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starsarun

@starsarun

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#731

Pehle mein batana chahoongi ke 'Mine was 101th like' :p :p :D
I knew it. When Arnav told Khushi that they were going to his apartment. Me too wondered about the paintings. At end they too came out. I felt Sorry for Shaantanu! :( But mine thinking is that Everything happen in our life is for good!! May be Shaan will get his better half soon.
One thing May be I forgot, Khushi ko pata hai that Arnav is a divorcee?!
Shaan's last line was true... If Arnav wanted to hold Khushi then he should but at right place in a right way. Not tight, it will be sufficated and not loose too, it will...
Take care.. :)

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desire_20

@desire_20

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#732

Great writer and great story! Just read it all and its amazing!

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Farah008

@Farah008

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#733

Awesome update...Shaan's feelings were very well portrayed

But I really feel anger towards Khushi, whatever maybe the situation she should have had the spine to speak up to Shaan without procrastinating her decision given that she had been thinking about for a long period of time, I don't know of it is right but being on Shaan's position I feel she had bee using him as a pawn to avoid the questions of her family...Though the event were unplanned the way which Shaan had to get to know of this was rude coz nothing would be more painful than a rejection thrown at one's face so blatantly.

Just coz Khushi is a protagonist I don't feel the need to support her actions,she, coz if it had been for her timely action Shaan's heartbreak would have been less intense, though I'm not sure if it would have coz either way he would have lost her, but the way he got to know about this is sort of harsh.

I understand this is how the story progresses but it just my thoughts...no offense meant...😆
it's just my fingers were itching to put my thoughts into words and I thought why not just share it...

Your writings are unique and I'm totally in love with them...keep writing.👏

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#734

The entire revelation to shaan pov was ugly.. witnessing Arnav and Khushi in passionate kiss would be his ' chap chuka hua "moment for a while.His gratitude towards Arnav and family was more glaring making him give up on fight when all he needed to feel was cheated.My heart went out for him.Even though he handled it well in calm sort of manner ,I can only imagine what storm must be ranging inside him.

Hope he gets his happiness soon.

My interest piqued with his departing words.." his advice to not screw up this time to Arnav..so what actually happened in past?eager..to know

After shaan,Arnav and Khushi have to face each other..waiting for the confrontation...hope to get some answers ;)

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ranjanatripathi

@ranjanatripathi

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#735

An audience to witness the KISS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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ranjanatripathi

@ranjanatripathi

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#736

Loved both the updates...
Did not like the way things got revealed to Shaan since that is not how Khushi had planned...but they got carried away!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Shaan's reaction was quite calm...probably he knew that Khushi was not as involved as him yet it brought heartbreak...
Khushi probably is more guilty of the way things got out...and his words have hurt her!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved Arnav's concern for her when he first says that he is with her in all this...secondly after Shaan's outburst when Khushi is holding back her sob ...all he wants to do is comfort her!!!!!!!!
Wonder how their relationship moves ahead!!!!!!!!!!

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Pavina

@Pavina

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#737

poor shaan didnt deserve this...but what happend cat b changed..he is bound to be superupset abt this fact...he had loved her...and the other person was his cousin...so it gets a lot complcated...
but he was mature enugh to have blasted...he did the right thing...
i guess now arnav has to answer khushi for the potrait...
lovely twist

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shopaholicloves

@shopaholicloves

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#738

things are so complicated..

i feel bad for khushi..she had waited all this time, to tell shaan the truth..and it had to happen this way..poor she..

and off course shantanu..too bad things didnt work out for him..

but i have to say yaar you are soo amazing..i feel whatever i'll say would be less..all the three kisses that they have shared till now..OMG! they were so well written..and even otherwise you write soo well..i just wonder why it took me soo long to come across your work!

and soo much to look forward to..arnav's past, khushi's decision and also as to why khushi's brother didn't liked shaan and what is it that he wants..phew!

m soo hooked to this one..update real soon!!

please please.