ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 1 - COMPLETED - Page 15

Originally posted by: deepthiya

Oh my dear, everyone is getting wrong. Chp1 story is past and happened 3 weeksa ago. Just wanted to give you gist of how Arnav was before accident

Originally posted by: deepthiya

Sorry Astha, I misunderstood your post..:)

My Bad😛

that's a reallly sweet update dear... :)_ :)

plzzz continue soon

take care :)

Enjoyed chapter 1 a lot & thanks for the PM 😃

Akash hanging up Payal's phone for the first time & then telling her that she should have respected him the first time itself was funny 😆

Arnav trying to catch a proper glimpse of Payal's new friend moving Payal aside but to his bad luck Payal not giving him the least chance to meet her friend, then Payal alarmed that Arnav was singing something totally unplanned & Khushi shocked when Arnav winked at her while performing on stage was awesome 😳

Arnav & Akash always irking Payal & then pacifying her with gifts sounds sweet

Loved the scenes where you narrated Arnav & Akash's (respective) first intros with Khushi……amazing….mind-blowing

Akash groomed himself for 2 hours 😆 😆 😆 Akash scared of the beauty with brains, Khushi telling him that she could use his talks teasing Payal as a weapon in future was fun to read

Arnav surfing to find out the girl's name & Akash helping in the search was lovely……so he figured out the right name. wonder how Khushi will respond to Arnav when he first calls her by her real name????...will she have any idea that it was the name that he chose or will he get to know that it's her real name???...wonder what game they are going to play……will Arnav meet her under her real name only as Shashi Gupta's daughter or…????

Excited to read the next chapter