Arshi FF ~~ 'Mine' # 3 [Part 19-23]; Thrd # 4 Link-Pg 148

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OmNaMaSteOm

@OmNaMaSteOm

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

A very heart warming update.

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SAM32

@SAM32

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

u asked for suggestions. but i m here for a reqest. plz plz give these kind of awesome awesone updates soon :-D
cant wait to read more

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Snoowfall

@Snoowfall

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

thank you Sruthi for dedicating a new thread on my behalf,you and your story telling deserved the stalking. The story is completely and the concept is completely new. It is hard to bring such a concept along, have read where other stories taking a bad turn with the writing and you give up on reading the story. But with the way you are shaping and moulding it , I feel honored to get a chance to read it.

Now with the update, why is he phys-co-analyzing her interaction, hmmm got me thinking, is he thinking that he deprived her of something. Hope he realizes that, the bridal collection got me thinking, are you planning to show Khushi in a bridal outfit to him so that he can start thinking straight. When I read the pre-cap, I was like when did he give her such liberty for her to flirt with him and that too in his office.

About her working as an intern, I would rather see a jealous Arnav than Jealous Khushi as she has already lost so much. He needs to know what a jewel he has and how to mend the damages he has caused. And have Khushi give him a cold shoulder at work, just imagining it, what will ASR do 😆

Well again thank you for making the time during your vacation and doing the update, I for one certainly gave up hope of seeing an update until July, wanted you to enjoy your vacation and home cooking... 😊

About suggestions: a couple: faster updates, possessive ASR, how does she know he is not two timing her, her overseas visits, any sickness for her in the last year, and what he does when she is sick. I really do not care if he was sick, he has his Di to take care of, but her no one. what else (tapping my head), does the guy whom his family owed money ever get to her in Delhi or something and she ran away him or something in Delhi, kusi...Did she talk to her Bauji atleast, just make an attempt to hear his voice, is it a paid internship, if i remember anything else I will add it, has he ever seen her outside the apartment like in college or mall and how was the interaction. oh boy, i thought a couple, but looks like i asked for a lot...

I was about to ask how she behaved in the college with her classmates and you answered it in this update.

Thinking about both the interviews, after the first one he hands her the mistress contract when it should have been the job offer, and now at the second one he hires her as an intern to design bridal collection, just caught my attention.

Oh one more, why did he not look at her offer letter and why did he go back home, did he not want to celebrate with her?

Edited by arnkhunostalgic - 12 years ago

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aayt

@aayt

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

it was lovely update

khushi was adorable n he was irritated

but I loved that flirty khushi

she was quite happy but not completely

loved it

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

so far sooo good very very nice chapter...

the interview conversation between arnav and kushi sooo much fun and relaxing and in the flat tooo...because before their conversations are very intense...u showed the other side tooo.

very proud of kushi after all the struggles she becomes what she want...she is very strong...

i think arnav realizes first he is in love with kushi...let see .
u r amazing yaar u can write both intense and relaxing tooo.goood.

thank u for the chapter...

kushiarnav1.

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Thanushiya

@ThanuAditya

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Congratzz for the new thread :) Brilliant upd

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muktapatel

@muktapatel

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

fantastic update...

He is dmnn attracted to see her in her formal attire.that's the reason he said her to wear whatewer she feels comfertable in it.I liked the whole flat conversion between them.I know arnav cared for her. but i really waanna to see some scenes where he can take care of her. so after another chapter u will start her internship in AR.so can i guess that lavanya will not like khushi and aman's close friendship and she fall for aman.

but i really want to know about that what will he do this time to take khushi

with him when he will go for his overseas meetings because u mention in ur previous update that her internship period clash with his overseas meetings. and most importent thing he said in this update that he and she will just act as an employer and employee in the office.then how will they manage?

I read the update just once. i read it once again if i have some doubts then post it later.🤗

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keyboard123

@keyboard123

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Loved the update!! Can't wait for the next one!!

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Rabiabegum

@Rabiabegum

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Awesome chapter and interesting too!!!!

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shreyasonia

@shreyasonia

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

congratulations on the new thread and of course I am just loving this story. the progress of it so far has been really great and I love the fact that you always come back to answer our questions thru the updates.
Also looking forwards to a possessive Mr Raizada soon

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