ArShi SS: Forced Marriage ~Chapter12 Page 128 THREAD2 LINK PG1 - Page 72

Originally posted by: -BROKEN_ANGEL-

Ufff i missed the first place. Another time maybe! The update is superb well and beautiful written.the way u write the flow of the relationship between arshi is simply awesome :) thank god khushi is changing her pov towards arnav nd his family.arnav as usual is so sweet nd his concern towards khushi..just want to know when he met khushi for the first time...waiting for next one.update soon

Thank you so much :)
I'll come to that later maybe after two or three chapters.

Originally posted by: PrInCeSs_dIVa

OH WOW!! You mentioned me???? Oh how sweet!! *Pats shoulder proudly saying 'yeah shez talkin about me babe...'* Thank you and i am so glad that my comments motivate you : ) You're welcome. Hehehe. They really do.

So you finally updated! Yay!! Let me dance...




Okay so now comes the SAD PART! NO Freaking update for a week? *gets over dramatic* Kya? Kya? Kya? Yeh din dekhne se pehle main mar kyun nahi gayi? Nahiii... you just reminded me of Kareena from 'Golmal Returns' Bahahaha!
But on a serious note ALL THE VERY BEST for your upcoming exmas and may god bless you with lovely marks. Thank you. InShaAllah :)



Acha baba now back to the update.



YES I AM SO HAPPY!! finally we see some admiration from Khushi's side! I mean from the start it was Arnav who admired her and all she had was hatred so this small admiration of hers was a huge step in itself towards a good marriage.I agree! I am quite loving the fact that you are taking baby steps to improve their relationship which gives a realistic essence to your story because if they would have jumped into a direct kiss or some sort of intimacy then it would be rather fairytalish then real. True that.



And this was the best part:

'How can someone be so kind and selfless? After everything he asked that question just to know if I'm comfortable!' That's right. Khushi is redeeming. I want the reader to see the real Khushi, the one she was and will be.


Because in every story and even the show Arnav is cruel and ruthless yet we love him because of his looks and the way he talks, his smile but in this case i would really love to appreciate the fact that you actually made an effort to show his internal beauty. I just love Arnav and want people to see the inner beauty he has. This is what makes the story quite unique that more than physical features, the internal goodness is being portrayed. And that too very well written Shaimaa. I'm glad that I could acheive this :D



You know i actually wished that when they woke up in the morning then Arnav's hand will be on her waist or something (Next chapter ;) )but this was really beautifully written. I actually loved the fact that Khushi could now see the real Arnav and what a gem of a person he is.



His concern, his care for her, for her family just makes me sigh in happiness that even after so much Khushi did wrong to him, he is still so positive and supportive. in any case Arnav would have been angry but here he was so patient, he let Khushi misunderstand him so that she would not get upset with her father. That is really touching, because he could have told her in the first place that he married her because her father wanted him to but he didnt do that. He waited calmly for the right time. I love the fact that you understand this story very much.



Can anyone not see the sheer beauty of these lines:

"Thank you so much. Even a son does not do what you're doing for us, beta."

"You called me beta then thanked me? You're just like my father, uncle."

It was so overwhelming to read that. Him treating her family as his. it is just so wonderful. Yes, it is.

And my oh my was i not blushing at this:

As Khushi moved comfortably in his arms still sniffling lost in her childhood's memories, her breath fanned on Arnav's neck causing a sensual torturing feeling inside him that he arched back to feel her breath more. Get a grip, Raizaada! It's not the right time for such thoughts. He was sure that Khushi was ignorant to her innocent actions' effects on him, that if she were aware of their position in the first place,


Even is such an emotional situation he made me blush. She was actually sitting on his lap? *Haye maar daala Shaimaa!* I really tried to write it well, and I'm happy I could do this.



All in all what i loved the most about this chapter was that it portrayed the purity in Arnav's heart and it showed what a gentleman he was. I am actually very impressed with your storyline Shaimaa because you are not dragging the story one least bit. In the start i was scared to read this story because i thought that throughout misunderstandings may continue and i wont be able to bear Arnav being ill treated No, he does NOT deserve that a little bit! I don't want to be unfair to any character especailly Arnav. but no i was wrong. And i am more than glad to be wrong because thsi story is moving at a perfect phase.

Her repentance is the best part.

Would love to see a naughty Arnav in the future and would love to see Khushi putting an effort to bring romance in their married life. So many hopes!! She will, and a naughty Arnav? Not soon, I guess!


Okay i think my comment is getting longer than your update! So i should really stop before you sleep reading my comment. Not at all, I can free myself just to read your comments :)

So thanks for pm baby and will wait for your update.


All the best and do well. Make us proud.


Take care
Kajol

Thank you so much, Kajol. Love your comments.
Take care you too and do well,
Shaimaa

Aww they were pulling each others leg now that's cute

Khushi is seeing and appreciating Arnav as she can clearly see how good he truly is no wonder she wants to do something for him

Nice SS

Arnav os such s cute husband

Beautiful update

Read all the chapters in one go.
Really gripped on this story.
From the beginning i had a feeling that Shashi was sick of some sort and thats why they were in a hurry.
Khushi's behaviour was well understood.
Poor Arnav, she blamed him despite him not being at fault.
Aww... Priya's innocent question... "When will Mami be pregnant?"
Glad Garima told Khushi that it was them who pushed the wedding and Arnav wasn't at fault.
At least now Khushi is putting in the effort to make their relationship work.

Hiii..
M a new addition to ur readers..

I really likd ur concept...
Its a nice story...

Khushi still being a teen is stubborn wow hw well u executed her character...

Arnav being mature one.. Handle all so well ..
Its a very beautiful story...

Nice to read a good piece of work...

hi,