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Posted: 12 years ago
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ahh looks who is back with her ultra long update!! eekks awesome yaar. da chaddybuddies r just kickass😉😉 look at virat's intro n he was making out or was abt to😆 n manvi is just supercool here! n wats with dis ishita gurl hmm! Im loving dis👏👏. n continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: sindhu4karanika

ahh looks who is back with her ultra long update!! eekks awesome yaar. da chaddybuddies r just kickass😉😉 look at virat's intro n he was making out or was abt to😆 n manvi is just supercool here! n wats with dis ishita gurl hmm! Im loving dis👏👏. n continue soon.


Hawww don't get any bad ideas about my Viraat ...he is nice guy ..that gal was sitting too close for comfort 😆 ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Loved it ❤️ U have beautifully maintained the essence of friendship.Loved Virat's protectiveness towards Manvi..his concern for Manvi was reflected from all his gestures to his lectures..now that what a best buddy is...a buddy who loves u...he was guiding Manvi as he know she is innocent she don't know how ppl are inwardly...he was protecting him as he know how this world is...I loved that they were not feeling awkward in their proximity...like lovers...they were like cool buddies...loved their small fight too..well it strengthens friendship 😆 from choosing T-shirt to GFs Mannu was his decision maker and Virat was hers..as if they happily handed chords of their lives to each other
Mannu keh Muscles Kitney istrong hain ji 😉 🤣
Kash I could also have one ice cream uncle🤣
...even loved Madhuri-Virat bonding...I want to read next update abhii 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: AnaluvsVirman

Loved it ❤️ U have beautifully maintained the essence of friendship.Loved Virat's protectiveness towards Manvi..his concern for Manvi was reflected from all his gestures to his lectures..now that what a best buddy is...a buddy who loves u...he was guiding Manvi as he know she is innocent she don't know how ppl are inwardly...he was protecting him as he know how this world is...I loved that they were not feeling awkward in their proximity...like lovers...they were like cool buddies...loved their small fight too..well it strengthens friendship 😆 from choosing T-shirt to GFs Mannu was his decision maker and Virat was hers..as if they happily handed chords of their lives to each other...even loved Madhuri-Virat bonding...I want to read next update abhii 😛


Next Update ...Abhi ...Paagal Hain Kyaa !!! After 2 -3 days ..may be ...😉...Love u for this
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Sumana123


Hawww don't get any bad ideas about my Viraat ...he is nice guy ..that gal was sitting too close for comfort 😆 ...

yeah right!😛 n dude ur description abt delhi colleges were just bang on!! I can totally relate!😉 but I am a gud gurl hah.only studying!! 😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome... do tag me with your next update and make it soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i shud say a nice start..
''importance of study is indirectly proportional to importance of fashion'' u dealt vt reality in a very appreciable manner.. loved it..

mannu's intro was cool... her relationship vt the driver & the driver being satisfied at the mentioning of ''buddy'' was sweet.. it just delivered his trust in leaving the girl in safe arms..

then the much awaited part.. the buddies met.. there an unexpected intro for virat.. all manvi was worried is, he didnt tell her about his new GF?? she's cute!! & his answer for her question was reasonable.. loved the moments..

from virat waking manvi. being protective about her encounters with the boys.. it showed how much he's protective of the girl.. her arguments regarding karan were out of innocense ryt... even the way she told virat that has she ever questiond virat's relationship vt other girls,, i cud sense dat it wasnt out of jealousy or intentional,, it was just to make her point clear... this mannu is really innocent.. i can sense it in every action of hers.. from her hugs to virat no matter how many are watching.. from her yelling to virat nevetheless he's a senior.. from her irritation wen ishita was talking vt virat.. from she telling it directly to virat.. from everything it shows hos pure in thoughts she is & how carefree & innocent she is.. she blindly trusts virat doesnt she??? very beautiful character..

& virat.. he finds his relationship vt girls cool & not serius.. tries to use his charms to get things done, cudnt resist a word against her bestie, cudnt see her company vch is not safe, cudnt leave her go alone wen its late, listens to manvi vtout any hesitation.. he's again a protective, charming friend..

the bond the two are sharing is really nice,,, i felt dat u chose dis chapter to deliver their friendship & its extent.. it was really nice.. um looking forward to see the pranks dey are gonna play together & alot of fun

get going!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: virmanhus

i shud say a nice start..
''importance of study is indirectly proportional to importance of fashion'' u dealt vt reality in a very appreciable manner.. loved it..

mannu's intro was cool... her relationship vt the driver & the driver being satisfied at the mentioning of ''buddy'' was sweet.. it just delivered his trust in leaving the girl in safe arms..

then the much awaited part.. the buddies met.. there an unexpected intro for virat.. all manvi was worried is, he didnt tell her about his new GF?? she's cute!! & his answer for her question was reasonable.. loved the moments..

from virat waking manvi. being protective about her encounters with the boys.. it showed how much he's protective of the girl.. her arguments regarding karan were out of innocense ryt... even the way she told virat that has she ever questiond virat's relationship vt other girls,, i cud sense dat it wasnt out of jealousy or intentional,, it was just to make her point clear... this mannu is really innocent.. i can sense it in every action of hers.. from her hugs to virat no matter how many are watching.. from her yelling to virat nevetheless he's a senior.. from her irritation wen ishita was talking vt virat.. from she telling it directly to virat.. from everything it shows hos pure in thoughts she is & how carefree & innocent she is.. she blindly trusts virat doesnt she??? very beautiful character..

& virat.. he finds his relationship vt girls cool & not serius.. tries to use his charms to get things done, cudnt resist a word against her bestie, cudnt see her company vch is not safe, cudnt leave her go alone wen its late, listens to manvi vtout any hesitation.. he's again a protective, charming friend..

the bond the two are sharing is really nice,,, i felt dat u chose dis chapter to deliver their friendship & its extent.. it was really nice.. um looking forward to see the pranks dey are gonna play together & alot of fun

get going!!!

Now this really touched me ..i know you have exams and keeping busy still u took time out to comment that is more than sufficient for me ...I wish ..I m able to fulfill reader expectations through this story 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sumana123

Now this really touched me ..i know you have exams and keeping busy still u took time out to comment that is more than sufficient for me ...I wish ..I m able to fulfill reader expectations through this story 😊


u surely vl.. listen to ur brain in all ur antics u can achive.. get going!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
sorry for commenting so late..
coming to update its amazing amazing
loved it...
virman's dosti❤️

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