raha tha ke main to Taani se baat bhi nahi karoonga..

Taani'Haan Haan maine bhi suna.

R.D'Kya bacha tum bhi na kya baatein lekar baith gayi.. Aur aap to na chup hi baitho.. Aapko to hamari bonding se jalan hoti hai..Chalo ab hame dair horahi hai.. Rey ko bhi to surprise dena hai na us ke Dance event ke venue pe jaakar.. Chalo jaldi chalo'

On hearing Rey's name, a blush creeps on Taani's face..She was gonna meet him after 12 years..Gosh!! She was very excited as well as nervous..Will he remember her??She was lost in thoughts when Rey's mom asked her to come fast..She hurried to the car..

They drove off to Rey's house.. taani was gonna live with them.. Rey's parents had talked to Taani's dad and asked him to send her to Mumbai to continue her further studies..They loved her a lot'And she was the apple of their eyes especially Rey's grandmom.. She always supported Taani'They were really very close to each other and Taani shared everything with her..

After reaching the house, Taani directly ran to meet Rey's granny..They were overwhelmed to meet each other and were crying out of happiness.. But soon, after R.D's reminder, they got freshen up and ready as they had to reach the venue on time to surprise Rey..

Deep Peacock Blue Embellished Kalidar Suit



She looked really beautiful..Soon, they reached the venue and entered inside..The front seats were booked for the three of them'Taani was very nervous now'As the announcement of Rey's dance was made, her heart started beating faster and she could here it amidst the huge round of applause..The lights went off and the song started..Taani closed her eyes and felt his presence'She had seen his pictures but today she was gonna see him in real after 12 years..

She clutched her frock and soon a smile spread on her face'Slowly, she opened her eyes and the sight infront of her gave her pleasure, the pleasure of feeling the loved one near you..She was totally lost in him and his beautiful dance that she did not even realise a girl's entry during his dance'But the loud cheer from the audience brought her out of the trance and it was then when she noticed Rey's closeness with the girl..She felt uncomfortable..She just wanted to concentrate on her dance but her mind was wandering somewhere else..Who was she??Why are they so close to each other??? But she quickly brushed away her thoughts..Soon the dance ended with a huge round of appaluse from the audience'

Taani was just smiling'She was so happy to see him dance, to see him fulfill his dream..Rey's parents saw her smiling and lost in her own thoughts and smirked'They asked her to go and meet Rey backstage..She nodded in a yes and proceeded towards the backstage..

DHAK DHAK DHAK DHAK..

Her heartbeat was even faster now'Her hands were slightly trembling now due to the nervousness and the excitement of meeting her childhood friend..

Taani(herself)'Rey mujhe dekh kar kaise react karega?? Kitna khush hoga wo?? I am sure wo bilkul bhi nahi badla hoga'

She then saw him.. She was facing his back.. He was probably doing something with his mobile..She moved towards him..

When she reached near him, she placed her hand on his shoulder and called out his name..

Taani'Rey!!

But at the same time she stumbled due to her high heels and was about to fall down and hit the floor.. when she felt a pair of hands around her waist holding her protectively'She slowly started opening her eyes which she had closed in fear of hitting the ground..As she opened her eyes, she saw Rey holding her in his arms protectively.. She was lost in his hazel brown eyes..


----With Rey----

As soon as he turned on hearing his name, he saw someone falling.. Before he could realise who it is, he quickly wrapped his hands around his waist protecting her.. TAANI!!!! Gosh!!! This is Taani.. She looked so beautiful with her eyes closed.. Pure innocence was reflecting on her face'Unknowingly a smile crept on his face'And when she opened her eyes, he was lost in those deep brown beautiful eyes..

But they came into senses due to the noises of the people passing by..Taani out of excitement quickly hugged him'

Taani(Excited+Happy)'REY!!! Rey!! I am so happy.. I am meeting you after 12 years, at last'You know,I missed you so so so much' I had been waiting so much for this day.. And see, here it is..

A girl was seeing all this from the door.. She had tears in her eyes..

Girl'Rey.. Tum..

She could not complete her sentence and ran away from there..

Rey was surprised to see this' He pushed Taani away from himself and Taani was shocked..

Rey(shouted)'Kriya suno to!!Kriya!!!!

Taani(shocked)'Rey!! Kya hua.. Tum aise..

Now Rey was damn angry.. He could not tolerate it and burst out in anger..

Rey(angry)'Chup baitho Taani.. Bilkul Chup..

Taani'Par Rey..

Rey(shouting)'Maine kaha na tumse, mujhe kuch nahi sunna..Tumhaari wajah se Kriya mujhse naaraz hogayi..Tumhaari himmat kaise hui aisa karne ki.. Tum itna gir sakti ho maine kabhi nahi socha tha.. God!!! You are so cheap, Taani..

Taani was really hurt to hear this.. Rey, Her Rey, her childhood best friend thought like this about her'Tears welled up in her eyes..

Taani(crying)'Ye sab tum kya keh rahe ho Rey.. Tum ek ladki ke liye apni best friend ko daant rahe ho??? Aur ab tum mujhe Taani bulaoge..Maine to socha tha ke tum mujhe dekh kar khush hoge laikin tum to.. You have changed Rey.. You have changed..

Rey-- Wo ladki Kriya hai.. Meri Girlfriend' Tumhaara naam Taani hai na to Taani hi bulaoonga..Aur tum itni disgusting harkat karogi, I didn't know that.. Door raho mujhse tum.. Samjhi'

And he left from there in anger..Taani was very hurt.. Tears were continously flowing from her eyes.. Suddenly, she heard Rey's parents calling her name..She quickly managed to gather herself and controlled her emotions..She told them that Rey has some work so he left..

They then went back to home..Taani quickly went to her room and broke down..She was shattered..Rey's behaviour had hurt her a lot and his words were ringing in her ears..

GrandMom entered her room and saw Taani shattered'She was shocked to see her condition..

Taani wiped her tears and gave her a fake smile but Daadi knew her very well..

Daadi(worried)'Beta kya hua?? Mujhe batao??

Taani(fake smile)'Na.. Nahi daadi. Kuch nahi.. Bas aise hi..

Daadi'Beta ab tum mujhse jhoot bologi.. batao kya hua..

Taani broke down infront of her..She started crying and hugged her..

Taani(crying)'da.. Daadi.. Wo wo Rey bohot badal gaya Daadi.. Us.. Usne mujhe cheap bolo, digusting bola..

And then she narrated everything to her Daadi..

Taani rested her head on Daadi's lap..And Daadi was caressing her hair.. She too had tears in her eyes..

Taani(still sobbing)'Daadi, aapko pata hai.. Bachpan main na Rey meri kitni care karta tha' Wo yahan aakar apne saare promises bhool gaya..Aur na usne aaj pehli baar mujhe Taani bulaya'


-------Flashback--------


The sun was setting marking the end of a beautiful day, the

birds were flying back to their nests and the environment was filled with their melodious chirps making the surroundings even more beautiful'Amongst these voices

came the sounds of the two cute children, a boy and a girl..They were running

around, probably one trying to catch the other'But suddenly the little girl

fell down and the sweet chirpings were soon replaced by her painful cries'The little

boy quickly ran up to her worried



Boy'Princess!! Princess tum theek to ho na?? Tumhe lagi to

nahi..


Girl(Angry pout)'Rey, ye kaisa sawaal pooch rahe ho?? main

agar giroongi to mujhe chot lage gi na'


Rey'Sorry princess'Mujhe dikhao kahan chot lagi hai'Main

abhi theek kar doonga'


Girl(Again angry)'Rey aap mujhe princess kyun bulate ho..

Maine kaha na mujhe acha nahi lagta.. Mera naam Taani hai..Mujhe mere naam se

bulao..


Rey'Are princess, mujhse jhagda baad main karna pehle mujhe

apna pair dikhao..Dekho tumhari aankhon main tears hai matlab tumhe dard ho

raha hai'Mujhe dekhne do na'


Taani glared at him but yes she was in pain.. So, she

forwarded her leg towards him'Rey looked at his little princess's foot which

had a cut on it and his eyes filled with tears'He thought of the pain that

wound was causing to his princess..


Rey(with tears)'Princess, bohot dard hora ha hai na?? Tumhe

dekh kar chalna chahiye tha na'Main kab se tumhe pukaar raha tha aur tum ho ki

meri baat sunti hi nahi ho..Ab dekho takleef ho rahi hai na tumhe..


Taani'Kya karti main.. Main aapse ghussa hoon.. To kyun sunu

main aapki..Ahhh'


Rey got worried with her scream'Somehow he wanted to heal

her wound..He took a look at the surroundings and saw a small pond.. He quickly

managed to get some water from there and cleaned her wound carefully not

wanting to hurt her more..He then tied his handkerchief on her wound with his

little hands.. His eyes were still teary'


Taani'Rey aap kyun ro rahe ho'Aap ko kya hai.. Aap to mujhe

chod kar jaa rahe ho'


Rey'Princess main bhi Mumbai nahi jana chahta tumhe chod

kar.. Par kya karoon.. Mom and Dad ka decision hai aur wo log mujhe chodkar

nahi jayenge'


Taani'Rey main aap ke jaane ke baad kis se kheloongi.. Kaun

mujhe chocolates laakar dega..Meri studies main help kaun karega..School main

teacher ki scoldings se mujhe kaun bachaiga'


Little Taani and Rey both were crying as they did not want

to go away from each other..But, they had no option'


Taani(crying)'Aap to mujhe wahan jaakar bhool jaoge na Rey'


Rey(crying)'Taani, please aise mat bolo' Tum to meri best

friend ho.. Main tumhe kaise bhool jaounga..Bilkul nahi'promise me ke tum bhi

mujhe nahi bhoologi..


Taani'Promise'


Rey'Promise me ke tum kisi aur ladke se dosti nahi karogi

aur us se baat bhi nahi karogi..Nahi nahi..Uski taraf dekho bhi nahi'Aur to aur

us Rohan se to tum hamesha door rahogi..Tum us se baat bhi mat karna.. Hamesha

tumhare aas paas rehta hai..Monkey.. Donkey kahin ka'Tum us ke saath kabhi khelna bhi nahi..Theek hai..Please promise me..


Taani(smiles between her tears)'Ok.. Promise..


Rey'Aur promise me ke tum hamesha apna khayaal rakho

gi..Khud ko kabhi hurt nahi karogi jaise ki aaj kiya.. Kitna blood nikla..Kabhi

bhi apni care nahi karti ho tum..


Taani'Acha baba promise..Laikin rey hum hamesha Best friends

rahenge na..Hum phir se milenge na..


Rey'I promise you taani.. Hum hamesha best friends rahenge

aur Hum zaroor milenge..


Little Taani and Rey wiped each other's tears and made

promises to each other and were also consoling..


Soon, Rey and his family left to Mumbai' Little Taani and

Rey, both were heart broken but they were compelled.. They did not want to

leave each other but still their destiny separated them'

-------Flashback ends------


Taani(sobbing)'Wo mujhe bhool gaya, Daadi.. hamari friendship ko bhi bhool gaya.. Aur to aur saare promises bhi bhool gaya..Ab main us se door rahoongi, Daadi.. Dekhna aap.. Main us se bilkul bhi baat nahi karoongi.. I hate him..


Daadi was listening to all this carefully.. She somehow managed to console her and put her to sleep..


Daadi(Thinking)'Rey ne Taani ko bohot takleef dee hai.. Samajhti hoon ke Mumbai aakar usme changes aaye hain laikin kya ye changes Rey ko apni dosti bhulwa sakte hain.. Wo dosti jis keliye wo apne parents ko tak chod kar Delhi main rehne ke liye Tayyaar tha..Rey to badal sakta hai, laikin uska dil to ab bhi wohi hai..Mujhe kuch karna hoga.. Mujhe hi Rey ko ehsaas dilaana hoga ke Taani uski zindagi main kya importance rakhti hai'Haan yehi sahi hoga..


-------End-------


Friends, Please do check the banner made by Hima on the first page... Thank you so much, sweetie for a lovely banner...😳😳


So, how was it??? We both really hope that you liked it...😳

Please do like and comment.. It means a lot to us..😳

Once again thanks a lot for your appreciation...😳


Love you all!!😳

Aimz && Ayesha!!🤗

Edited by Ayesha_Hasan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Res ! Yippee !! Me First !!
So Update Ke Baare Mein Jo bolu kam hai ... You guys seriously shocked me ! Well Taani really OMG ... She is so Cute and Sweet ! Beautiful and Handsome, Wow !! Love her character !!
Well She was soo excited to meet Rey but all her hopes went to Waste ! Rey is really mean and rude ! How he could forget his best friend for Kriya !
Taani is really hurt ! I hope She starts ignoring Rey and Rey realises his mistake ! He really deserves an earful from Taani, I really want him to feel bad and Feel horrible !! I don't know why but I hope that happens !!
Anyways awesome update !
Edited by TaaReyD3_Neha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
awesome start...
rey ws so rude...
flashback ws really sweet...
plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
awesome update...
loved it...
poor taani... how could rey shout at her...
love reys daadi...😆😆 hope she helps rey to realise the importance of taani...
and the flash back is tooo good...
finally loved ur update...
thank u 4 d pm...
plzzz update soon...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Awesome part.luvd it.granny is so swt..egarly waitng 4 nxt part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
That was a brilliant start, omg rey was soo rude!!!!
But the flashback was soo cute, I already love lil rey n lil taani loll
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Ayesha and Aims u guys did a superb job
Aww Taani is so adorable I love her bonding with Rey parents
Taani so excitied to see Rey
I want to hit Rey over the head how dare he say all those hurtful things to Taani
Their childhood flashback was awesome, they were so close
I hope Taani ignore Rey now
I love the entire update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
It was a fabulous updt
but d flashback was super cuteee
plz updt d nxt part soon
i m really eager to read d nxt ch n see wat daadi wil do to make rey realize importance of taani

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