Arshi SS: Opposites do not attract (Completed)

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Saraa

@..Saraa..

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#861

OMG... I read it again and that too unsuspectingly and then I reached the epilogue thats when I had the eureka moment...🤣

I have replied earlier also but kya kare couldnt help but comment again...

Hum acchi stories k appreciator jo tahare..🤣

Anyways, Shine Always.

-Saraa :)

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#862

Epilogue.

Have I told you that you are a genius?

The epilogue was just ...I am really at a loss of words. If reading the story made me appreciate your writing and left me in awe the epilogue has rendered me totally speechless and mesmerised. Your concept was just brilliant ...

Loved the bit about Arnav using emotional blackmail and being adept at it too..Shyam was just adorable in this story and I loved it, the image if him wondering how he got stuck with this drama queen wife...I always wanted to like him as I loved Abhas so I just kept picturing him and felt so happy.

Loved the way Anjali using her version of logic want to name her daughter after her brother and his wife...ha ha ha she is hysterical ...thanks to that Raakhi, Payal and she tie on Shyam, making her bua and according to norms and customs getting to name the baby, of course Payal is smart enough to know that she was not to be the preferred bua so steps back ...making Khushi the obvious choice...

I must applaud Khushi, very seamless and smartly naming the baby, knowing Anjali's regard for her by virtue of being her Chotey's wife and using that relationship effectively ...

Love the relationship and bond Mrs and Mr Raizada share, kept taking me back to that first wink and how far they have come, falling in love almost at first wink ..and all the drama and humour that brought them here ...now parents to be.

Loved how she knew about his plans for a second honeymoon, using her influence and friendship with Aman...am not surprised at all...

Loved a bold and forward thinking Payal, loved her taking the lead in the bedroom and ensuring an (s)exciting love life...the Bournvita milk ..ha ha ha and her introducing the chocolate to the bedroom...nice.

Maybe now she learns come foreign methods too...

Totally enjoyable and thrilling ...been a pleasure to read. Thanks for writing it .

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saakhi01

@saakhi01

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#863

🤣 🤣 It was soo much fun reading this ss.. Loved it... It was simply superb n awesome...

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chenis

@chenis

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#864

Hilarious story 😃

Enjoyed reading it .

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IamSwapnali

@IamSwapnali

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#865

awesome! loved it..

it was so hilarious! At one point I was laughing so loud that my husband started giving me weird looks, but I still couldn't stop myself.

It was great considering it was your first attempt at humor.

Some of the bits were just too good.. specially all of Arnav & Shyam's interactions.. because of Anjali's behavior.. Anjali is really really jhalli and I really felt for poor Shyam 😉

And that part when Khushi makes Arnav splutter the drink was good too..

Edited by ..Swapnali.. - 11 years ago

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#866

Hilarious and simply fabulous!! 😆

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deepikadhanu

@deepikadhanu

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#867

Just now came across this story. Read it in one go. Actually the title of the story attract me too read it. Loved it lol from khushi prank on arnav to end everything is awesome. Drama queen anjali and lovable shyam. Mama boy akash . Gosh akash father character lol:-P payali everything was awesome. Totally loved it:-)