Game of destiny- A KR ff ( CH 13 UPDATED)11.09.14

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Kanchi..

@Kanchi..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#381

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Unres

Superb update
Luvd it
Dat cockroach nd mouse wala scene was hilarious...
Amazingly written...
Ab lets see kria rey ke paas se key kaise leti hai...
Bxt part jaldi update karna...

Srry 4 commenting late...

Edited by Kanchi.. - 12 years ago

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#382

ress

unres

sowwie for d delay

awesomeee part👏👏

loveedd d cockroach scene very much🤣

well-written⭐️

continue soon😊

Edited by aishu3003 - 11 years ago

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#383

Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Cockroach scene n den FB of mouse was funn

Loved it

Kria gona get keys

Update Soon :)

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Sadaf Khalid

@sadafarsha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#384

Its awsum amazing

I luved it alooot

Kria ko yaad agaya thoda bohat

Its the starting now it will be more awsum

Cant w8 for next part

Plzzz update sooon and do pm me

Thanx for the pm

Edited by sadafarsha - 12 years ago

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#385

aweso me update...

am thinking like rohan ke saath ke relation mein there's a catch... :/

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#386

Nice update
rey love his brother so much
he is celebrating rohans birthday
n than cockroch wala scean was so cute
love kr moment

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#387

hmm good going yaar
amazing one
flow of story is superb
keep it up

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Anjori

@anjoriii

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#388

nice ... just thinking what will happen when kria will come to know the truth ...

waiting for the next part ...

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#389

rey went to a doctor because he is unable to sleep of nightmare and
doctor suggest him to visit another doctor and further he will take care...
and rey was decide how to take kriya to this party and that why called a friend and decide it...
and when he reach home kriya was scream because of cockroach and rey throw it way
and also told her there is a party of friend and good she remember some of his past...
and kriya is thinking how to stole the key from rey so that she can enter that room
and i think truth will be out... it get interest to read more...
do continue soon and pm me