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Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

I did't know when this beautiful story came. I have just read all 5 chapters in one go.
Oh my god!! To call the story beautiful or amazing will understatement and if I truly start describing what I felt all the adjectives will not be enough.
I love whatever you write Rima but this one I had tears in my heart, the way you have described Khushi that is exactly I see her unselfish and beautiful outside as well as inside and who loves unconditionally.
Waiting eagerly for Monday.
Please continue rendering us speechless.

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

when did u started this one yaar...???????

and where the hell i was...didn't even noticed...

well i will comment on all parts...

part 1...

nice start...

looks like both were in love with each other and hiding their love frm each other under the shell of friendship...

i think khushi got some attitude in these seven years...

at last both of them noticed no bands in each other's fingers...

loved the start...

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404703

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

for part 2...

wooo...m loving it...khushi's character is too good...arnav was really rude to left her in middle of assignment...arnav is not actually bad, but drown in the mirage of high status, cool personality...and when he actually open his eyes to see the reality...he got himself all alone..with lost love and no one to share tht pain to lose some one whom u loved by all ur heart...

superb part...

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rechup

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Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Wow i found this story just now...
It is so new n amasing...
Love the arnav n khushi here...

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404703

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

for part 3...

amazing one dear...

i too wanna know tht wht went soo horribly wrong tht the budding relation of love ended-up hurting both of them badly...

arnav has a troubled childhood...and with know one to take care of him...the child without love and guidance has grown into a man who has been very carelessly handled his relations and now facing its consequences...

khushi is just like a innocent child who just believe in every thing tht is happening in front of her without any manipulations...

wonderful piece of writing dear...

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

for part 4...

thts real friendship...khushi lose her matches for arnav so tht he could continue his title in the collage...and arnav has paid her collage fees only because he can't see tears in her friends eyes...

looks like there is some misunderstanding etween them as khushi has loved him soo much to let him slip away frm her life and may be sumthing has triggered arnav's ego to not let bend in front of khushi's love...

wht ever is tht...it has left them only in pain...

loved it...

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404703

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

for part 5...

poor arnav...totally bowled by khushi's change of appearance...but they kissed...??????...ummm...i think arnav kissed khushi...

well never before he has seen someone tht beautiful...every time it was girls tht came running to him so he really never attracted to them or any one of them...

m waiting for the next part...

really looking ahead for this SS...

plzz continue soon dear...