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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys,
Firstly thank you all for your lovely comments and sorry to those whom I couldn't reply back personally but yes I read all of the comment and saw the likes too...
I know you'll were waiting as I had promised to update every weekend. It was just that I had not logged on because of all the posts I saw on the forum pages. It was quiet disturbing and reading just the title of the post felt a bit uneasy. I'm not saying that people were wrong or something, I totally understanding what they are going through. But it's just that the post just bother sometime and I'm sure the writers on the forum will agree that when your are planing to write something, reading something like this can end up depressing your mind because of which you are unable to write.
I don't intent to hurt anyone so without further bakwas here is the update...
Enjoy reading 😉




Chapter 11

Days changed to weeks'.. weeks into months'.. And their relation growing stronger by each passing minute'.. each passing second'.. Swayam and Sharon were touching new heights of love'.. romance'.. togetherness'.. Everyone was so happy looking at these love birds madly in love with each other'.. Both were always together let it be a family function or an outing with friends'.. It had been quite a while that both had gone out alone'..

In the office'..

Swayam (to himself): Yaar bahut time ho gaya Sharon aur main kahin bahar nahi gaye'.. Wait I'll talk to her!

Phone convo (During break time)'.

Sharon: Hey!

Swayam: Hey love!

Sharon: Kya baat hai aaj bada pyaar aa raha hai!

Swayam: Pyaar toh hamesha hi aata hai par aaj mood kuch alag karne ka hai!

Sharon: Like?

Swayam: ummm'.. What about clubbing? Bahut time ho gaya hai that we both had some good fun together!

Sharon: hmmm'.. Sounds good! Par kahan?

Swayam: Wohi jahan hamesha jaate hai! So office ka kaam khatam karke I'll meet you there!

Sharon: Ok! But don't be late!

Swayam: Yeah baby I'll be there on time!

Sharon: I'll be waiting, bye!

Swayam: Love you!

Sharon: Love you too!

They both were super excited'.. Swayam and Sharon were the hottest couple known in the club'.. Once they hit the dance floor, people are just so mesmerised by their moves and chemistry, that they just keep their gaze fixed on them'..

Sharon entered one of the famous pubs in Mumbai in her sexy black cocktail dress that ended just a few inches down her hip'.. Her back half bare and just the knot holding the dress in places'.. Her hair well blow-dried'..Not much make-up but yet her natural beauty was making her look stunning'.. Shimmering silver stilettos and a silver-black anklet in her right leg'. A glittering black and silver Gucci clutch in her had that also had the cute diamond studded bracelet that he gifted her'.. As she walked up to the bar, many eyes followed her'.. She got herself seated on one of the bar chairs and ordered herself a cocktail'.

Sharon (in mind): God where the hell is Swayam? Let me call and find out!

But due to the blaring music she couldn't hear a word so she sent him a text'..

In Swayam's cabin'..

Swayam (to himself): Oh shit! I'm late! Sharon has already reached and I'm still working here'.. Mujhe toh abhi tak change bhi karna hai! I'm surely dead today! '

He was packing up all his work and just then his dad entered his cabin'..

Rishi (ordering): Swayam, come to my cabin!

Swayam: But papa'.

Rishi (angry): WHAT! In my cabin NOW!!!

Swayam (disappointed): Yes, sir!

Swayam immediately took his phone and sent Sharon a message'..

'Sorry baby! I know I'm really very late but have some important work'.. Just give me an hour I'll be there'.. Sorry for keeping you waiting'. Love you baby! See you soon!'

Sharon was hell irritated'.. She ordered another cocktail for herself as she had to wait for another hour'.. She was half way through her drink and was continuously fiddling with her phone trying to pass her time'.. Suddenly she heard someone talking to her'..

Boy: Hello Ms. Beautiful!

Sharon (irritated): Excuse me! Who are you?

Boy: Well, that depends on you!

Sharon (angry): Hey you Mr. Stranger better stay in your limits!

Mr. Stranger: Hey! Chill! Maine sirf tumhe bar pe akele dekha iss liye baat karne aa gaya! Don't worry I'm not trying to flirt or something!

Sharon: You better not kyunki agar mere fianc ne tumhe dekh liya toh he'll kill you!

Mr. Stranger (flimy): Kya?! You are engaged? Tumne toh mera dil hi tod diya Ms.Beautiful!

Sharon (showing her ring): Yes I'm happily engaged!

Mr. Stranger: Waise lucky man haan! Itni hot fianc and soon to be wife toh sirf naseeb walo ko milti hai! Kaash humara koi chance hota!

Sharon (disgusted): EXCUSE ME!

Mr. Stranger: Ok! Ok! I'm sorry! No flirting I promise! But baat toh kar hi sakte hai na!... By the way itni khoobsurat ladki aur itne happening club main akeli!

Sharon: I'm waiting for someone!

Mr. Stranger: Haaye! Woh kaun kumjarf hai jisne tumhe wait karvane ki jurrat ki!

Sharon: Tum kuch jyada hi flimy dialogues nahi marte!

Mr. Stranger: Kya kare jab aap jaisi khoobsurat hassena humare saamne baithi ho toh iss andaaz main guftagu karna laazmi hai!

Sharon (confused): Guf' what?! Anyways tum ho kaun aur karte kya ho?

Mr. Stranger: Well! Hum aapke hazaro chahne walo main se ek hai aur filhaal toh aapse baat kar rahe hai'..

Sharon (ignoring): Whatever!

Mr. Stranger: I noticed that yahan sab tumhe aur tumhare fianc ko bahut acchi tarah se jaante hai! I mean the DJ and even the manager and all!

Sharon: Are you stalking me or something?

Mr. Stranger: Ha ha ha'.. No no! Just curious to know!

Sharon: Well haan! Kyunki main aur mera fianc yahan bahut aate hai! And the manager is a good friend!

Mr. Stranger: Wow! Mr. & Ms. Popular haan!

Sharon: Waise tumhe koi dusra kaam nahi hai kya! Mere saath idhar baithke flirt kar rahe ho!

Mr. Stranger: Ha ha'.. It's nothing like that! Main bhi meri girlfriend ka intezaar kar raha hoon!

Sharon: Aur agar tumhari girlfriend ne tumhe mere saath aise baat karte hue dekh liya toh you think she'll be fine?!

Mr. Stranger: Oh ya definitely! She trusts me! And infact she won't even mind if I dance with someone else!

Sharon: Waoh! Lucky you! But I pity her!

Mr. Stranger (confused): And why would you say that?

Sharon: Just because she doesn't question you, tum advantage leke girls ke saath flirt karte ho!

Mr. Stranger: Ha ha! Well she knows that! But usse yeh bhi pata hai ke main uss se kitna pyaar karta hoon! Waise I'm sure agar tumhare fianc ne mujhe abhi tumse baat karte hue dekh liya toh woh toh mujhe zinda chodne se raha!

Sharon: What rubbish! He will never do something like this'.. Listen you don't know him so better not comment ok?!

Mr. Stranger: Oho! Blind faith haan! Impressive!!!... Hey! I'm sorry if I've offended you or something! I was just trying to pull off a conversation!

Sharon: No it fine! Tum itne bure bhi nahi ho! Bas thode irritating ho!

Mr. Stranger: Well, Thank you for the compliment Ms.Beautiful! By the way what's your name?

Sharon: aha! You're pretty fast aren't you? Waise main strangers ko apna naam nahi batati!

Mr. Stranger (comically): Shit! I thought I was close enough! Never mind! I won't give up!

Sharon: Ha ha ha! Keep trying Mr. Stranger!

Just then the both turned their heard around as they heard the DJ

'Hey you beautiful people out there! Let's have some good fun as it's the salsa night tonight! So all the lovely couple put on your dancing shoes and hit the dance floor'

Mr. Stranger: As we are still waiting so (putting out his hand) may I have the privilege to dance with you, Ms. Beautiful?

Sharon (with attitude): Better luck next time Mr. Stranger!

Mr. Stranger: Oh come on! Idhar baithe baithe intezaar karne se accha hum thoda dance karle! And I heard people saying that you are an amazing dancer! I can't call myself an amazing dancer like you but mujhe bhi thoda bahut dance aata hai! And I don't think your fianc will mind! So please!

Sharon agreed and they both moved to the dance floor'.. She stood there with Mr. Stranger in the right posture needed for salsa and were looking into each other's eyes'..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7S1sN4sFxw8

[Started off with the basics of salsa but on the pace of the song]

Behke behke nain, Cheene dil ka chain

Toh ye pyar hai

[Stranger pulled Sharon closer and guiding her to dip]

Koi intezar karde bekaraar

Toh yeh pyar hai

Yaadein dil ko tadpaye, Saansein ulajti jaye, Aankhen sapne dikhlaye

[Turning her while placing his hands on her hips and moving their hips together]

Jab anjaane

Aankhon se tu ghabraye, Raaton mein so na paye, Hathon ko malta jaye

[Turning her by holding her head and looking into her eyes]

Tu deewane

Hote hote oh yeah, Ho jane do na pyar

[Both were moving swiftly with the beats but it looked so elegant]

Shh shh shake that booty

Till I wanna get summer back duty

Everybody know user queue, everybody get little bit movie

Now your body your revenge got style

Tell me wonder in the about all dua

She just fuse the way that you move, She got gang she got the moves

Just bombay just Bombay

[Stranger was twirling Sharon and she managed to spin a number of times with the music]

Dhoondti hai nazar, Ek haseen ko agar

[Both walk sideways looking into each other eyes]

Koi armaan leke

Toh prem mein nagar ki taraf hai safar

[Dipping Sharon again and got her closer]

Dil ka sauda leke

Pighla sa pighla sa ho ju man [Swaying their body sideways]

Sundar sa sundar sa ho ju tan

[He moved his hand sensuously from her shoulder to her waist which made her close her eyes]

Dil jo dhadakte hai, Shole bhadakte hain, Hosh toh khota hai, Pyar jab hota hai

[A few more moves but this time they were lost in each other]

Hote hote oh yeah, Ho jane do na pyar

[Sharon came to his right and both continued grooving with a few salsa moves]

Behke behke nain, Cheene dil ka chain

Toh ye pyar hai

Koi intezar karde bekaraar

Toh yeh pyar hai

[Pulling her as a result she banged onto his chest]

Yaadein dil ko tadpaye, Saansein ulajti jaye, Aankhen sapne dikhlaye

Jab anjaane

[Moulding their bodies together looking deep into each other]

Aankhon se tu ghabraye, Raaton mein so na paye, Hathon ko malta jaye

Tu deewane

Hote hote oh yeah, Ho bhi jane do na pyar

Hote hote oh yeah, Ho bhi jane do na pyar

[Her one leg was around his hip, her hands on his shoulders'.. His hands holding her by her waist'.. Both yet lost looking in each other's eyes]

They came out of their trance when they heard the crowd applaud'..

DJ: 'Wow! Now that was sizzling hot!'

Sharon immediately straightened herself as she realised that she was completely lost'.. She hesitantly started walking away from the stranger'.. Just then she heard'..

'Sharon'.'

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So how was it?

Please leave in your comments and hit the like button...

Next chapter coming soon 😉

Edited by smartypantstanu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
arre re kaun aa gaya!!!

i hope its swayam only, just messing with sharon...

or maybe there is a twist?

lets see.

soon wala update smarty...ok?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

arre re kaun aa gaya!!!


i hope its swayam only, just messing with sharon...

or maybe there is a twist?

lets see.

soon wala update smarty...ok?

Ha ha Sochte raho 😆
and yes this time soon wala update 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
The update was awesome tanvish..👍🏼. But ab ye twist who called sharon after the dance I just hope this does'nt create any misunderstanding between swayam and sharon fingers crossed totally.. Plzz update soon and thanx for sending me a pm dear..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh holy lord!! why did u stopped there arrggghh!!! kitna chotu sa update upar se u have to stop in such a critical situation arrgghh I wanna eat you up.. 😡

well beautiful update sorry fr the outburst waise.. 😆
amazingly written.. loved it.. thanks for the PM 🤗

And do update soon otherwise I'll kill u I swear 😡 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohh god...
y did u stop der...
anyways awesom update...
thanks for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update soon and pls create any misunderstanding btw them!
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Posted: 12 years ago
oops i guess dats swayam in the end🤔
now wat does he think of all this is something we have to wait for...
pls update jaldi se😳
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update...😊
bt pls update soon...
nd thnx for the P.M
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Posted: 12 years ago
whose d guy Jo swaron le beech ara h :-(
its gng to b very interesting ;)

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