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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nakshatra92

nice update...


finally arjun met riya...

hw can he be so harsh to her???

goa masti ...

update soon


thanx dear.

i will update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

i will dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: srividhya68

so they have met in the departmental store and now he's gonna be her boss cool...!!
can't wait to see how he wins her back...!!
continue soon...!!


thanx dear.
i will update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
thankyou so much guyes apne ne meri bakwas or faltu writing or story ko accha response diya.

i am happy.

special thanx to these people

Edited by mastmegha22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


PART-5

Riya: Who are you?

Shree: Why are you sitting in our sir's chair? Get up!

Shree march toward him, but his one stare pushed Shree behind Riya. Riya just stood there expressionless after meeting the gaze of the person standing in front of them.

Shree whisper in Riya's ear "I swear on you that he's more danger than our Rathore sir." Riya doesn't know how to react. She just stare at the person who stare at her with unknown emotions.

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Rathore, ayesha, liza and Chotu came inside the headquarters. They are shock by the scene, Riya stood numbly and Shree behind Riya. Rathore came forward and saw the person standing there with a smirk on his face. Rathore wanting to bang his head on the wall.

Chotu: what happened and why are you standing like this???

Shree: nothing.. Rathore sir who is this???

Rathore: he is ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte second hand comman of ETF and unfortunately my assitent he says by greeting his teeth.

Chotu, ayesha, liza and Shree just stare at Arjun while Riya just stood shockingly..

Arjun: helo everyone.

Rathore: hello rawte meet shree our technical expert, chotu our commando, ayesha our amunisum and undercover specialist, liza forensice expert and

Arjun: mrs.

Riya: sorry its miss riya mukherjee research and encounter specialist.

Arjun: hmm.

Rathore: shree inko case ke bare main batao or riya

Riya: cut him between sir abhi laati hoon..

Rathore: good

Soon riya goes to cafetaria to bring coffee and shree and arjun are discussing about case.

After 15 minutes riya bring the coffee and giving to everyone. Riya is going to give coffee to shree but shree suddenly gets up and coffee feel down on arjun ans riya was scared and going to say sorry but without looking arjun yelled on her.

Arjun: what the hell tum dekhkar nahi chal sakti kya??? Tumhari aakhen hain ya button?? you are such a iresposible person and he sees and shocked.

On the otherhand riya was feeling scared and she was shivering badly before anyone could say she ran from there and arjun was cursing himself. Shree also run behind to riya.



Edited by ll_megha_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
IN CONFERENCE ROOM

Rathore: how dare you rawte??? Tumhe team me aaye hue 2hrs bhi nahi hue or tumne team ko daatna shuru kar diya??

Arjun: i know maine usse kuch zayada hi bol diya.

Rathore: tumne usse dara diya hai?? And it was not her fault vo galti se ho gaya or usne jaanbuj kar nahi giraya. Or ek baat kaan khokar sunlo etf ka chief main hoon or tumhare aane se pehle main inke saath kaam karta hoon. And these are like my family. Or inki galti na hote hue bhi tumne inhe daata so i swer i won leave you and glared him and arjun also glared rathore.

IN RIYA CABINE

Shree: riyu kya hua??

Riya: kuch nahi.

Shree: teri tabayat to theek hai na??

Riya: haan.

Shree: fir tu itna kaap kyun rahi hai??

Riya: nahi yaar.

Shree: dekh tu arjun sir ke gusse se dar mat main hoon na..

Rathore: haan riya.

Riya: sir aap.

Rathore: riya main janta hoon yeh tumhari galti nahi hain.

Riya: hmm...

Rathore: chalo meri team mujhe abhi iss waqt kam karte hue chahiye with cup of gr8 coffee.

Riya flashed her dimpled smile and says jee sir..

And rathore and shree again reached conference room and riya goes to make coffee for her, rathore and shree..

Riya makes coffee and comes to conference room and gives mug to rathore and shree. She sits with shree and arjun just stares her.

Rathore: shree or riya maine tumhe uss ladke ke baare main pata karne ko kaha tha kucg pata chala??

Riya: yes sir.. Sir iss ladke ka naam arun hain yeh 16yrs old ka hain. Yeh apne ghar se bhaag gaya tha. Iskie parents ne isko dhoondne ke report bhi likhvayi hui thi.

Rathore: vajah pata chali ki yeh ghar se kyun bhaag gaya tha

Riya: no sir..

Rathore: hmm or shree tumhe iske mobile records ka pata chala??

Shree: sir isne last call kisi Mr. Sharma ko ki thi or maine unke cell pe try karne ki koshish kari but not reachable aa raha hai.

Arjun: rathore hame iske family ko interrogate karna chahiye..

Rathore: hmmm... Shree ek kaam karo tum, liza or riya beech pe jake clue dhoondo or baaki sab mere saath arun ke ghar chalo.

All are nodded there head except arjun and goes.

Edited by mastmegha22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
IN ARUN HOUSE

Chotu knocking the door and one lady open it.

Rathore: kya yeh arun ka ghar hain??

Lady: yes aap kaun??

Arjun: ETF

Lady: ohh please andar aaye main arun ki mummy sumitra.

Ayesha: ohh

Sumitra: kya mere bete ke baare main pata chala??

Arjun: haan vo

Sumitra: kaha hai vo bataye na??

Ayesha: dekhiye hame unki body mili hain

Sumitra: was shocked and she was going to faint but ayesha held her dekhiye sambhaliye aapne aapko

Sumitra: mera beta magar usse kisne mara??

Arjun: yeh to hame pata nahi lekin aap hamari kuch madad kar sakti hain??

Sumitra: main apne bete ke kaatil ko saza dilvane ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hoon.

Rathore: aapka beta ghar chodkar kyun gaya tha??

Sumitra: vo asal main uske dad se uski ladayi ho gaye thi. Actually uske dad ne usse mara tha because usne cigratte pina shuru kar diya tha so vo ghar chodke chala gaya tha.

Rathore: ohh

Arjun: kya aap ksis mr. sharma ko jante hain??

Sumitra: jee nahi par kyun?

Arjun: bas aise hi..

And they goes

Now i will stop here..
I am tired...

Please give your feedback

TO BE CONTINUED...

Precap:
1.Shirza and riya find something.
2. Ayesha is in danger

Edited by mastmegha22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fab amez update plz cont soon api
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey nice update..
arjun yelled at her..
she get feared of him..
love the way shree & rathod take her side..& try to comfort her..
the case seems to interesting..
oh..precap is also interesting..aayesha in danger..???
but plz continue soon..
waiting..
thanks for pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
loved it
arjun scolds riya
update next part soon
thanks for the pm

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