||~Something About You~||#12 *COMPLETED*

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#281

Wow that was quite a intense, mind blowing and brilliant update.

The update was written exceptionally well and from start to finish a brilliant read.

Thank god Aman did the back ground check and found out Shyam and Karan were related.

Finally Lavanya had the decency to make the call and Arnav know it was her straight away,

Wow the Arnav and Rohan conversation in the car regarding Devi Maiya was quite intense, love the reason Rohan gave to Arnav to why he was praying.

I don't think I have even been so happy to see Karan and Shyam being beaten up to a pulp and Shyam being a pathetic man actually blamed Karan.

Wow, the scene where Arnav finally saw Khushi was so heart breaking and painful, it actually bought a tear to my eye, especially the part where he begged and pleaded with God.

The following line made me cry more, Precap: (Perhaps the very last one)

Wow the pre cap was absolutely brilliant and fantastic, finally Arnav confronting Lavanya and telling her to stay away from Khushi.

Loved the update and eager to read more,

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM,

Also a special thank you to Sami, for encouraging you to continue to write this phenomenal and mind blowing story xx

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#282

That was an awesome update
Pls continue soon
Thanx

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#283

i felt like my breath had stopped reading this update

thank god they found her...

there was so much rage in arnav and rohan s eye when they were beating karan and shyam..

the look on arnav s face seeing her lifeless..

that was shattering..

i really can t imagine khuhsi or arnav in that states..

mind blowing update 👏 👏 👏 👏

update the next soon dear...

lavanya is so not gonna be spared..it was obvious his reaction...

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sammymas

@sammymas

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#284

read two chapter n a go...amazing work...one was packed up with emotions and other with thriller actions.

Good work, plz dont say its ending 😲

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#285

🤢
Too upset to form words hun...
Khushi was bleeding????
As in did they do summat to her..???
This was a very sad update for me esp cause you wrote that it might be the last precap...
Please... Just... Please

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#286

You heard my plea!!! YAYYY! Lavanya kashyap will never show her face to khushi, that's all I wanted! Oh I'm so happy. Despite this being a very emotional chapter, I couldn't stop feeling happy, for khushi will be fine, and so will be arnav, and rohan too.

have work in the morning, sorry for the short comment.

love
Sonia

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RealityTruth

@RealityTruth

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#287

Mindblowing updates depicting the emotions/pains of each person related to Khushi and also how Arnav has been feeling.. I never suspected these reasoning for Arnav's fears for not going out in search of khushi and staying in her room in Nikunj because he wanted to support the people whom she loved most and didn't want to see Khushi in some disturbed state, and also people forgetting to notify him if Khushi returned back, as he felt according to others he is no one to Khushi.. The whole chapter is beautifully written. Hats off to you.

Arnav had tried to control on his anger while bashing up Shyam as soon as he remembered Rohan's words that Khushi had left him for his own good. - ..she's afraid for you & what you become when you get so dementedly angry!.."

Arnav prayed to God to keep Khushi safe and negotiated her life with his life in a typical business way 😊.. He did restore his faith in the God - who has all the powers to keep his angel safe.. and then he also remembered Khushi's words --- ..maybe that day, you'll have your faith back.. Par afsos ki baat hain, jab apko yeh ehsaas hoga, tabb yeh dekhne ke liye hum waha nahi honge.."

I hope with this incidence, Arnav realizes the importance of marriage and that he was on the verge of losing his Khushi if they hadn't found her, and what importance she plays in his life..

I'm sure Rohan has already seen the glimpses of Arnav's love/care for Khushi in Arnav's eyes and he wouldn't object to their relationship provided Arnav marries Khushi..I am presuming that Arnav's first step is to propose Khushi for marriage as soon as she opens her eyes and sees him..

Looking forward for a short sequel to this which can cover their happy life after marriage.. I hope you will not disappoint the readers with respect to their requests on the sequel.

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cheval

@cheval

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#288

yes yes yes mindblowing i love it dear

oh thanks they found kushi shyam n karan needs a gud punish

as for lavanya i hope the family followed them n heard the convo ...

cant wait for next :)

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733619

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#289

Amazing update. Please let Khushi be ok.

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rainyday3000

@rainyday3000

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#290

I felt like punching lavanya...she is not worth beig a friend...I had tears in my eyes when I red Rohan n Arnav's conversation in the car n Rohan punching Karan and Arnav punching Shyam was awesome I myself wanted to do that...I hope khushi will be ok (what m I saying she is the heroine of this FF ofcourse she is going to be ok)...the precap was awesome...Arnav is right La better stay away from khushi...can't wait for 77...awesome update...as usual very well written!!! :)