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Posted: 12 years ago
Fari di
it was a brilliant update
though i am a little worried for khusi bt i knw vry wel dat arnav wil cme n save her...
I jz want to SAY that i love SAY n also i want to SAY dat plz update SAY soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
khushi be safe...arnav is coming...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aha!

They know its lavanya!!! B**ch gona get screwed over!

I'm definitely sure that Arnav is going to save khushi!!!

Awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
Goodness! Karan Is ACTUALLY involved? I swear I did not see that coming. Despite the signals arnav kept giving out, I didn't think karan to be involved till the scene came where he actually entered that creepy house and stepped into khushi's view. That was a shock, and I read that scene three times to get used to the creepy sting both those morons set running inside me. SHYAM and KARAN :@ I am serious farah, if you don't order arnav to kill those kuttas, I will!

Now the good part, I cannot tell you how proud I felt of khushi when she declared herself a murderer's daughter. That scene was a surprise too, I could never have imagined to have khushi use that fact to such brilliance, she wasnt emotional about It, she wasnt affected, but it was a smart move and Im glad she made it when she had the time.

Arnav and rohan, oh of course rohan still thinks arnav isn't worth his sister, and I think he is right, but arnav is right for his sister and he will accept that openly soon too, he will have no other choice. And because these two strong men, who love khushi the most In the entire world, have joined forces, I'm sure she will be fine now.

p.s. I don't know what you plan to do about lavanya, I just have one request, I don't ever, EVER want khushi to see lavanya again, NEVER, Lavanya doesnt deserve It, not one bit. And arnav can do whatever he wants to, to destroy that cheap bi*** but she should never show her face to khushi. THE RICH SPOILT SELFISH LOW PATHETIC BRAT, she doesnt deserve anything, my bloodied boiling.

love
sonia
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read parts 74 and 75 together. I really did not forsee so much happening. Thought this FF will have a smooth end. But I am loving this part. Please make sure nothing happens to Kushi and Arnav finds her before it is too late. This time I really really cannot wait for the next update to be posted.
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Posted: 12 years ago
i hope rohan and akash get their turns on karan this time.. they had wished for it after the party attack and as for shyam.. tere to arnavji achar banayenge..haha!😈

as for la, i wouldnt blame her much.. you know khushi is equally responsible for making her that way.. khushi had always given up for her. and i guess la put a tantrum just to make her do that, but she did not know things would go so drastic!
Edited by ziya-farhannish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
A HEARTIEST CONGRATULATIONS FOR THE NEW THREAD TOTALLY WORTH IT


now the update what can I say from the beginning till end it was a paisawasool even though I didnt spent a single penny on it pr really... Farah if someone ask me to give my top ten fav FF's its surely gonna make it in 1st five for sure as its totally worth it... I just loved the update... When he said ''Red I want to be in every frame of ur life n i want u to b in every frame of mine... Tm wapis ajao!'' oh the helplessness made my eyes welled up... So Rohan told him y Khushi left him good but wht did he said was right to be said by a brother... Oh god so Shyam is tht Karran's czn cheapos... Hate them to the very core of my heart... OMG so this plan was long made by them to kidnap her and the words Karan used cheee pathetic... Rophies so they planned to drug her and then what not... Poor Khushi felt so sooo bad for her Allah her ladki ko aisi musibat sy bachay Ameen... I want to punch those son of b*ches so hard tht they forget who they were... Hai Khushi is bleeding so much u guys just wait here and u will pay for wht u did to Rohan's bachchi and Arnav's red... Believe me I m gonna love the next update when u will get punched to plup by a protective brother and possessive n extra protective lover... Farah show them be beaten up till they cant become father in this life time... Waisay bhi their children would prefer to not be born then having such characterless pathetic fathers ewww how bad does it sound for guys like them to b called something as precious as father... La itni jaldi khayal a gya batanay ka thodi dair aur self pity krti thoda aur jhola jhoolti arram sy call krti takay tmhari best frnd mar hi jati tmhari rah ka sab sy bada kanta jis k niklnay k baad bhi tmhain Arnav nahi milna tha n its good tht Arnav recognised her voice... I really hate her too but not more than those leechers... Awesome update.. Loved it
Edited by -Farwa_Ibrahim- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
very excited n waiting 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi farah,i m your new reader.

from two days i m continuously reading this ff.
ya i have completed reading all 75 parts in
just two days.
can you believe this??😆
i also skipped yesterday's dinner
just to complete this ff by reasoning
my mom that i m not feeling well and
i m not hungry which was not a lie,
i was so engrossed and hooked by this ff
that my appetite just vanished.
and atlas yesterday i completed reading all parts.

i must say that you are a fabulous writer.👏👏
you are a kind of writer who can
keep the readers glued to their stories.
and i m one of that reader.😊

talking about this ff ,i want to say
so many things but i m totally speechless.
but i will try to say something.


first thing i want to say about this ff is,the characters.
through out the ff you have kept the characters strong.
i hope you understand what i want to say,
you see i m not good with words as you are.
for example in many ff/ss the character
of arnav starts with with full of arrogance,
rudeness and what not and after some
updates when he falls in love
he starts doing all foolish things like
a love struck puppy ,which i hate the most.
i mean its not possible for anyone to undergo
such a big change.
a person can start feeling different due to
something or someone and do things
which he/she had never done
but a 180 degree change is not possible.
same you have shown in your ff.
arnav had started feeling different due to
khushi and also done something out of his zone for her but he has not shown
a drastic change in his character
and that is what i love the most about this ff.
i hope you understand what
i m trying to say here as i said i m not good with words.

some other things are
*how you describe arnav's features like his lips.😉
i can make out that you are a big fan or him.😆
*the endearment RED by which arnav calls khushi,
oh i just love it .
its so unique
*the way khushi never gives on arnav
*how arnav always make khushi understand about everything keeping his demons at bay.
and like this their are so many things i like about this ff


all in all i love everything about this ff which i cant put in words.
i can just say good job.
👏

plss continue soon i m worried about khushi though i know our belovedarnav will save her.😆




Love!!!


Edited by sphobic - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved this chap Farah👏
Arnav and Rohan's convo in Khushi's room was 👏👏 The two men and their love towards her was superbly written...Loved that...😃
Shyam and Karan are Cousins😲Two evils joined hand against Khushi😡
Loved Khushi's mastermind of running into a room and locked her..Hope she is safe till Arnav reaches her😕
Finally lavanya called up and told him...*sigh*
So awesome chap...waiting for the next to see Arnav saving his Red😃

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