taarey os:Lost love!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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**First I thought of making it a 2 shot while writing, but now I have decided to complete the same as 1 shot itself as am afraid it may lose its charm..**
And yea orginally the title was "Rediscovery of lost love.." and now changed to "Lost love!!"

So rest of the contents is as it follows...Hope you like it!!😊

Guys after watching yesterday's episode I felt something...
She was frustrated when she asked him..."Rey aap itne selfish kaise ho sakthe ho??" but his reply was bit irritating to me. I mean if I were at her place I would have been irritated to the core. Well after breakup I want Taani's character development to be like this...
And this shot is purely my version of taani should be after break up!

Taarey os: lost love..

Taani was sitting on the couch with her laptop switched on in front of her. Her hands were randomly moving over the keypad without any fixed destination. It was not that she didn't have any work to do. Well in contrary she had lots to do now. Everything had changed in these few months. She wasn't just the GS of the college rather the outstanding student of St.louis in academics. Her post as GS had given her good platform in managing events which helped her to grab an internship in event management after her college hours in a well renowned organisation. Her weekends always passed by taking dance classes at a private academy as she had already been doing it with Rey and she didn't want to leave it in the middle. She wanted to convince herself that she can manage it even without Rey. And ofcourse she passed her time in her favourite place her kitchen innovating new dishes and testing it with her kaka.

So many things were changed in these few months. Swayam and Sharon had finally realized their feelings for each other. They were officially a couple now. Since Sharon was her bhabhi now, she decided to clear her negative thoughts about Sharon and whenever possible stayed away from the couple to give them their personal space or in short to avoid any misunderstanding. She never wanted to place her brother in a situation where he may have to choose between Sharon and Taani.

If there was something else which had changed, Taani had improved her image in the college. As a responsible GS she made sure to explore all the hidden talents of students of St.Louis. She explored many new platforms for students to develop their skills. This helped her getting new buddies at the college and the students perspective of looking at Taani as a stalker or inefficient GS was completely changed now.

And yea one more or rather a bigger change in these few months was that, she started becoming stronger. She was no more a sentimental fool or in short she had finally got over her BREAK UP. Yes she made herself busy so that she had no time to cry or to think about him. Even in college she avoided him easily now. Her sweet and precious memories with Rey were finally fading away and they were no more taunting her when she met him. Now she wasn't angry with rey rather she had learnt to accept her fate.

Hey wait'What am I doing?? Well Taani was lost somewhere right?? Let us get back to that!

Her thought s were disturbed today. Her hands were casually wandering over her laptop keypad. She hardly dreamt that she would see this day in her life. Infact she had lost all hope of getting back her love.

She was sitting in the canteen sipping her morning tea browsing the morning paper.

"hey Taani! Whats up??" shouted the sports team and reached her.

"Hey guys! So howzz practice for football match going??" she asked casually passing them her snack with a smile fixed on her face.

"Taani we need some extra equipments and the here is the list." The team leader said and passed her a list.

Taani browsed it for a moment and'" Okay I can't promise you everything but yea I'll make sure'"

"Taani!..."

She stopped her sentence in the middle and turned around to find the owner of the voice. Ofcourse she can never forget this voice in her life but still she turned and the football team too turned.

"Er.. sorry for bothering you guys!" said Rey and hi-fived with the team members. Then he turned towards Taani.

"Hey Taani! He said plastering a warm smile on his face.

"Hey! Anything important" A smile crept on her face too. How much ever she could deny his smile never failed to bring a smile on her face too. But after so much of practice only now she learned the art of not getting affected by his charm. So she came to the point immediately and looked at him with her eyebrows raised.

"Taani I want to talk to you.." he looked at the gang around Taani and continued "Er..akele.." he said.

"okay fine will catch you later Taani! And yea if time permits join us for coffee" one of them said winking at her and she nodded yes with a smile. Rey looked at her with a question mark on his face!

"yea! Aapko kuch chahiye??"

"Haan nahi I mean kya hum kahi aur jaake baath kar sakthe hain???"

"Kyun??" she asked lifeless without any emotions.

"Please Taani"

She could sense pain in his voice and she couldn't accept it. She nodded her head saying yes.

"Fire exit!" he said

"NO!" she gave an instant reply. There were times when she frequently visited the fire exit to feel those eternal moments between them. But as time moved, she felt they had no value and stopped going there forever.

"Taani par'"

"No REY! My reply is final aur agar aapko vahin jaakar baath karna hai tho Am sorry am not coming there. And that's final!" she said straight looking at him.

"Okay projector room!" he said after taking a heavy breathe.

At projector room,

"Taani I just wanted to say'er..I mean hamare beech jo kuch bhi hua.."

"Rey plzz I don't want to talk about it!"

"We have to Taani!" he said holding her shoulders'"

"Not anymore!" she said tears on her eyes brimming ready to lose itself anytime. She tried to run away from there only to be blocked by Swaron near the door.

"Taani please listen to him.." said Sharon in a pleading voice.

"Haan Taani'Just give him a chance'" supported Swayam.

"Sorry bhai! Aap mujhe force nahi kar sakte!" she said looking at him straight.

"Par request tho kar saktha hoon!" he said holding her shoulders.

She went in and Rey told him the real reason for the breakup. Taani just couldn't believe herself. Tears were flowing in their eyes.

"Haan Taani sab kuch ek plan tha! Rey just wanted you to concentrate on your career. That's why he had to do this.." said Sharon with a lump on her throat.

Taani looked at him. Did he really do that just to make her strong. Her love which she adored once, her love which was her weak point once, the same love against which she was fighting so long or probably she is still fighting and trying to get over. Was all her efforts vain?? He still loved her. She remembered all those sleepless nights where she convinced her heart that he didn't love her and she had to get over.

She looked at him with pain in her eyes. "I am sorry Taani! I know you are hurt'Par tumse jyaada mei khud hurt tha iss process mein" she heard him say.

"Haan Taani sirf hum jaante hain ki yeh sab Rey ke liye kitna difficult tha!" supported Swayam.

"Taani am so sorry but the truth is I can't imagina a life a future without you! I'd be dead without you..And.."

"Rey!.." she placed her index finger on his lips. "Aap aise kyun bol rahe hain??"

A smile crept on his face. He could finally find his Taani. By the time the entire sports team and the dance team had reached there. He knelt down before her and asked her'

"Taani will you be my girlfriend once again??" he asked in the most romantic tone.

"Haan'par" he hugged her tightly without letting her complete her sentence. The entire crowd cheered for the couple and everyone congratulated her. Swayam hugged Taani and said that he was happy for her. She just delivered a silent smile to everyone. Soon she got a call from VP asking her to meet him. She excused herself and moved away. After college she went to her office where she was working as an intern. She couldn't concentrate on anything. She could find frequent texts from him saying "I love you", "Missing you", "Where are you" but the difference was she felt odd seeing them. She reached home quickly and sat before her laptop but her mind was occupied with all these thoughts.

How could things change all of a sudden?? This wasn't like flipping channels where you could change people and emotions with a simple press of a button. This was her emotions. The phase where she suffered all alone. A phase where Rey had his buddies with him to help him out but Taani...she was left all alone to learn to swim in a deep pool where she didn't even have a life jacket to give her assurance that she won't drown. And now all of a sudden how could everyone expect her to change. How can things be the same as it used to be before!

She closed her laptop and covered her head with her hands. Her thoughts were disturbed when her mobile rang. She took her mobile and found Rey's name flashing on it. Yes the name was REY! She had changed it from prince charming long back. She picked her mobile after a moment hesitation.

"Taani Taani Taani'" he shouted her name with love filled in his voice.

This was a routine when they were in a relationship. She used to blush like hell when he did that. But today it didn't bring any butterflies in her stomach.

"haan Rey!"

"Kya hua Taani?? Tum teek ho??"

"haan kyun??"

"nahi tumara voice kuch weird lagraha hai'"

She could lie to herself but not to him. He could easily make out that something was wrong so .. He knew her so perfectly. If not today , he would easily read her pain and discomfort in progressing the relationship once again. That can hurt him even more which she can't afford to. She took a heavy breathe. She knew what to do.

"Rey I want to meet you now."

"Mei bhi tumhe dekhne ke liye taras raha hoon sweetheart"

"Okay I'll be waiting. I need to talk to you'" she said and hung her mobile and looked at her wardrobe which used to carry her priced possession..."Rey's corner". And now it vacant like her heart!!

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So guys this is my version of strong she should be after break up. Ofcourse I want reunion of Taarey So guys plzzz hit like and comment...

And yea I wonder why Taani has no single friend in the show... man not fair! That's why I included the sports team for my satisfaction...And yea any constructive criticism is welcomed! And don't worry now Taani respects rey for his deed but still is the feeling same now?? Just wait and watch in the next shot!

**Sorry asI said before I had planned another shot..But now am stopping it here as a one shot..**

Love

Nithi😊

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shanya8 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res/UNRES

u know nahh i luv ur every work so again 1 word
PERFECT👏
Edited by shanya8 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome os.

Please continue this sooon.

M looking forward to reading your next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing concept...
loved this strong taani...
i really wanna see sm thng lyk ths in d show too...
thanx a lot for writing ths stry
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is sooo amazingg!
i already lovee it...obvious isnt it? 😆
but really, dis is so much more practical...
which is why i love it even more... ❤️
i loved the way u showed the contradicting feeling in taani...she being ost and so unsure bout what to do...
really looking forward to the convo between taarey...
and really love this side of taani...strong, confident...and esp the part where u said ki she gave space to swaron, and had so much keepin her occupied...i guess thats what most wuld do...
in short...loved it alott 😊
lookin forward to the next part...
update soon =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Frstly,thank u fr such a aswm blsm stry.I alwys wntd smtg lk tis.Nw cmg to d stry,Tani is strng-headed grl,i lv hr yaar! Truth is bn reveald by Rey,hr care at d moment she plcd hr indx fngr on hs painful stmnt ws stil evident.Bt d tngs r chngd 2!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing os..update soon..but b4 dat i want ur ff 2 b updated😆..waiting😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Resing For Now ... Will Edit In A While !
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Wow Dii Wow ... This was really amazing ... I'm actually speechless about the idea's you come up with
Like Really ... Every time I would Imagine Taani Finding Out The Truth, I would Always think That Taani would either Forgive Him and They Will Be Back To Normal TaaRey or Taani would Be Super Angry and Upset With Him But You Just Changed My Whole Perspective ... I Would Never Imagine It To Turn Out In Such A Way ...
But I Hope That Taani Stil Loves Rey ... I Mean In The Process Of Not Being Affected By Him, She Couldn't Have Just Stopped Loving Him Right?!
Well I Think It's About Trust ... If Rey Had Put His Trust On Taani, He Would Have Been Able To Explain Everything To Her ... Because Their Realtion Also Consists Of Taani and Her Emotions and Feelings Also
Okay Okay Going Wayyy Out Of Point But Yeah ! ... So I'm Wondering Now That What Will Taani Say To Rey ... I Hope Thry Don't Break Up Again ... Cause This Will Hit Rey Real Bad !
Anyways Dii ... Your Works Have Always Been Fantasic And Up To Mark So All I Know That I Can Expect Somethibg Super Interesting and Different From The Next Part Because You Will Always Suprise Me With Your Works ...
Can't Wait !
Edited by TaaReyD3_Neha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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uff thank god koi toh hai jo meri tarah sochta hai,,,even i have hated rey when he replied taani...kash yeh os sach hota .. :'(

awesome update..

update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing OS
loving this strong tani :)
Update soon!!!

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