ArShi SS: Forced Marriage ~Chapter12 Page 128 THREAD2 LINK PG1

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dialuvarshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

nice update.interesting.pls be updating soon .cant wait to read more

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zupi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

woah tbis is effin awespme

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Suchi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Great.. Hope Khushi is enough sensible person not to hurt or judge people without thinking..

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gifttag

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Great start. Loved the chapter. Beautifully written. You penned down a young girls emotions when she is thinking this is the end of her dreams and world really well.

Arnav came accross as if he has seen Khushi before although he does't know her he wants her.

Anjali seems really sweet and nani seems quite supportive, Khushi can always continue with her education after the wedding.
She just needs to speak to Arnav about it and I am sure he isn't going to mind, as for now wedding is going ahead. How come Khushi thinks Arnav wears glasses did't she look at him?

Will be waiting for the next chapter.
Thanks for the PM.

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lala rukh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

aww its more than awesome...great update...loved it

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faree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

awesome love the way you portray khus's feeling very realistic, i am sure soon she going to change her mind when she started living with arnav and understand him fully. i have this feeling that arnav is behind all this and he knows her very well.

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riafna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Oh ho I want to read next chapters too. She didn't even leave a glance towards him . Arnav noticed her tone .
Khushi why she is not ready? Why she is not thinkin from her parents Pov? Why not her parents thinking from Khushi's pov Why?
Thanks for pm. Superb starting