SS-IPKKND : Ending Thru Our Eyes #1 Link #2-Pg 152 *Completed* - Page 82

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asthagarwal

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what an amazing n love filled update was it...

I m awestruck...ur an awesome writer didi...
poor khushi she really thinks what happened to babuji was her fault..glad Arnav made her understand that she is absolutely wrong...
m in love with the way these two handle n support each other... me 2... 😳
his double meaning talks at dining table left me blushing☺️
OMFG NK got his girl... yup he did... 😃
continue soon didi...

wow u dedicated this update us, Cheeni khush hui😳
We love u so much didi...ur the best🤗 even I luv u all bahut sara... 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asthagarwal

Unres by Pooja aka Barun_Gf


Dii weee love u tooo🤗🤗


Prakash brothers rofl🤣

Awww god kuch nai batao toh yeh ladki sochti rahegi aur bata do tab v sochegi Sanka Devi hai na...aur kya karegi???

Awww arnav was teasing khushi infrnt of everyone wot the 😲😲

He made everythng arrangement according to khushi to make her understand dat it wasnt her fault and shyam wil pay off his deeds😊😊

Nk is getting his love girl dii jia is to cute just lyk our nk 😃😃 yup she is..

Lolll he was behaving lyk a jerk infrt of her hahahahah😆😆

Arnav sang a song for khushi how romantic di☺️

Dey finished dere game dii who won the game yeh toh bataye nai aap

Mr raizada ya Mrs raizada 😳😳 will ask dem n tell..actually I didn't wanted 2 disturb their Rabba Ve... 😉

Diii lovee u sooo much love u 2 sweetie... 🤗


Awesum work dii and fab update m glad u liked it... 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nickysweet

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Superb and mind-blowing update loved the naughty arnav and his description to aarav about playing football with khushi is totally hilarious. I love this part mostly. U r too good.
All he do to make smile on her face that's so sweet of him. He ttruly loves her. Khushi change him too much with her unconditional love and u protray it very well.
New girl gia entered in Nk life that's good. Now he also have one girl with whom he will be loved.
Lets see how this story moves.
Can u convert this SS to FF. I really don't want this story to end anytime soon. Plz make it to the FF if possible. I would love to read more and more.
Thank u both of u for pming me.



Thanku sooo much for liking my work...
I always feel very happy after reading ur comment...
Sorry but not possible 2 convert dis to an FF...
I dont have much to do with this...will just close all d loop holes and end it... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ara_000

So finally khushi poured her heart out to arnav..!
She actually needed it..aftr comforting arnav she herslf got into dis mess nd sumwhr she is blaming herslf for evrythng dat has happened to shashi...!
Nd wen arnav noticed it he planned to get dis thought out of her system nd thus he planned sumthng special for khushi...!
He actually wrote those wonderful lines for her nd sing a song also...!
Awww truly wat can a wife ask more from her hubby dan to make her feel special nd thus she cried her heart out hugging him tight..! ❤️
arnav make her undrstnd dat blaming herslf s not right nd wit it she is disrespecting her father's love nd care for her...
True it is nd thus she forgot evrythng nd let herslf drown in d immense love of her hubby nd arnav started to tease her nd khushi actually took it seriusly nd started to call her arnavji but soon was cut off by a firm kiss from her hubby..!
Nd again they end up making love drowning in d world of passion nd bliss ❤️
i love the scene where arnav was teasing khushi wit his double meaning words but wen he saw dat khushi was not smiling nd her mood is not getting ok he dropped d idea nd started to talk sumthng else...!
Lovely chappy 👍🏼
i totally loved it how u r showing arnav nd khushi's rltnship nd love btwn them ❤️
waiting for d nxt chappy now 😳



thanks a lot...
m glad u liked it... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

well dude who would have thought he would be able to explain it to her so well

though to be fair if he wont who will
aarav my boy the less you know about the games your parents were playing the better
abhi aapko pata karr ke koi faiyada nahin
but boy was he getting shameless there
glad he made her see sense like she did
he is right in what he said and did
so payash and her parents will be back for the trial
well they will be needed
and she has to stop feeling guilty as it has not her fault
those lines was just beautiful dear
i just loved the same
cant wait for creep to be punished now
and yes she has to be shameless with ya mate
cheers for pm



thanks a lot 4 ur sweet comment...
it means a lot... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arshimohabbat

am damn happy...or say gt mad wit happiness
page started wit ur reply 4 me
n cuming 2 d update
AWESOME!!!
cnt blame khushi 4 being gloomy ,evry child wnts dem 2 b d reason 4 der parents smile n cnt c dem suffering bcoz of der child..
aarav is bak n poor child cud'nt gt wat his dad ws saying
di,mami n nani r gud @ undrstng double meanings😉
arnv is also ryt in supporting her n understanding her 👏
so arnv did al preparatns 2 bring payal n family bak 😃
nk's luv story!!! wow!! waiting
hayeee!!! wen evr i read arnav-khushi parts am so happy
atleast 4 d tym being while reading i feell lyk its d real shw goin in front of my eyes i words
n d credit goes 2 d author...doin justice 2 al our xpectations tnk u 👏 i try my best... 😃

huh?????😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 did sum1 metioned me in IF ???🥳 🥳 🥳
HIHI rather dan in pm's i nvr saw my name mentioned anywer
tnx a ton...u made my day
luv u n tnx 4 d pm
update soon❤️



m sooo happy after reading ur comment...
it means a lot...
thank u... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rudri

I'l start with the 7th chapter. Arnav sleeping and khushi adoring him and when he wakes up he teases her and then *cough* kisses her was sooo cute! So finally anjali met her man! He recognises her! But how? Anyways khushi! She needs some rest. Worrying about everyone is her favourite pastime it feels. Well the sooner anjali divorces the better! Its good that she opted for some 'ME' time. Aarav and khushi's improving bond made me feel so good. I actually got scared thinking what was arnav upto! What was goin on in his mind? I understood his insecurity but poor khushi had to bear the brunt of it.I wamted arnav to feel like very guilty for sometime but that's okay. Atlast he let his feelings out,his built up frustrations and insecurity! And who better than khushi could understand it so well. She vented herself out too! Looks like a season of venting out the innermost feelings. Their lovemaking was hot!They were so vulnerable that my heart went out to them. I loved this chapter the most!The basketball scene was so funny! Loved the way how arnav explained that she wasnt responsible for her babuji's condition. It was so touching and overwhelming! Awesome!So NK met his dream girl. I really hope she's the one for him. He really really made a fool of himself! Poor fellow! Thankyou for such an amazing ss. How i wish the CVs showed something like this!! 👏



thanks a lot...
m glad u liked it...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -RabbaVe-

Loved the whole update.. and Im totally in Love wid this storry! ❤️ Can it become an FF pleease? 😳 Cz Cant think about its ending yaar! This is the first continueation thats sooo Awesome! im lovin it.. ^___^



its my pleasure but cant continue it...
have nothing much to do wid dis SS...
thanks a lot for such an awesome comment... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cheesemad

oh I forgot to mention in my comment...


i just loved the lines written by Arnav and song he sung...
so adorable...
n new name rocks!!!
thanks to you n arshimohobbat:D



thanks CC i wrote those lines... 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rami92

Thanks fr such a lovely update😊

just loved it😊
Loved all the faces of arnav😊
Naughty😳
caring😊
Lover boy😃
Nk has got a pair now..
But di i wish to see la back?? for that u will have to wait dear... 😃



m glad u liked d update... 😃

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