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@Chocolate_barun

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Am frst 🥳 khusi saving arnav and arnav massaging her feet loved it he is already liking her payal is b**** gonna kill her good khusi decided not to become puppet she should give payal good lesson thanks for scrap
update soon

Edited by Chocolate_barun - 12 years ago

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#222

loved the update...i just hate Payal...Arnav-Khushi part is cute...loved Khushi's determination...update soon again...

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dva2vra

@dva2vra

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

nice

but why is payal so wicked

khushi hasn't done anything

poor khush

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Anusree Pradeep

@--sree--

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

payal is very selfish...loved Arnav here

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Kudos khushi..well done...good resolution...can't believe Payal is sooo cruel to her own cousin.. N what foul ideas n language...

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anjale

@anjale

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

wow superb 1 ya loved it ...poor kuhi...hope arnav will get all the love she wanted and soon change payal...4r kushi and stand beside kushi 4r her support...

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kiran deep kaur

@sikhni_

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Just loved it
Aww arnav ko khushi acchi lgi ❤️
M glad k arnav ne Payal she rudely baat ki aur khushi ne bhi uss b**** se dur rehne ka faisla kiya
Waiting for more

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Sakura02

@Sakura02

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#228

loved the update hate payal

thanks for pm

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@BlueBloodQueen

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#229

Wow nice up date dear..
Payal is too bad..
Asr took khushi's side that great..
Thanks for thr pm...

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#230

Interesting story line, I really liked your characterization here. We get to see a nasty shade of Payal who is trying to hurt her innocent cousin time and time again so much so that she didn't even think twice before sending a stranger to the room to sleep in the same bed as her so she can have her fun. But u know what was refreshing to see here, it was Khushi's reaction I am glad that you have given her enough common sense to see through Payal's plans and stay out of her way. Let's see what Payal does once she realizes Khushi is no longer interested in what she does or doesn't do? It will be interesting to see the dynamics in their relationship.

I liked the fact that Arnav got affected by Khushi's good nature and realized that he is into her so much so that Payal believed Khushi actually did something to please ASR, loved the fact that he stood up for Khushi as well. Looking forward to reading more, thanks for the PM :) Awesome stuff!

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