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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

wow kriya's dance was beautifully penned down!!!

while reading i really felt that i watched shakti di aka kriya perform

in the first i was completely confused then later i understood..

missed ur works

welcome back

love ur works!!!

yeah kriya's emotions depicted really well!!

loved it 😃

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---Priya---

@---Priya---

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Deetha what made me enter was the title of this OS! For once I thought the final good bye was coming from you 😲 next time please make sure we don't get shocks after seeing your titles 😆

Coming to your writing, it was brilliant!!! Short but yet an awesome one... I have always loved the bond kriya and swayam share and reading your OS today made me remember few of their scenes 😳

Kriya has always had a good understanding friend in swayam, and I love the way how you have pens down that their friendship is still continuing even if she is staying away from the others!!!

I dono why but this dialogue was the best for me in the entire OS

"chill wo tumhareliye nahi tha "she chuckled making him grin and swayam hugged her tight for once!

Loved this beautiful OS 😳 this is the first KR related writing I read and I loved it!!

Edited by ---Priya--- - 12 years ago

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Namrata Jadhav

@nj_SRKholic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

weneva i read ur os's regarding kriya's comeback i feel happy.. but this one made me cry.. d song selection was awesumest..!!

update soon so dat v can read n review it..!!

n ha welcome back..!! 🤗

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Aarushi Gupta

@cool_star14

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

this os made me cry..
i loved d song selection ...
update soon

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d3_rox

@d3_rox

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

I was soo happy seeing ur PM...

I liked the story...

I liked the way u portrayedKriya's frndship wid Swaron!!!:):)

But I really don't like sad endings on kriyaansh...but I can't deny the fact tht always there is no happy ending...

Thanx 4 the PM n keep writing...love to read ur works!!:):)

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

deetha u gave a title i such a way that i got a big blow heart attack...
either change the title or anything ... finally u are back with a new os/ff...
that was really good... and great it is...

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Khan se maru yeah bolo sedhe ya ulta..Hear I was shocked seeing the title..Aaaj coll jke aayi aur dekhun tho kya dekhu...

Well its beautiful..
I'm rreally not a big fan of Kriya and Swayam for my very own resons but this OS did end the loop holes to which I didnt cherish their friendship ever..
You did change my mind :)'
Kuddos

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esha

@ArShaAngels

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Awesome os di..!!

just loved the way u described her every move..!!

n Welcome back...really happy to see u writing again..😃 😃

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

sees like you are damn frustrated

I know.. its not necessary for kriyaansh to happen atlast 😳

so won't ask for next installment...

loved the way she danced.. so serene n calm 😊

did'nt even talk with gang except greetings...

maybe she consider only swayam as her frnd... 😛

who already know about her whereabouts..

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DocSNair

@Mukthaa

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Nice concept...
Only swayam knows abt kriyas sudden exit...their frndship is so.strong...
I love kriyaam even more than kriyaansh...
So loved this story a lot eventhough there is no kriyaansh reunion

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