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nnhk

@nnhk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

are you feeling seduced?

can not stop laughing.

found this today and read all the 6 chapters in one go...

this is hilarious

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#242

too funny kushi is really Innocent ...love dit

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#243

🤣 🤣 sorry but I cant stop my self from laughing! How do you write this without laughing? Is Khushi that innocent or is she just acting like that! And poor Arnav and his date! He should listen to his Hart! He is a moron! Can wait for the second seducing game! I think Arnav is enjoying this!

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#244

Romance at its comical best...🤣

Thank you RB. This one makes my day...

How I would love to see THIS Arnav and Khushi waltz in front of my eyes...

the frogs mating was ROFL! 🤣

What world is this? I want IN!

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#245

This is absolutely hilarious. I read all the 5 chapters and was rofling all the way. This Kushi can make any one eat their own heads!! And this Arnav was begging to know about the website!! Well.war between the subconscious and Arnav had me clutching my stomach..I don't know how you do it..i loved it RB...do pm me..

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#246

I'm loving the romantic hero and the dufus heroine...it is one hell of a fun contrived comedy...what romantic comedies are all about.

I'm particularly enjying Arnav's sub conscious ...a little male pixie like creature in my head...wearing a tiny little while suit...he is the hero right 😆

The dance, her poking, his ticklish spot...love love love...what's not to love about this story

Edited by AquaSandhya - 12 years ago

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arshi21

@arshi21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#247

Wh-what?

hahahahahahaha! This is So ..SO hilarious!

My goodness! Too funny! :D

I SO want to see how their "next" scenario will come out..

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soaringskies

@soaringskies

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#248

And i am grinning the whole time while reading this...they are cute...!!😳 barbie you are one of those exceptional writers..and it's an absolute pleasure to read your stories...😊