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Chapter 30 A

The party had to be the way was is it no? The Chaturvedi's are not small fish after all. God the way you described the dress, I wish I was not as chubby as I am only to wear something like that. The necklace is something Khushi loved and will Arnav recognize it? Will he put two and two together when it comes to Shaan and Khushi? It is altogether another matter how he reacted to her identity being revealed.

I agree with KK's explanation Khushi wanted to do a few things before she moved to Ambrosia and it has not lied but has chosen what to reveal. The dance or the lack of it spoke so much with its tension

PS - Who is this new Khalnayak? Or am I being unfair by branding him so?

Chapter 30 B

Never been kissed - title me no like as it is a Drew Barryomore movie but guess you have you reasons for choosing to name your chapter so.

Khushi and Arnav kissed but that brings out many issues, both are insanely attracted to each other and have a lot of baggage, I am not sure if they are dealing with it in the right way. I can understand the turmoil, Khushi's more than Arnav's it is difficult to deal with emotions that are that strong and change a lot of things.

Shaan the guy deserves his happiness (pun intended) just not Khushi, not because she has to belong to Arnav, only because Khushi does not love Shaan. Pretending to love someone is far more damaging than not loving the person.

Chapter 31

This story is Labyrinthine indeed, coming to think of it, that is what makes it so damn interesting.

So it is back to Mr Raizada now...tut tut Khushi, did not expect this from you, they are so deep into this and funny part is they are aware and still they are not

Let me get a few things straight -

Arnav now knows Khushi is Shaan's girlfriend

Khushi is not aware Arnav and Shaan are cousins

Shaan is not aware Khushi works for RE and the Arnav-Khushi connection is something out of the question

PS - Humera a detective giri, never stops I guess

Chapter 32

That was such a comforting update and I am so happy you wrote this, women just drag their feet through life for every reason except themselves. I am so content with Anjali's decision to divorce SMJ, it was done in the best way possible, clinical and clean. This amputation did leave scars but nothing that cannot be tolerated.

The Raizada siblings are formidable and me likes it

Chapter 33

I really liked the way Humera told Khushi the details and in a way glad Khushi approached her for the details, now what she makes of it is yet to be seen.

So Shaan is visiting and is clueless about what may happen he thinks Khushi is so eager to meet him and is in for a rude shock. But I do feel Shaan should be told the truth and fact the bloke needs the truth for he deserves someone good too.

Arnav...Arnav...Arnav...dude...

Chapter 34

I don't know what Arnav was thinking showing up like that at Khushi's place but he has his reasons I guess. I was relieved to know Khushi was going to end it with Shaan but him and herself out of the misery.

The first thing that I did was exhale deeply, now all concerned in this triangle know about the other. It was unfortunate for Shaan to be witness to the passionate kiss but truth does not ease the pain in any way that is life.

Poor Shaan, really feel sorry for the guy

Chapter 35

Shit just hit the fan did it not?

God this was the reaction we expected form Shaan, he loses his girl to his cousin and that can hurt. He is forced to be loyal to his cousin for everything that the Raizada family has done to him but this wound runs deep and may just strain relationships to a great extent. He is not jinxed like he thinks he is, life may have something better in store for him, even if he thinks Khushi is the best for him. Shaan was not fair to both Arnav and Khushi, he is hurt alright but he is far from fair, knowing all that there is to know in the current situation.

Poor Khushi, she was not wrong at all...desperate at the hands of her feelings, she did not want to hurt anyone and the way it happened, certainly not. She was fond of Shaan so it would be devastating for her too.

Shaan is a sore loser is he not, the parting shot to Arnav was so uncalled for and below the belt, he lost a chunk of sympathy for uttering those words alone.

Chapter 36

KK and Madhu are being unfair to a great extent, I accept the fact they liked Shaan and saw in him an ideal life partner for their girl. They are missing the most important point here; the girl in question does not want to marry that guy. Madhu is being hostile almost and how can she judge for Khushi, it is not done and I and saying this given the fact she helped raise Khushi.

I am not able to think beyond the shredded paper pieces he gave to her, good this has to be by far the most redeeming action a guy in love can do to the girl he loves. If it affects us to this extent, imagine Khushi. I thought the whole thing reeked of sincerity and not romance, it was asking for the past to be in the past and pave the way for a new beginning...

I hope the desired solution they arrive at appeals to all concerned, us readers included.

Chapter 37

Neil is being unfair here, I hope he gets off his high horse and takes a practical look at the situation.

Khushi wanted to end things with Shaan - fact

Shaan sensed the fact things were not going on well with Khushi, something he admitted - fact

Khushi was attracted to Arnav and was clueless about the Arnav-Shaan connection - fact

Shaan did not know that his cousin was attracted to his girlfriend in the same way Arnav did not know Khushi was Shaan's girlfriend - fact

So Neil and Shaan should not act like they have been wronged and give Arnav a break. He does care for them and the line about the family getting smaller goes to show how petty they really are. How could a girl come and end years of camaraderie and affection among brothers. I would say shame on Shaan and Neil for their attitude, I no longer feel bad for Shaan.

The chance meeting with Lavanya at the gym may just get the ball rolling; the Chaturvedi's have a few enemies after all. Rudra had better widen his watch; he should be like the lion in the jungle take a step back to access the enemy before attacking.

The contact Lavanya refers to, is it the same guy at the party? Me thinks it is, will wait to read more.

Chapter 38

This song is a favourite and by a lyrist I admire, yes this Silsila will definitely be a beautiful one. I loved the way you brought about their meeting in the office as well as the apartment. This made it special and am sure brought a smile on every readers face, mine included. There is something about two people finding each other, not the romance the coming together to be happy with each other. The love will ebb and flow now...