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ARS24

@ARS24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#511

omg 😆 😆u pm-ed me

aww 😳 thank u so much dear

awesome update 😃

re read for 3 tyms now 😃

when will u update next ? 😛

update soon wa 😃

thank u for pm 😃 me waiting 😲😆

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zayana khan

@zayana123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#512

That was an awesome update dear...

I loved the flashback part...

Eagerly waiting 4 the next part...

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meera06

@meera06

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Posted: 11 years ago

#513

Avery nice update..Arnav did behave like an asshole with Khushi ...

Waiting for the internship update!

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sudhalata1

@sudhalata1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#514

Read the whole story in one go.fabulous. Will you please PM when you update next.

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#515

awesome

she is can see throw his insecurities and lack of trust for people

she wont hold grudge as she think what life give you embrace it n if its not good try to make it

she knows ASR can hurt her but when he realizes it he does repent it

maybe he can think logically before reacting but if he did that then there will be no Difference b/w him and Aman

he lacks trust and you can not force anyone to trust you, trust can not be asked its like a miracle it just happens

khushi cld hv told him but he would hv repeated the same mistake again

i take lot of courage to say quiet when u know u r right n u can prove other person wrong, but it won't do good but ruin the future aspect of any good

i like her strength

whoever says pain makes u weak is wrong it only makes your stronger and a fighter.

Edited by angeldream14 - 11 years ago

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greshu

@greshu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#516

thanks for coming back, ur one of my favourite writter, so missed u a lot, hope u continue soon...

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#517

wow amazing update.
firstly the length and thn khushi's characteristics her. i completely support her in wht she did. it takes a bigger person to realize the fault's and lacks of the person in front due to which they are behaving so meanly and khushi here was tht bigger person.

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plss

@plss

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#518

nice update as always. read the last two update its really good

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Sajinabi

@saj111

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#519

WELCOME BACK Sruthi welcome smiley photo: YOU'RE WELCOME SMILEY your_welcome.gif

, was eagerly waiting when'll we get d updates to ur stories. It was such a co-incident dat I thought about to check ur wordpress in d morning and in evening got ur e-mail when opened my mail.

Now coming to d chapters; Sruthi it was superrr Really really good

chapters 20 & 21. It was a nice treat 4 us after long lost months of updates and dat too with double update Sruthi 👏.

Chapter 20: Anjali-Arnav's past, it was dam terrible 😭. Though they had no good memories of their father 😡, it was only their mother they had to remember and cherish with those happy life they lived with. It was totally different from d show d reason behind theri mother's suicid, but in d show d reason was not justifiable while in dis ff dis u justified d suicid to stop d marriage so dat her daughter doesn't hve to marry a person of her father's age Grrr

. With d time Anjali has overcome her sorrow and horrible past, but it couldn't bring back d jovial, fun going 15yr old boy but instead it had made him rutherless, arrogant and stone-hearted man Firehair 1

Raksha Bandhan; d puriest bond between brother-sister and enjoyed how Arnav didnot protest and allowed his Di to tie d rakhi so dat it'll bring happiness in her face, which is wat he wanted as he promised his mother. More than Anjali-Arnav, it was Khushi-Aman's bond dat brougth d real meaning to dis festival. It was indeed khushi who brought Aman out of his past of being unwanted 4 his parents and showed d real meaning of living life of wat comes and take it has it is Clapping Hands

Chapter 21: Posessiveness kills d man and it has killed the great ASR's brain dat he mistrusted Khushi, when he himself has told dat his Khushi will never break his trust and d promise she gave to him. Really appreciate Khushi decision not to tell anything to him when he himself thinks dis much low of her and no trust in her Absof*****lutely

then there's no need 4 her to give any explanation to clear d misunderstanding.

Finally it hitted his brain from Aman's mouth itself about d reason behind d gift Phew

. At last it melted ice inside ASR dat he said Sorry 4 his cruel behaviour 4 past two weeks dat Khushi has to bear although to some extent she too enjoyed his rough sex at night 😳. The last part was d best part, though they passed dis tough phase of their relationship, there's no daoubt dat they'll cross all d hurdles in their path when they hve each other's support.