SwaRon FF : Alpha's Territory | Chap 8 : Page 133 - Updated 14/12/2013

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: swaronlove001
wow veryy nic update

Thanks for commenting! 😃

I have noticed ke chota hi sahi but you comment regualary on my every update! Thanks for that.. 😊

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WhisperOfDreams

@WhisperOfDreams

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

oye Meri Miss Demanding Queen!!!

Well looks like eva after such a long wait someone goes away with her demands..!!😆

although I wont be talkin to u...I will pakka se comment on a few of ur FFs or SSs as they are so irresistible to ignore..so will do it just for myself and not u 😈

So coming to this UPDATE!!
it was FANTABULOUS!!

I luved it!! I mean everything I don really do alpha stories but I am likin it so far..!!
the Story of SwaRon in this is so cutely written!!
so our Sharon is a Strong gal...is more angry with swayam..should be!!

and swayam better have a good explanation for it!!

and ofc the end was also cool.!!

looks like will wait till next thrusday for this update

regards,

Reena!!

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Anindita Dhar

@AninditaSwaRon

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Yay
U updated
Simply loved it ..
Loved the fact that u didn't showed her as a
Weak girl :D
Just can't wait to read the next chapter

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: forevermine
oye Meri Miss Demanding Queen!!!
Well looks like eva after such a long wait someone goes away with her demands..!!😆
although I wont be talkin to u...I will pakka se comment on a few of ur FFs or SSs as they are so irresistible to ignore..so will do it just for myself and not u 😈
So coming to this UPDATE!!
it was FANTABULOUS!!
I luved it!! I mean everything I don really do alpha stories but I am likin it so far..!!
the Story of SwaRon in this is so cutely written!!
so our Sharon is a Strong gal...is more angry with swayam..should be!!
and swayam better have a good explanation for it!!
and ofc the end was also cool.!!
looks like will wait till next thrusday for this update
regards,
Reena!!

Reena! Kamini, you changed your name! I read entire comment thinking ke yeh mujhse kyun baat nahi karegi aur isse kese pata that i am demanding queen and this and then and in end i read your name, LOL! 🤣

Aww, naraz mat ho yaar.. ab tu bhi yeh karegi tu tujhe main aur sab main kya differenrce reh jayega! 😭 Please don't do this i am will not talk to you andolan! 😆

Thanks for the comment, mauh!!! 😃

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: AninditaSwaRon
Yay
U updated
Simply loved it ..
Loved the fact that u didn't showed her as a
Weak girl :D
Just can't wait to read the next chapter

Hahaha, i donnu why log mera update dekh ke itne khush kyun ho jatai hain! 😆

Thanks for the comment, Anindita! 😃

Of course Sharon ko weak dekhana yani uski insult karna.. baba main aisa nahi kar sakhti! 😳

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WhisperOfDreams

@WhisperOfDreams

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: -Marium-

Reena! Kamini, you changed your name! I read entire comment thinking ke yeh mujhse kyun baat nahi karegi aur isse kese pata that i am demanding queen and this and then and in end i read your name, LOL! 🤣

Aww, naraz mat ho yaar.. ab tu bhi yeh karegi tu tujhe main aur sab main kya differenrce reh jayega! 😭 Please don't do this i am will not talk to you andolan! 😆

Thanks for the comment, mauh!!! 😃

lol that's so hilarious...!! haan na...!! isn't it hwat!!😆

fir kya mujse tu hi baat nahi karti...so eva i will start d *i Am So Not Talkin To You* spree...!!! ur not invited!!!!

hehe ur welcome..it deserves comments dats y i did!!! mauh!!!

and ofc wanted to flaunt my new User Id as well!!😆

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Keira Marina

@km29

Explorer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Awesome yaar gud thinking & tks 4 d update

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nidhi

@nidhi1998

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

hey,

finally you updated

im in love with this ff

and in the way you write.

loved the way you showed

1) swayam's guilt, his concern

and his love for sharon.

2) sharon's pain, anger,

jealousy, and love for swayam.

i normally do not comment

much but after reading this chapter

i don't think that i could keep my hands

from commenting and appreciating.

nidhi

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zk456789

@zk456789

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Finally you updated after so long
The chapter was awesome as always do continue soon
Love that Sharon doesn't cry in the update like you say bahu type
She is strong want them to be mate officially