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shelly_Arsha

@shelly_Arsha

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Omg di this was the first written work i've read frm u (i think)
and i must say Woww!! 👏
loveedd itt, just awsome 😃

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Excellent!! super!!

Loved this totally !

U definitely won this challenge!!

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jasleen

@jas_ArSha_MaNan

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

hello di
i m apurva noot jas jas in is in the hospital suffering frm cancer so me commenting on her pms
anyways\
cuming to the update
wow di it was fanatbulous
marvellous
luvd it
luvd the cnco of swayam and rey on the fonr and kr conco in the garden after rey dragged her out
and\ufff the way kr confeeses luv for each other was fantastic
a,azing i m sending u buddy request pllzzz do acccept

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

supab os Live it very much

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Kanchi..

@Kanchi..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

superb os...😊

luvd it...❤️

amazingly written...👏

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@..Roop..

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

it was just superb...

i just loved it...

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Princess_Devil

@Princess_Devil

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

awesome OS...
loved it totally...
reading it again, its damm gud...

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d3_rox

@d3_rox

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Super amazing OS...

Really loved it!!:):)

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

superb awesome fantastic brilliant n beautiful r d words for ur work n even those r not enough.. ur works r always different n brilliant.. i always love ur works.. n this os s no exception in it... rey's character n d way he was n kria's character d naughtiness rey had to make kria quite n said s on her behalf.. d confession of rey was cute.. d slap followed by kria's confession was also brilliant... superb os... in love with this..

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

This was Superb 😃...

Kese Rey was all whiny whiny before meeting the girl N when he came to know the girl was Kria Ghai *Whom he has been in love with N has a not-so-good past history 😉* uske decision ne pura 360 degree ka turn liya 😆...

He didn't even let her speak a word N saw getting all naughty seeing her dressed in a sari 😳...

N then his proposal was Sweet ...

Jiske baad Kria ka confession sun ke he went into a shock 😆...

N then the story ended perfectly , ended by a Kiss ...

I so loved it ❤️...

Your writings have always been Great 👍🏼...

Thanks for the pm Manu or else i would have missed this beautiful story 😊