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Akshita Taneja

@AkshitaWrites.

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

I love each n evry line of the os , it is very very touching but i wish i could there was the scene where sharon n the gang say sorry to taani holding their ears that would be like a dream come true .. lol but coming on a serious note ( rare fr me ;) lol) the os was very nice ... dont stop Pming me i would love to read more stories of yours

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Akanksha Singh

@-ChaHHat-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

AwEsoMe... 😊😊😊

👏 SupErB 👏

I loVe evEry Bit of It

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Ankita

@ankita_95

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

awsm os.. loved it.. perfect ending happyily ever after waali ..

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Sneha

@Mohit_monaya

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

it was soo amazingg! loved it =)

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parudTRsandhir

@parudTRsandhir

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Mind blowing os
loved it to the core...
Thank u so much 4 d pm😊 😊

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aishapie

@aishapie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Awsome os...u hav done a grt job.
thanx for pm.

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aparajita

@aparabosecarmel

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

bohot hi achha os tha
awesome
loved it
everyone's feelings were described by heart

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Swati Singh

@...Jannat...

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: katie_vd4evr
nice one loved it you have done a nice job :)

thanks..😊

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Swati Singh

@...Jannat...

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: sweet_angel09
Wow...awesome os
luvd it... 😳

thank u

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Swati Singh

@...Jannat...

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Hasan
Amazing work done...
I loved each and every line...
SwaRon and rey's guilt..
Their pain..
Taani's pain...
God!! She was so hurt...
Rey was missing her so much..
Both of them were lonely without each other...
Loved the way you presented the flashback..
That was really very good...

aww thank you so much..ayesha

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