ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 1 - COMPLETED

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Anupama Jinethri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

loooved it!!!

feeling very bad for arnav!

can't wait to read more!

continue soon!

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khareshelley

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

awesome...continue son..
happy to know u r back..😊

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skmr.bs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Woow this was awesome poor Arnav I feel sorry for him but the story really looks great and would love to read a light-hearted story.

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

WOW...Deepthi...its beautiful...ur prologue made me cry...At the age of 19 he not only lost his full family in a moment but saw the cruel world...to make it worse his uncle betrayed...feeling too bad for him...At least his dad left someone who he can ask for help...waiting to see how the journey of his life goes...
thanks for the pm...

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

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Wowww finally back wid a new arshi ff

although i m gonna miss ur last one between d stranger 😭

Omg arnav lost his whole family in dat acc even his dii also😭😭 no doubt ismein v arnav ka cheater unlce ka haath hoga

how could he cheat a guy who just lost his family making him left wid nthing no one to suport further

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ahhh so manohar doesnt knw abt d secret locker were arnav father left two letter for him grt work thnkgd kuch toh jagah hai jo woh creepy nai janta 😡😡

His father left two letter wat dere in d second letter arnav is just 19 kaisa pata chalega wat were in d letter

and d second letter says

Shashi gupta who wil be d gd father in arnav lyf hmmm sound intresting

diii par is prologue mein apne khushi ko mntn nai kiya q ..??😕😕

Very intresting prologue dii

waiting for d chp to come nw ..!!

dii jaldi pm karo chp 1

Edited by Barun_Gf - 12 years ago

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nataliya

@nataliya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

😃wahooo.looking forward to this one!!!u r a briliant writer,i throught btw stranger was the end of arshi but this yar...awesome...so open when 27...??..means KHUSHIII😳

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ara_000

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Wow dats interesting...!
I am in love wit the prolouge...
D story line seems to b promising nd i knw u will do full justice wit it...
I love the father nd son bond nd i love the words in d letter...they r heart touching...!
So Mr.Shashi gupta is arnav's father's best frnd nd accrding to him,nly Mr.gupta can help him out if arnav is in some prblm...ahhh interesting indeed...
Cant wait for the story now...!
Get started soon...!

Edited by ara_000 - 12 years ago