YOU ARE MY HEARTBEAT(2) *thread3*ch.52 page 141

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Nishtha Relan

@Nishtha.Relan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#811

Awww,
My lovely pyaari di...
The update was dammm...
Awesome
Cute
Birthday boy
Sad
Excited
Hurt
Cool
Mindblowing
Outstanding
Out of the world
My jeevika struggling in pain
Viren so supportive
Love
Waky waky zaaine
I hate skul but my zaaine is like viren who loves skulll hehe
Lovely
Di... Thanks for the update just read the previous chapter and here comes a mail that u hve a private message from kays94 hurraay so excited one more to read and one more to comment thanks di...
My zaaine's birthday and both the handsome hunk r leaving my jeevika aww poor jeevika but dont worry i know their will be suspence and they will celebrate the bday really nicely ... Cant wait eagerly waiting for the update... Muwahhh... Di i love uuu tons and tons .. The best writer ever and forever...!!!

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Madhu

@MADHU.BARUN

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#812

Res

Unres!

Im so sorry for not unresing soon, got stuck up

Coming to the updates they are fabulous like always, nothing new

Viren jeevika coming to new home with zaine,packing,unpacking everything seems so real, that's the way we do, pulling each others legs and all. Such alovely theme. The getting ready of nursery, zaine not even eating it but preparing it. Its all so perfect. The reunion sounds exciting but the thought of leaving zaine not only made him cry but also me, loved it. Finally his birthday. Jeevika remembering 5 years back moments was awesome and not to mention, the moment she realised about delivery and the way viren relaxed her everything was just si perfect.

So this story has only 9 updates😭

Why?? I thought moreee

Please write madamji...love this story as much as I love wfl!! Muaaahhh baby love youuu writeee real sooon ok?

Edited by MADHU.BARUN - 11 years ago

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Hajra

@-Haju-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#813

God it's my zaaine's birthday yayayayayayaya

He's 5 wow boy 😃

God the update was awesome😊

Loved the way you described Jeevika's fears 👏

Viren is always there for her 😳

The way he consoled her for beautiful

Hehe Viren teasing Jeevika on being slow😆

Lovely ending👏

Better continue soon girl

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Samia Sobti Tacker :D

@Asr-Ki-Sam

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#814

amazing!
Awww poor jeevs getting scared of labor pain :(
Idk y i have a feeling dat the lil baby vl be born on zaaine's bday :P
hope it vl
luved it
all the very best👍🏼
N wonderful kryanlicious siggy😳

Edited by Asr-Ki-Sam - 11 years ago

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#815

loveddd ittt... superr cutee updateee...zaaineee.. the cutesttt kid ever... keepp continuinggg, eager to read moreee

alll the besttt for ur examsss...

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--Iqra--

@--Iqra--

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#816

Ah, omg, the sig is gorgeous!! The update, was perfect. It had humour, and flashbacks and the birthday. And the way she was scared was so natural and cute. Loved it! Thanks for the PM! Good luck for exams!!

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Fairuz Maliha

@virikamaliha

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#817

Grt update...
Awww zaaine forget his because he was soo excited for his sis...
Love the virika part...
It was soo sweet jeevs want to spend time with viren and zaaine...
Update soon...
Best of luck for ur exms..

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shweta_14

@shweta_14

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#818

Lovely siggie ❤️

Thats a good one... But sad to know that its only 9 more :(

Poor Jeevika left all alone... Lol...

Looking forward to viren n jeevika celebrating zaaine's bday..

Good luck for your finals :)

Edited by shweta_14 - 11 years ago

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sumayyah

@sumayyah1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#819

superb
amazing
fantastic
just he best
cant wait for more
continue soon
thnx for the pm

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Ayesha

@--Ayesha--

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#820

Hayeiii d siggy
awesome creation muski lovely❤️

Awesomesttt update
awww she wanna just see her zaaine sleep
awwei jeevs scared yup rembember d graduadtion sooo much pain bt dis time everything sooo well im sure everything will b alright

Awww my baby Zaaine forgot his bday😆
he is soo cute i want him wth d excitment of his sister he forgot his bday zaaine❤️
lol poor jeevika both his boys leaving her alone :P
waiting for bday celebrationnn