*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11

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Tanya

@tanya_vi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#211

Your sense of humor is applaudable!!! Very very nice update..looking forward to the next one.

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aashi12

@aashi12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

No wonder about their laughter at the end of the update!..

Only this 'crazzy' couple can end up in a situation as crazzy and humourous as this!

Waht an idea that you've potrayed such way! I just doubled wid laughter!

At first their sizzling chemistry and their passion unfurled.. And then came up the part where i cud *blush* and laugh at khushi's position when mR. Sharma xplained wat sort of bed it was!:D

and then his advice to arnav! And arnav was listening to him, before he realised tha he was ASR!;)

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Cynthia Abruzzo DeSiena

@cinthiann1758

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Posted: 12 years ago

#213

Wiwy,

Just fabulous! I was hysterical with these two! So cute loved when the bed showed its "features" and Arnav gets flustered. Kushi and the mirror, hysterical.🤣Great one and looking forward to more.

BTW thank you for more adjectives to describe our Arnav's body used your ripling one in Chapter 7!

👏

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ArnieBoyBarun

@ArnieBoyBarun

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#214

it was a wonderful update, the sudden motion of the bed and I loved the "function" of the mirror ha ha, khushi's anger and demand for "normal" bed. Poor sharmaji, first got such a customer. Loved it when ASR asked him "we did?, what crap?" It was an absolute enjoyment reading your update dear. Keep the good work up.👍🏼

Edited by KittenRose - 12 years ago

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#215

Awww hmmm 1st dhak dhak experience of Suhag-raat bed.

Loved the way they both laughed.

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vandu123

@vandu123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#216

Awesome update..

When sales man told khushi about details of the bed I was like🤣. Please update soon

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: aashi12
No wonder about their laughter at the end of the update!..

Only this 'crazzy' couple can end up in a situation as crazzy and humourous as this!

Waht an idea that you've potrayed such way! I just doubled wid laughter!

At first their sizzling chemistry and their passion unfurled.. And then came up the part where i cud *blush* and laugh at khushi's position when mR. Sharma xplained wat sort of bed it was!:D

and then his advice to arnav! And arnav was listening to him, before he realised tha he was ASR!;)

I am so happy I could make you laugh!😃 Planning a somewhat serious chapter 5 😆 Okay?

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: cinthiann1758
Wiwy,
Just fabulous! I was hysterical with these two! So cute loved when the bed showed its "features" and Arnav gets flustered. Kushi and the mirror, hysterical.🤣Great one and looking forward to more.

BTW thank you for more adjectives to describe our Arnav's body used your ripling one in Chapter 7!

👏

Chapter 7 already?!👏 I love you, Cyn! ❤️

Rippling muscles?😆 Okay will send you more if my grey cells can produce more!😃

You can use the SR bed too😆

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DurgaS

@DurgaS

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#219

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Will be back once I stop laughing

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Ah, finally, I am back again.

Wiwy, where do you get all these ideas? 😆 This is too good, hilarious. What a bed! 😆 Loved that rabba vey moment on the bed. 😳 The whole chapter very well written. Loved each and every line. Mr. Sharma is not only an expert in beds but also in girls! ASR is all ears for him. 😆 Thoroughly enjoyed the last scene in the car.

Well done Wiwy! 👍🏼

Edited by DurgaS - 12 years ago