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Originally posted by: Desigirls12


HAPPY MAANEET DAY Friends..You All Know Today VALENTINES DAY, but for me MEANING OF LOVE IS MY MAANEET..so today for us MAANEET DAY...i cant differ My Maaneet and Love as two different words..so to allMy Maaneetians HAPPY MAANEET DAY..

I LOVE MY MAANEET SO MUCH ANDMY MAANEETIANS TOO, WHOBECAME A PART OFMY LIFE..


di 1 update toh banta hai na fir 😊😉
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Ab iski update de hi do Nalini..
You know na ki I m reading this😭
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A BIG SORY FOR TE DELAY..SORY FRIENDS..NOW IM UPDATING..
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THANKU FRIENDS FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS AND LIKES..SORY FOR TE DELAY..LOVE U ALL




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( THANKU PRIYA DII FOR TIS LOVELY BEAUTIFUL BANNER..LOVE U )


- 10



Morning

Maan freshen and abt to go to gym but thought to see Geet as last night he was late..te room was empty..he thought she will be in wr and thought to give her some time to freshen..he left to gym..

After he finish his morning chorus he came again to her room, but te room was empty..he knock te wr door but it was open..he wonder where she went.. thought to check her in kitchen,abt to leave te room but saw te tablets was on te table

Maan : so madam didt have her medicines ,wat i will do with hertook a deep sigh went to see her without knowing wat happen to her..

Maan went to kitchen and saw Nakul and deepak was working

Maan : kaka where is Geet

Nakul saw Maan he gesture deepak to leave

Nakul : baba wo

Maan sense his sadness: wat happen kaka

Nakul : wo Geet baby ,he started to cry,Maan got worried

Maan: kaka wat happen kaka

Nakul : yesterday Geet baby

Maan got tensed with Geet's name : Geet wat happen to her

Nakul : baba and he narrate wat happen to Geet last night and how she came to his quaters for food..

Hearing him,Maan was shocked he clenched his fist..his blood boiled..his eyes became red due to his anger thinking wat Geet went..she was begging for food in her own house..he was angry on himself for leaving her and left to kc..he cursed himself for not fulfilled his duty..

Maan : kaka i thought u will take care of her

Nakul know wat he meant,he felt bad for leaving her like tis,yes its all his fault : im sory baba but Maya ji send out of city for some thing but still i didt trust her so i asked deepak to look after, before he continue Maan started to yell

Maan : Deepak

Deepak came running hearing his boss ki roar he know he was anger and stood in front of him with shivering: sir

Maan : yesterday u didt take lunch to Geet

Deepak : sir wo

Maan's temper raising : Deepak

Deepak: sir i prepared but before i take to Geet mam Maya mam said she will take care of it and ask me to go to market

Tats it Maan had enough of Maya wat is te problem with her..hearing his shout Dadi & Maya rush to kitchen..

Dadi : Maan wat happen why u shouting

Maan turned his furious gaze to Maya..Maya was startled to see his fuming eyes and step back

Maan : bua dadi wat happen yesterday

Maya shivered: yesterday nothing happen with a sheepish smile

Maan : did i asked u to take care of Geet haan

Maya was sweating seeing him, : no but Maan beta

Maan cut her: bua dadi u are guest so stay in ur limit if u cant ,then u can leave

Dadi : Maan tis is te way to talk to ur elders haan

Maan: elder but she didt behaved like tat,with sarcastically tone

Dadi : Maan

Maan: then wat dadi did u know wat happen to Geet ok leave it u dont like her,she is staying with us as a human we cant provide food there is no use of tis wealth Dadi

Maya : no Maan beta i kept her lunch but she was sleeping

Maan : wat if she is sleeping u can wake her naa

Dadi got Angry for Maan's words thinking for tat girl he was shouting at his family: so u asking Maya to serve her haan

Maan got frustrate: Dadi im not asking to serve but she is not well,do u know wat happen

Maan narrate wat happen to dadi ,dadi felt bad hearing tat even though she didt like Geet but She cant accept te way Geet have been treated. she gave an accusing look to Maya..

Maan: say me dadi im wrong in shouting..tis te way to treat a human..dadi didt have words to say..u only taught me tat we have to be concern even with our enemies wat Geet is worst than an enemy..khuranas are not worth to fed a human shame for us dadi

Dadi felt hurt with his words: Maan tis much only u think abt me..yes i dont like her wen ever i see her i see urmila's betray tat does't meant i will treat her like tis..

Maan didt say anything he just turned his face to Maya:bua dadi stay in ur limits or dont make me to do some thing which u later regret ,with furious tone

Maya shivered with his tone and node her head for yes..Maan just left, nakul followed him

Dadi to Maya: i didt expect tis from u maya

Maya felt : no maaji wo

Dadi: dont bother her,stay away from her maya before maya say something she left

Maya was furious and felt insult tat Maan have shouted on her in front of te servants..she glare at deepak who left at once

Maya: i wont leave u Geet

Servant's quaters

Geet was sleeping in te couch still as she was fully exhausted with last day things..she was sleeping like a log..Maan rushed to quaters and stood still

Maan legs frozed to see Geet who was lying on te couch, she was pale..he went to her and kneeled down in front of her..he cup her face and slowly pushed te hair behind her ear..he don't want to disturb her sleep, but with his touch Geet wake up and startled to see Maan..

She got up and sat : Maan ji wo, her voice was chocking as her throat was dry, Nakul came with water and gave to her her..Geet look at him, took te water and took a sip

Geet to nakul : hmm, then to Maan wo ji, im, Maan kept his finger on her lips making her startled , both staring at each other..

Maan : im sory Geet , wo

Geet removed his finger : for wat ji

Maan : for my negliance , for my carelessness, for my ,last night, he cant say ,he tilt his head down in shame

Geet look at Nakul ,with his look she know tat Maan knows everything..she sighed,she cant see Maan like tis..yes she suffered for food but it was not Maan's fault.. she tilt his chin with her finger to face her..

Geet placed her palm on his cheeks : Maanji pls don't feel guilty its not ur fault, wo i didt take my lunch tats why,im sory for making u worry

Maan hold her palm which was on his cheeks : pls Geet don't say sory and make me feel more guilty,pls

Both was staring at each other..one in concern and one in love, but both felt some thing familar in they touch..Maan was searching some thing in her eyes which she was trying to hide it from him..

Geet seeing his stare ,she just snap her gaze and pulled her hand breaking Maan's trance..Both felt awk and turned they face..Maan got up

Maan : lets go Geet

Geet try to get up but she stumble due to her weakness and fall on te couch..Maan hold her , Geet stare at him..he just scooped her in his arms,making her startled

Geet : wo ji

Maan did reply he was just concern for her..Geet felt jolt with his touch..she was just staring at his face which only shows concern for her..Maan too felt some thing with her but he snap due to her condition..he took her to km and placed her on her bed..

Geet sat on te bed, folding her legs and hugging her kneels..he went out, Geet heart beating fast like she run for marathon due to his close promixty..she was trying to control her heart which was carving for him, saying he did all tis only out of his concern nothing else..but wat to do her small heart not accepting her words and so many butterflies flying in her stomach making her to feel her happy

Geet trance broke wen she saw Maan enter with te bf tray..he sat beside her and placed te tray on te side table..he took te glass juice and passed to her..she look at him

Maan : take it,with stern tone,

Geet got scared with his sternness and took te glass ..Maan chuckled inwardly seeing her getting scared with his fake gussa..he then passed her bf,

Geet : pls,

Maan : hmm, she took staring at him..he then gave her medicine,she took without any tantrums..

Te whole day,Maan took care of her..even though Geet felt bliss to be with his care and concern but sighed sadly thinking tis dream too soon will be shattered like all other dreams of her

It was after 4 days, Geet was sitting in her room lost in her thought..Nakul came to call her as Maan was calling her..she came out and shocked , surprised to see her bro her yash bhai was sitting..she got happy and now she is relief thinking she will leave tis place with her brother

Before she rush to him, she heard they convo..

Maan : yash tis ur share, tat Raj maama left for his son

Yash smiled sadly: sory sir, we didt accept anything from him wen he is alive, now after he left if we accept,then im insulting my Mother's love and her sacrifice..we don't like him but i cant insult my mother's love for tat man

Maan was startled to hear his words..he felt proud to see his Raj's uncle son who was dido like him in dignity and self respect..he actually hired men himself wen he felt gupta uncle delaying and with in three days he got information abt him..he came to know tat he is lost his job and staying in his sasural's home..even being short of money he denying tis property

Geet who was hearing his brother's words, felt proud to see him..yes her mother didt leave any property for them but left a valuable property self respect and dignity..she taught them to live on their own legs and not dependent on others..

Maan : but i heard u lost ur job and living in ur sasural's home ,Geet was shocked to hear tat her brother lost his job

Yash : so wat sir,my mother have taught me how to face te problems standing on our own legs,i don't want to leave in tat man's money, as a father he didt do anything for us, will his money will undo everything wat we lost, Maan look at him, so pls don't compel me

Maan sighed , he don't have words to say anything

Yash : actually i came here to see my choti , Maan look at him, i mean my sister Geet and take her with me.

Maan felt some thing twisting in his heart hearing he is going to take Geet..tat means Geet will leave him..but he didt show his restless..

Yash : thanku so much for taking care of her sir for wat u did to my mom which as son i missed it..his words were chocking, thanku so much for taking care of my sister too..im so grateful to u sir

Maan : its ok but, before they continue,they stopped hearing Geet's words

Yash : choti

Geet rush to him, hugged him and cried..both hugged and cried thinking abt their fate which snatch they mother and made them separate..

Geet was crying,she was pouring all her pain which she was suppress these many days..seeing her brother she started to pour it..yash too crying holding his sister..he know wat his choti went thru all alone..he was proud thinking abt his sister and hugged her like consoling her

Geet : bhai maa, yash pat her head and both crying for they mother who was so strong and lived all her life for them..

Maan felt sad seeing them , seeing they love for each other he really felt empty without any one for him, who he can cry out his pain..he just staring at them..both broke te hug , Yash fold his hands in front of Maan

Yash : MAAN sir , thanku so much, if u were not there, i cant imagine wat could have happen to my sister..he know te place where they lived is not safe for Geet like Girls..he know many of them are ready to pounce on her..if u would have not taken her with u, many eagles are waiting to make her prey for their hunger.

Geet : bhai ,she hold his hand but gave a look to Maan was staring at her

Maan clenched his fist hearing his words..he became furious to think some one touching her..he himself don't know wat kind of feeling is tis, but he cant accept tat

Yash : sir i want to take my sister with me, already u have did so much for us, i don't want to burden u any more..so im taking my sister

Maan felt sad, he don't know wat to say, he just stare at Geet who was looking at him, before he say some thing Geet broke te silence

Geet : bhai i want to talk with u ,Maan ji can i

Maan : hmm

They both left to Geet's room..Maan was staring them and te property papers which laid on te table like a waste paper..for them tis is nothing..

Geet took yash to her room, yash saw te room and felt happy tat his sister living a good life which she deserves..he felt sad thinking he cant give his sister even a basic needs and cursed himself for letting his sister living in strangers house wen his own brother is alive..

Geet saw Yash's face with happiness..she too want to go with her brother, as she cant live her which is suffocating her each sec..but after hearing tat he lost his job, she cant burden him..she know his brother will take care of her but she don't want to depend on him, so thought to bear tis hell

Geet : bhai how r u , how is meera bhai

Yash : we are fine choti

Geet : wat happen to ur job bhai

Yash : te company was running in lost Geet, so within one month after i joined they closed it..so we decide to move to Mumbai, then i came to know wat happen to maa and i shattered Geet, he cried and Geet lean on him and cried along with him , then i came to know u left no one know who took u..so i was helpless Geet..i was scared thinking abt u, if u got any problem

Geet : bhai with ur love and our maa ki blessings nothing will happen to me

Yash kissed her hair : i know Geet, im useless , i didt do anything to our maa as a son..as a brother too i didt take care of u, im sory Geet

Geet : bhai its not ur fault , its our fate, it feel happy seeing us crying

Yash wipe her tears : u pack ur things Geet we will leave

Geet : no bhai i cant leave

Yash : why Geet some one threatening u

Geet : no no bhai, actually Raj ,yash look at her, tat man have wrote some share of their business in my name , till i became 21 i cant do anything, no one can ask me to sign it..so i thought till then i will stay here and after tat i will sign te papers and leave , no one should think i run away with te property

Yash : do u think MAAN sir will say some thing

Geet : no bhai he is very nice, he is te one who taking care of me, but we cant expect tis from everyone naa..no one should point at urmila's kids..till 21 i wil stay Bhai, its only few months

Yash : but Geet

Geet : pls bhai im searching job too, soon i will get a job , i too don't want to live in their money

Yash was proud of his sister, he kissed her forehead : im proud of choti, but ur dreams

Geet smiled sadly : all dreams wont cum true bhai, yash heart winching hearing her words..he cursed for his helpless.., aur waise nowadays im not dreaming anything bhai giving him a smile , to herself any how its going to shattered ,

Yash stare at her : choti do u hesitating to stay in meera's home

Geet know she cant hide anything from her bro who know her in and out: tats also a reason bhai..sory bhai, but i cant burden u

Yash felt sad hearing her words : ur not a burden for me Geet

Geet : i know bhai , but pls, soon u will get a job , and me too, we both will rent a house and shift there,pls bhai

Yash thought wat she is saying is correct..already his sasural was taunting him for his jobless, if he take Geet there she too have to face everything,so its better she stay her..yes its only matter of few months , then both will shift to new house..

Yash smile : ok choti, but wen i got job u should not deny

Geet smile : deal

Both chatted for some time..their both came out, Maan was sitting in te hall and working in his lapy, seeing them he stood thinking wat they have decide ..he want to try for once

Maan : yash think once abt tis property, it will be use ful for u

Yash smile : sory sir for denying u, but we both don't have any rights on his name nor money..

Geet gave a look to Maan like i said so..yash bid to them and left..

Maan: Geet atleast u can convice him ,he is struggling

Geet: sory sir we have faced worst then tis we have struggled to have one meal a day,my maa didt seek anything from him..we both wont let her down Maan ji

Maan saw a pride in her eyes wen she said abt her mother..he unknowinly grew a respect on urmila..he node and abt to turn,Geet stopped him

Geet : Maan ji a small help

Maan: say geet

Geet : wo i don't want to stay here

Maan got shocked thinking she decide to leave. if it was first he would have stopped her but after her brother cums in wat right he will stop..

Geet : always staying in one room..if tis goes on i feel like i lost myself..i want to live my life and away from,she stop her words

But Maan know whom she is hinting: im sory abt dadi and bua dadi

Geet sense his guilty: no no sir its not her fault..who ever in her place will react like tat..who can bear te people who shared her daughter's life..i don't want to cum again and again in front of her and increased her gussa,so its better i move away

Maan : so u decide to leave with u brother haan

Geet :no sir i mean can i stay in outhouse

Maan got confused: oh

Geet: im staying here but little far Maan was looking at her,if u dont allow me to stay in oh then i will move with my bhai,she thought to use her weapon

Maan gap at her : so u threatening me with serious face..Geet startled to see strict tone

Geet: no i mean sory sir..Maan still glaring at her..sir pls think from my pov..how long i will stay here like stranger..i cant do anything freely..im not saying tat u not taking care..but if i live there i can live my life forgetting my pain..here i was just drowning in my pain sitting idlely,again tat accident is flashing in front me with sad voice

Maan can feel her turmoil..yes she is correct how long he can caged her..he cant be with her whole day to see wat happening..if he leaves to kc too, he will get tensed abt her after tat night..so its better she stay in oh..dadi gussa too will reduce little bit..its not like tat she is leaving km..he can see her anytime..

Geet saw him thinking: pls ji, Maan node,Geet smile, thanku sir,Maan raised his eye brow,oh im sory ji

He smile : ok geet im leaving

Geet : ji ,Maan stop and look at her , wo thanku for finding my brother..

Maan : u no need to say thanku geet..its my duty

Geet smile at him..he bid and left to kc..Geet already decide to move to oh..but she hesitate to ask Maan now she used tis situation..she went to her room to pack..she don't have anything to pack so just took her maa's phote and kept in her trunk box..

She had little money as wen urmila and Geet decide to move to delhi with yash,they sold all they things and kept te money..now tat is helping her..she thanked her mother for tis..she checked how much she have..she sighed thinking it will last her few months till she search her job..

Geet took her trunk box and came out,while moving to oh..Maya and Simi was sitting in te garden..they both fumed to see geet..Maya felt te insult coz of her,she want to insult her same way..

Maya called geet: hey ,Geet look at her ,u cum here

Geet went to them..they gave a disgust look to her..

Maya: wat u taking and going like a thife

Geet got hurt with her words..she clenched her fist: no mam im moving to oh

Simi: hmm not bad so soon u realized ur place..

Maya laughed: simi beta she have realized wen she went to servant's room,begging for food

Geet stare at them..she cant take any more just to try to move.. both got anger seeing her attitude..Maya hold her wrist

Maya: staying her as charity but see ur attitude..u cant move until we check ur box

Maya try to snatch te box but it fell down opening and all things shattered..Nakul out and saw them

Nakul : wat happen beta

Maya know she cant do anything in front of nakul as he is very close to khuranas his one word will get them into problem

Geet: nothing kaka te box slipped..she bend to take her things..Nakul too help her..Nakul took her to oh,giving a look too both of them

Maya : tis nakul ko

Simi : dont worry dadi after i became khurana bahu i will fire him

Maya: im waiting for tat day beta

THEY reached oh..Nakul took her to a small room which Geet ask to arrange for her..it was a small store room like type with attached wr..Nakul didt like her staying in tis small but he cant deny her..

Geet decide to use tis room and pay te rent to nakul..she even asked Nakul not to say anything to Maan abt tis..even he cums to oh to see her he wont cum to her room..so she can stay and it was matter of few months until her brother get a job..

She kept to box,she didt take te dress which Maan brought her she kept there itself..

Nakul: beta u want something

Geet: kaka if u free can u cum with me to market i want to buy some things

Nakul: so u decide to cook separately

Geet: pls kaka

Nakul cant denying seeing her pleading face..he know no one can mend and dido like her father in self respect who even look after kc didt behave like md and got salary an employee..then how will be his daughter

Nakul too Geet to market..Geet brought a mat, pillow, some vessels and vegges for one week..but she was startled to see te rates..she thought if tis te living cost of tis city, her whole money will gone within one month..she decide to search job asap..

THEY reached km geet arranged everything neatly..

Geet :kaka today u will have dinner with me in my new homewith a big smile

Nakul smile seeing her happiness which due to relife as she be away from everything: ok beta.,

As promised nakul came to her room for dinner..Geet served him ,both started to have their dinner..really she cooked well..Nakul felt overwhelmed seeing her

Nakul: u cooked well beta like sonali mam

Geet hearing her name : how is she kaka,.Geet always had a soft corner for her..after her maa left she is te one who consoled her and brought her along with her..she didt have a bit of anger on her seeing her as her sautan's daughter but she showered love on her..

Nakul: she is fine beta as hospital work is on full swing it will take time for her to cum here

Geet: ohhh,they had they dinner..Nakul bid and left to his room

Geet cleaned everything ,spread her mat and laid down..she felt like she got her old life back but one thing she is alone now..she now no need to face any more accusation..she can live her life away from everyone ..even from Maan as nowadays his closeness affecting her so much

She know there is no meaning for her feelings..she chuckled sadly thinking abt her one side , she know its like

A DUMB YEARNING TO SING.

sighing she slept in her own place..




( thanku priya dii..love u so much..muah)

PRECAP: WILL GEET SUCESS IN HER JOB SEARCHING

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Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago
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thank u for this update. kitne dinon se wait karrahi thi.😭
kitna emotional update diya. feeling very bad for geet. atleast maan is there for her. liked how he scolded maya for her doing and this time dadi too felt bad for behaving like this with geet. maan yash ko doondkar laaya. emotional scene between brother and sister. kitna self respect hai dono mein. they didnt accepted the property. feeling bad for yash too.maan started feeling something when yash told that he is going to take geet with him. hope he soon realises his feelilngs for geet.


Edited by priya111111 - 10 years ago

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