Swaron OS confession part 3 pg 8 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
amazing os

loved it

it was simply wow

specially the last signature line... 😳😳

please do update soon

and do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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the confession part was mind blowing... do continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
awwieee varshu dii such a cute os
loved it
sharon thinking of swayam and blushing😳
swayam me room me khidki se hamaari diva haaaye
the confession was so awesome diii
the ending just stole my heart
jaldi se aglaa part upload karo cant wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
WOW just loved this confession and the way you portrayed Sharon's love for Swayam was mesmerizing.
All the dialogues are beautifully written.😳
When are you updating the next part?😃
Whenever you update, do PM me.😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waoo veryy nic os plzzz aur os likho
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Wow varshu amazing os. .
Loved it. .
N sharon comin from window about dis toh v use to talk in at n our confusion was ki Wat would she wear n come while jumping from window 😆 😆
Humara confusion clear kar do. . 😆
Beautifully written..
Update soon yaar June mein started still never updated. .
Pls update soon. .
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Part 2???😕
Waiting. Please update Varshu.😔
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nyc :)
update it sooon...n plz pm me!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29



PART 2

Hi guys actually i have forgotten about this One...😆😆😆Thanks shilpa deekhu and anmol for reminding of this one...and i was confused from long on what to update...iwas listening ti this song...so i felt like wrting this part which i would have loved to see in the show...it dint turn out to be great but im posting it...hope u guys will like it...😊😊😊 and guys pls comment and tell me how it is... Thank u for the response thank u so much...Agar acha response milega tho i'll continue...i have weird thought in mind...😊





Swayam walked into his room... with a content smile...he went to the window...he smiled to himself as he saw the ladder placed near window...

He just couldn't believe that finally this day came in his life

Swayam: Sharon loves me...sharon...loves me...

He jumped jumped ...and dance...just be interrupted by the pain of his shoulder...

But it dint bother him anymore...it was nothing before the feeling he is experiencing now...

Feeling of being loved by the one you love most...finally finally he had a feeling of content...peace...which was filled with emptiness till before... he smiled as a lone tear escaped from his eye...

Swayam: I love you Sharon...I love you sooo much...

Meanwhile Sharon drove fast to her home...she just parked the car and ran to her room as fast as she can...

She still couldn't believe that she has actually confessed her feelings to Swayam... She was smiling to herself like a maniac...as she felt she has attained inner peace after so many years...she never knew that being in love was so beautiful...she just couldn't get over the feeling of this beautiful" EHSAAS"...

She dropped down on the bed thinking if Swayam...Thinking about him..what he must be doing...what he must be thinking...

Swayam... She had thought how she never believed in love...how he has changed ther life...how empty she was without Swayam...being with him now made her feel as if she was the queen of the world...she just wanted to shout to entire world about this beautiful feeling...

Just then she felt as if someone was staring at her...she saw swayam staring at her...as she went near to touch him...he pulled her close...so close as if he was gonna kiss her...she kept moving forward ..only to fall on her huge teddy bear...

She just got shocked...and blushed and hit her head...and slept hugging her teddy bear...

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Sleep was the last thing Swayam could get...he was just waiting for the night to end...he so wanted to go and see her...He just kept turning on the bed staring at his cell phone...but the time doesn't seem moving...

Swayam: bas 10 min hua...aise kaise...cell thik tho hai...

He just kept the phone down with a irritated face and laid on the bed again...

Meanwhile Sharon was no less...She was so eager to meet swayam next day she just staring at the clock on the wall...

Shw never knew that she will pass her time starin at the wall clock begging it to move fast,...

She so wanted to talk to swayam and be with him...she had thought of messaging him...

Sharon: so raha hoga...health bhi teek nahi hai...hmm kal hi milungi...aurye clock...arrrey move na...tera problem kya hai...

After Sharon staring at clock and Swayam staring at cell phone for million times finally god has decided to grant them their wish by pushing the sun to rise a bit early...

Finally after what it looked like eternity they both came out of the house after getting ready...They have started to each other's house...thinking they will surprise each other...As usual they have missed and went to college quite early making a disappointed faces...cursing each other...Both of them entered RH at the same time...surprised to see each other...

Sharon was the first one to burst out...

Sharon: subhah subha kaha chale gaye,...

Swayam was surprised to hear that question from her as he was about to ask the same question...

Swayam: cut copy paste...same question back to u...

Sharon: meine pehle puchaa...ek min...tum mere ghar gaye ??...

Swayam: hmm...aur tum...mere ghar??

Sharon nodded...

They have burst into laughter.. both of them laughing at their stupidity...

Sharon was having hundred different emotions at the same time...she felt as if she had butterflies in her stomach...she was so excited she dint know...why...she so wanted to go hug him ..but she was feeling shy to do so...she just wanted to be with him... nothing else mattered to her...she was so lost in her own thoughts...

Swayam: kya soch rahi ho...

Sharon: woh..kuch nahi...

Swayam: woh mein kya soch raha tha...ki hum...kahi aur...

Just then gang entered as they have to practice the new routine...

They were surprised to Sharon and Swayam there...After their long enquiries they have all settled down and started talking...all of them have apologised Swayam for the misunderstanding they had yesterday...Swayam being swayam dint bother..and also he was not concentrating at the conversation as the only thing he wanted to do was being with Sharon...so was Sharon...they kept stealing glances...

They couldn't get a single moment together as they have to attend the classes...they dint know if they had so much to talk or do anything...they just wanted to be with each other...but one or the other interrupted them...they wanted to tell about their relation to gang and rey but both of them decided to do it after having discussion about it...

Before they could talk Rey broke down before them as Taani dint want to be with him...

They got busy in consoling him...making him feel better...

It was only in the night that they got some time for them selves... Sharon came running to cycle stand to meet swayam...Swayam was waiting for her day dint go as the have planned but they were just happy that they are with each other now...both of them dint wanna go home...but no one was saying it...

Sharon has sent her car back thinking of going with Swayam... Swayam dint get his cycle because of his inury...

Sharon: Hey Swayam...

Swayam: hey...

They both dint knew what to talk...

Sharon: woh tumhara haath teek hai...

Swayam: huh suddenly haath kaha se aaya...ha teek hai..agarr teek nahi hua tho bhi teek ho jaaye ga... he said looking into her eyes...

Sharon blushed...

Swayam: yaar 9 baj gaya...

Sharon: tho jaana hai...

He came close to her...and shook his head in negative( same scene :P)

Swayam: but u are getting late...tho chale...i'll drop u till ur car...

Sharon: bas car thak hi...( she said making a face...)

Swayam: Ha tumhara driver waait karega na...aur mein gaadi ya cycle chala nahi paunga...

Sharon: ha...woh actually driver aaya nahi...

Swayam: oh...chal i;ll drop u in rickshaw..

Sharon: rickshaw...nahi...matlab...we can walk na...

Swayam: par Sharon dur hai na...

Sharon:itne sawal swayam tumhe jaldi jaan hai kya...

Swayam smiled...nahi nahi...chalo chalte hai...

They kept walking silently ...just the thought of them being together is so beautiful for them...

Swayam: hum kab tak aise silent walk karenge...

Sharon: huh...she smiled...

Swayam: tho..

Sharon: tho...

Swayam: hum humare bare mein i mean...gang aur sab ko...

Sharon: ha mein bhi iske bare mei n baat karna chati ti...

Swayam: woh mein kya soch raha tha ki...jab tak taani aur rey ka relation teek nahi ho jaati..i guess humhe wit karna chahiye...

Sharon: wow...u stole my words...mein bhi yehi soch rahi thi...

Swayam: wow ab hum dono ek hi tarah sochne kage hai...i cant believe it...

Sharon: y...she has pinched him...believe it...

Swayam: aao Sharon... easy ok...

Sharon started laughing... Swayam finally forwarded his hand and held her hand...he entwined his fingers with hers and kissed her hand...

Swayam: Thank u so much Sharon...tumhe nahi pata ki tumne mujhe kitni kushi di...i love you son much...

Sharon: i love you too...she said resting her head on his shoulder...

They kept walking ...

Finally Swayam dropped Sharon to her house... She ran to her bedroom fast that she can see him from there and waved to him and glared at him to go when he refused to do so...she gave him a flying kiss...which he captured and stored in his heart,...finally heading to his house...

They went to bed thinking about each other...

Next day they were as usual busy with their work and choreography...

Aashi came back after long time ...

Everyone were present in RH and everyone greeted Aashi...

Aashi: Thank u guys...agar tum logo ko support nahi hote mein mummy ka khayal nahi rak paati...

Gang : arrey aashi tum bhi...

Aashi: woh actually tum logo ke liye ek gift hai...

Gang: kya gift...

She has opened a box containing kaju barfis

Aashi : maine khud banaya hai...lelo...telling that she went to Swayam and offered him first...

Sharon saw that and she felt aa bit wierd...

Sharon: sab se pehle swayam ko hi dena tha kya...

Swayam: wow aashi..thank u so much...this is my favourite...ek aur loon kya...

Aashi: lelo na...jitna chahiye utna lelo... aashi said with a radiant smile on her face...

Sharon blood boiled with anger seeing this scene...it boiled more when she saw Aashi blushing...Swayam was happily relishing the Sweet...

Aashi went to distribute it everyone...everything got over by the time she came to Sharon...

Aashi : arrey Sharon...im so sorry...woh khatam hogaya...ye saare boys na...

Sharon:its Ok Ashi... as she was least interested in eating the sweet...

Swayam was not even looking at her...he was busy oraising Ashi and relishing the sweet...

Enough she thought...she silently went and she dragged him out the RH without much ppl noticing ...

She took him to a abandoned class room...he was too shocked to react as she cornered him to the wall...( Same pose as she did in return kiss wala scene ...biscuit ke jagah pe imagine kaju barfi)

She stood infront of him shooting glares a him...but his cute face her smile...

She took out the barfi from his mouth...

He gave her a nervous smile...

Sharon: tho...kya chal raha hai waha ...

Swayam: kya...kya chal raha hai...

Sharon: wahi kisi ka itna tareef kar rahe ho...

Swayam: ha woh...Aashi ne itna acha sweet banaya aur woh merafav bhi hai tho...he said looking at her who has boiling with anger,,,,

Swayam: wait a min,...tum gussa kyun ho...oh god don't tell me ki ...u r upset with that...

Sharon: WHY NOTTT...ek nahi do do sweets liya...aur ek baar mere taraf bhi dekha ye bhi nahi ki meine khaya hai ki nahi...

Swayam: arrey yaar...woh acha that ho i took aur waise bhi tum sweets pasand nahi karti nahi na...tho maine socha ki...

Sharon: Just get lost...

Swayam: arrey Sharon...par ek baat batao...to mein Aashi ka tareef ki tumhe acha nahi lagan a...someone is jealous...

Sharon: What jealous my foot mein kyun...

She saw Swayam who was smiling...

Sharon couldn't help but blush,...

Sharon: ha i was... and mind u mister tum sirf mere ho aur tumhara taareef sirf aur sirf mere liye honge...other wise...

Swayam: ok...ok...relax...

Sharon: thats better...bas khate reh gaya ek baar bhi nahi dekha ki Sharon ne khaya ki nahi...usse share karun...kuch bhi nahi.

Swayam: arrey Sharon bola na...mujhe laga kit um nahi khati hogi...next time se yaad rakhunga...

Sharon: next time...matlab ab share nahi karoge...

Swayam: woh...jhoota hogaya na...

Sharon ate the sweet infront of him...

Sharon: ... tasty hain...sach mein...

She said and turned around and walked away smiling leaving a shocked Swayam behind...

Swayam came back to senses...he smiled to himself as he settled on the bench...thanking God ...

"HONA THA PYAR..HUA MERE YAAR " ...

Edited by varsh-mayur - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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My like button not working...anyways glad j updated yaar...I loved romantic swaron...they r so gud to see and read...i love whole part and especially sweet part. .

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