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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: taarey1fan

congrats on second thread...

plzzz update soon...😊😊

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#52

Originally posted by: natali1999

Congrats on your second thread i made the banner for you last time i made another one for you here it is




For TanHa Lovers

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Originally posted by: nis_n

Congrats!!!

can't wait for next part
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Originally posted by: patie

congrats dea eagerly waiting fr ur update :-)

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Originally posted by: diyadawda13

Congrats on your second thread!

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Originally posted by: Dipu_taarey

wow...the second thread...

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CONGRATZ!!!!

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Originally posted by: u-me-aur-D3

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love u all 4 supporting me there u go next chapter...enjoy

CHAPTER-30

Early morning at taavicyam house

At 6 o' clock…taani was making tea for herself as Vicky went to meet neha….ar n ridz went to a hospital for an emergency n sw went for jogging

Taani was sitting on sofa enjoying her tea when door bell rings…she went n open door n found "REY"…both smile n looked at each other for a while

Taani-good morning

Rey smile fades n said-bas goodmorning mai yaha subah subah itne mehnat kar ke sw se chupte chupate aaya ho aur tum mujhe bas good morning bol rahe ho!!!

Taani(confused)-toh aur kya karo???

Rey-abhi batata ho…(he picks her in his arms n twirls her in air)

Taani-rey kya kar rahe hai chodiyeh mujhe

Rey-nai jab tak tum mujhe meri good morning kiss nai de dete mai nai chodonga

Taani-no way!!!...mujhe kya hai khade raheyeh mujhe utha kar thore der mai khud he thak jaoge

Rey-my star tumhe toh mai apne baho mai puri zindigi utha sakta ho…taani blushes….now give me my kiss

Taani-rey!!!

Rey-taani!!!

Taani-acha fine par phele mujhe neeche utariyeh phir pakka donge

Rey raised his eyebrows-pakka???

Taani(makes a cute innocent face)-ha pakka

Rey puts her down n holds her from waist so that she won't run….taani goes close to him n said in his ears in a husky voice-close ur eyes my prince charming

Rey smiles n close his eyes…taani came close to him n kiss his cheeks n was about to run when rey hold her

Rey-kaha madam kaha!!! Mujhe pata tha k tum bhagne k koshish karoge…madam with kiss I mean my passionate lip kiss

Taani blushes hard n rey looked at her n thinks-kitne cute lagte hai jab blush karte hai toh….god I love her so much

Rey holds her face….both look at each other…rey came close n kiss her eyes….then her forhead..then her cheeks…then her nose tip…then he was about to kiss her lips when he stops…

But this time taani came close n kiss rey on his lips passaionately

MEANWHILE WITH SW

Sw was jogging in a park which was very close to his house…but his mind was fully occupied by Sharon….sw was smiling remembering their good time…

Sw-god Sharon y u always do this….jab se tum meri life mai aae ho mera kahi aur maan nai lagta hai….i love soo much

Sh(from back)-I love u too…sw turned n found Sharon

Sw(surprised)-sh tum yaha

Sh-kyu nai aa sakte kya???

Sw-nai maine aisa kab kaha…par tum achanak

Sh-ha tumse milne ka maan kiya aur mai aa gaye….tumhare flat par jane wale the par tum yaha park mai dikh gaye toh yaha chale aae

Both started walking n sh place her head on his shoulder n said-kitna acha lag raha hai na

Sw(confused he thought she is talking about the guy standing infront of them…he was jealous)-kon acha lag raha hai???

Sh(saw him n understood he is jealous n thinks k chalo thora maze karte hai)-wo ladka

Sw looked at the guy….he was actually handsome with good physic

Sw(jealous)-itna bhi kuch khaas nai hai

Sh(smile)really par mujhe toh wo bohot hot lag raha hai

Sw-kaha se hot lag raha hai!!!! Bas thore body he toh hai n body toh koi bhi bana sakta hai

Sh-really!!!

Sw-ya really!!!

Sh playfully hit him on his chest n said-stupid mai is situation k baat kar rahe the k kitna acha lag raha hai tum aur mai akele bina apni friends ya bhai behan k…yeh kitna acha hai…..mai us ladke k baat nai kar rahe the

Sw-oh thank god

Sh-so u were jealous

Sw-no no no way mai kyu jealous honga

Sh-really!!!...like really!!!

Sw-ya ya I m not jealous

Sh-ok fine then mai uss ladke k pass jate ho he is actually very hot(she starts leaving but sw holds her)

Sw-ok fine I was jealous n honga he na…u r only mine…only n only my siren Sharon

Sh blushed

Sw-aur kya kheh rahe the tum….tum aur mai akele bina apne friends ya bhai behan k….toh ek kaam karte hai let's go to my house….vicky neha se milne gaya hoga…bhai bhabhi bhi kahi gaye hai

Sh-aur taani???

Sw-taani toh collage jane wale hogi..u know AGS work…I wonder rey ko itna kya kaam karna hota hai

Sh giggles she exactly knows what work he has to do with taani her so called "AGS"

Sh-ok toh chale

WHILE AT TAAVICYAM HOUSE

Now taarey were sitting on sofa…when rey saw a old pic of taayam…he smiles


Rey-sw bohot pyaar karta hai na tumse

Taani-ha…pata hai bachpan se bhai itne caring hai na…aapko pata hai jab bhi mujhe kuch bhi chahiyeh hota thaw o hamesha late the kaise bhi karke

Rey smiles

Taani-aapko pata hai jab tak Vicky hamare saath tha na wo na bachpan se he ek dum typical bhai type tha full on possessive

Rey-wo toh abhi bhi itna possessive hai(in scared tone n scared expression)

Taani starts laughing n said-shakal dekhi hai apni…vicky apke dost hai aur aap unse itna darte ho

Rey-ha toh mai kya karo ab wo achanak se bhai k avtar mai aa jata hai…god he scary

Taani again starts laughing

Rey-bohot hasi aa rahe hai tumhe

Taani(still laughing)-nai nai

Rey-nai aa rahe hai bohot hasi aa rahe hai…ruko abhi batata ho….(he starts tickling her n she starts running here n there n rey also runs after her….finally he caught her)

Taani-acha baba sorry ab nai hasongi pakka promise

Rey-koi maafi nai milege…he hugged her tightly when his beard(dari) touches taani soft face

Taani-aaoo aapna shave kyu nai kiya aapki beard mujhe lag gaye

Rey got an idea n smirks-taani tumhe maafi chahiyeh na toh maafi tabhi miliege jab tum mere shave karoge

Taani-what!!! No way!!

Rey-u don't have a choice baby…(he picks her on his shoulder)

Taani-rey neeche utariyeh kya kar rahe hai aap bhai aa jayenge

Rey open sw's room n took her to his washroom n makes her sit on platform

Taani-aap mujhe bhai k washroom mai kyu lekar aae hai

Rey-shaving kit toh sw k washroom mai he hoga na

He picks shaving kit n gave it to taani…indicating her to start

Taani-mujhe nai aata

Rey-mai batata ho(he shows her how to do)

Taani-pakka karo???

Rey-taani!!!

Taani-ok ok….she starts doing it slowly slowly…rey smirks n shouts-aaooo

Taani-sorry sorry lag gai kya

Rey-nai mai toh bas mazak kar raha tha

Taani-rey!!! Aap bhi jao nai karna mujhe!!!

Rey-acha acha sorry ab nai karonge…plz karo na

She again starts doing it…rey was looking at her beauty…he starts touching her face but taani glared at him…finally they got completed

Suddenly they here opening of main door

Taani-rey bhai aa gaye ab kya kare

Rey-ruko mai dekhta ho…he was about to open washroom door when sw's room door open n they heard a voice

Voice-sw put me down kya kar rahe ho

Sw-kyu yaha toh koi bhi nai hai…tumhara "bhai" bhi nai

Inside the washroom….rey bhai avtar kick in

Rey-yeh kya kar raha hai mere behan k saath

Taani(rolled her eyes)-joh aap kar rahe ho unke behan k saath… "ROMANCE"

Rey-ha par sw k samne toh nai kar raha na

Taani-toh bhai ko thorena pata hai k aap yaha ho

Outside the washroom

Sh-sw koi awaaz sune tumne

Sw-nai…aur mujhe sunna bhi nai hai jab tum mere saath ho toh mai kisi aur cheez par dhyaan nai dena chahata

Sw goes close to sh…..rey eyes goes wide n he turn around n ask taani

Rey-kya kar rahe hai wo dono???

Taani-pass aa rahe hai

Rey closed his eyes more tightly n ask ab???

Taani-aur pass aa rahe hai…

Rey turned n looked n here sw was about to kiss…

When taani close her eyes n puts her hand on rey's eyes so that he could not see

Here swaron kissed passionately but soon sh phone rings n taarey open their eyes

Sh looked at her phone it was her mom

Sh-hey mom

Sm-hi baby kaise ho??

Sh-mai theek ho…aap aur dad kaise ho…aur kab wapas aa rahe ho business trip se

Sm-beta hame toh aur time lagega..acha beta sun dad ko tumhare bohot chinta hoti hai..isliye hamne yeh decide kiya hai k tum aur rey ek saath rahoge

Sh-what!!!! Par mom

Sm-beta plz…hamne rey k mom dad se bhi baat kar le hai(note-rey's parents n sh's parents r best friends too n they r business partners also)…n I don't think k rey ko koi prob hogi balki use toh khushi hogi apne behan k saath rhehne mai

Sh-par ma

Sm-no par war tum dono saath rahoge n that's it…it about ur safety my princess…chalo have to go now bye love u(she cuts call)

Sh-par ma…hello..hello..ma…ma…shit!!!

Sw-kya hua

Sh-mom chahate hai k mai aur rey saath mai rahe

Sw-what!!!par ab hamare date ka kya hoga

Sh-wahi toh

Sw-agar rey ko pata chal gaya k mai tumhare ghar raat ko 10 baje aane wala tha then he is going to kill me

Inside washroom

Rey-mera bas chale toh tujhe abhi mar dalo n yes I m happy ab mai apni behan k saath rahonga…sw ab dekhta ho saale tu kaise aata hai

Taani glared at him

Rey-oops sorry

Here with sw n sh

Sw was upset

Sh-arre koi baat nai na hum bahar jaenge date pe ok….by the way yeh taani kaha hai chale gaye kya

Sw-dikh toh nai rahe hai

Here taarey eyes goes wide

taani-ab kya kare???

Rey-ek kaam karo tum phele niklo mai baad mai aata ho

Taani-par bhai k washroom se niklongi toh kya bolongi

Rey-arre bol dena k tumhare washroom kharab tha…ab jao warna agar yeh andar aa gay toh mujhe yaha dafna dega

Taani-ok…she open washroom door n comes out

Here swaron was in shock n think-taani andar thi kahi kuch dekh toh nai liya

Sw-tu…tu…tu yaha

Taai(fake confidence)-ha wo mera washroom kharab ho gaya tha

Sw thinks-kuch din phele he toh saare washroom theek karwae the toh karab kaise ho gaya)

Sh(changes topic because she was embrassed)-taani chalo na hum breakfast banate hai

Taani-ha bhabhi chalo

Both went

Sw-mai bhi bahar jaata ho

Rey comes out n said-thankgod yeh washroom nai aaya…chal beta chup chap nikal le ..

He quickly came out from his room n was about to go out from house when sw saw him

Sw-rey tu

Rey closed his eyes n said-mar gaya

Rey-ha wo mai tujhse milne aaya tha

Sw(rasied his eye brows)-mujhse!!!!...now sw looks at rey hand…rey forgot to place back sw's shaving brush….sw saw that n his eyes goes wide n thinks- agar mera shaving brush iske pass hai iska matlab yeh mere washroom mai tha aur taani bhi wahi thi matlab dono ek saath!!! Rey I m gonna kill u)

Here rey looked at brush n hide it n thinks-(sw k bache tujhe toh mai chodonga nai tu kar kya raha tha mere behan k saath…saale ab toh mai uske saath rahonga ab dekhta ho tu kaise aata hai raat mai)

Both giving each other angry glare…when shaani shouts-breakfast ready

Sw-chal breakfast karte hai

Rey-ha toh chal na

Now all 4 were sitting but reyam were glaring each other…shaani found it strange n understand something was wrong…so to divert attention sh said

Sh-arre bhai tune kuch soocha hai Vicky ko kaise bataega

Hearing Vicky matter both reyam forget their glares n all n rey said

Rey-sw tu kuch toh soach yr kya karo kaise batao kuch toh kar

Sw-mai toh khehta ho k directly use ja kar bol dete hai

The trio looked at him in shock

Rey-abbe ee tu mujhe marwana chahata hai toh aise he maar dena….immitating his voice.. "directly ja kar bol dete hai"…kacha kha jaega wo mujhe

Sw giggles

Sh thinks a lot n gets an idea

Sh-I have an idea

Rey-ha meri behan sahi idea bataege

Sw-after all gf kiske hai(rey glared him)

Sh-shutup u both now listen(she stands up n now full dramatically tells her idea) hum na ek filmy tareke se taani ko problem mai dalenge…like koi gunda use chide n all n then mera bhai(patting on rey's shoulder) taani ko bachega aur yeh sab Vicky k samne hoga toh Vicky impress ho jayega…what's say???

Reyam looked at each other n then at her juice glass…they took it n smell it

Rey-juice toh sahi hai

Sw-toh phir isse kya hua

Sh-bola na kaise idea hai

Before reyam could say anything taani speaks

Taani-awesome idea bhabhi

Reyam again looked at each other n rey signal sw to check her glass

Sw took taani's juice glass n smell it n said-yeh bhi theek hai

Rey-phir yeh dono paagal ho gaye hai

Sh-tum dono glass kya smell kar rahe ho bataona idea kaisa hai

Reyam-bakwaas hai

Rey-aise todhina hota hai

Sw-exactly yeh koi hindi movie nai hai…kuch aur karte hai

Taani-nai yahi karenge…vicky pakka impress ho jayega

Rey-par

Sh-no par var this is final

Sw-aur nakle gunde kaha se aaege

Sh-wo rey le aaega

Rey-mai kaha se laoga

Sh-kahi se bhi lao…kuch toh karna parega apne pyaar k liye

Taani-aur hum yeh aaj he karenge infact abhi collage mai chalo jaldi

Shaani went outside

Rey-I m telling u kuch garbar hone wale hai

Sw-exactly but we have no choice chal gundo ka intezam karte hai

OUTSIDE COLLAGE GATE

Swaron n taarey hiding behind a car waiting for Vicky…

Rey to fake gundas-dekho taani waha rahege tumhe uske pass ja kar batmazi karne hai

Sw-thore!!! Thore batmazi karne hai samjhe

Rey-ha thore karne hai phir mai aaoga aur ek nakli fight hogi ok

All-ok

Taani-vicky aa raha hai Vicky aa raha hai

Here Vicky was coming with neha hand in hand in a happy mood…when taani runs n stands at a position where Vicky could see everything

Huh finally I m done with chapter 30 hope u all like it n comment plzzz

God I can't believe maine romance try kiya bhagwaan jane kaisa hoga do tell me if u all don't like it

Precap-let's see if plan works or not….ar helps taarey n swaron n soon taarey n swaron went to a manager for some work…awesome fun dere….cute rimar scenes n bharat n aashi scenes

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