I am amazed by the whole description of their state that you have so eloquently put Chaitu! You actually make it look like ... like ...a movie with images having three dimensional form or appearance... in addition to the description of ways the situation is being regarded! The whole scene gets etched into the mind ...And i guess this is one more thing that makes L3 different from IMTBE... You are able to draw that fine difference in the genre making them appear as if they are written by 2 different writers altogether! I applaud you for being to pull that .. that way! :)
Now coming to the update! I guess the title gave it away ... and so i kinda knew what i will be reading soon!
As much as i was taking delight in the amazing kiss .. i did not let myself get carried off... as i knew the bubble was soon to burst from her end! and it did! *sigh* and what must have triggered it .. but the very necklace itself! that was a striking resemblance of Khushi herself! being sought by one... but pursued by someone else finally...
Now whos sought and who finally pursued her .. i let you reveal that to us .. in time! :)
And what happened after that... well i am really tired of her diffidence and procrastination of things! I know things cannot be spoken over the phone this way ... which will only show lack of demeanor from her end! but if not everything she can surely drop in some hints .. which otherwise is not doing any good ... both to her as well as Shantanu! Why make him get hopeful of an impossible future with her?
She will not realize this now... but later .. will have to face the consequence of this dawdling .. *sigh* this is beginning to irk me .. seriously! hey if i can give you credit for making a lovely scene appear real through your words .. its applies the same for a agitating scene evoking real feelings with same fervor! cant i? :) so you can imagine my frustration level now! ...
Shantanu on the other hand! i really do not know what to make outta him! either he is too positive in life or its just that he wants to push himself to the max to make her give in to him knowing that she is still unsure about them(umm i hope he is aware of that atleast!)
Seriously .. this much of ignorance?
If this is want she wants ... the can you make this Shantanu guy land in India the very next day? pls? pretty pls!?
Okie! Arnav! This guy was already lost ... with whatever past he had ... and this woman was only providing him reasons in ways more than 1 to get lost all the more! he he he ... 1st her presence itself .. the invisible strings that she held him with...and now running away after sharing that scintillating kiss! He will surely go mad!
Okie i was pinning my hopes that the necklace will give away clues ... but nope! Our man's hormonal level was too high for his senses and brain to function normally!! and what does he do? he flips away the very thing with his mouth.. to make way for him to her bare skin! what an irony! *sigh*
Alright! i know Chaitu...ki you know what you are doing! and i am sure you have it all planned! but it is at times as this you know that i feel like pulling my hair apart and want to try and knock some senses outta them!
Okie .. lets see what the next one has in store!
Thanks baby! that was well written!
okie i need some caffeine now to help me through the day ..after the above bhadaas ha ha ha
Edited by LeenaRocks - 12 years ago