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--MISHTEE--

@--MISHTEE--

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Loved d update

tat was awesome nd beautifully written

u have described d emotions of a to be father

nd mother very well kudos to ur writing 👏👏👏

pls update soon

Edited by --MISHTEE-- - 12 years ago

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cherrybloom1

@cherrybloom1

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#182

awww this update was absolutely mindblowing...i loved how u showed arnavs fears and how khushi made him realize what he really is...every single word that you used in this update was absolutely beautiful!!! im having this really bad feeling that this story is coming to its end!!! is that true?

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: cherrybloom1
awww this update was absolutely mindblowing...i loved how u showed arnavs fears and how khushi made him realize what he really is...every single word that you used in this update was absolutely beautiful!!! im having this really bad feeling that this story is coming to its end!!! is that true?

its nowhr near its end !!!! 😉

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crazyfanofdsdv

@crazyfanofdsdv

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

loved the update

such an emotional update

very well placed

it was much needed

can't wait for the next update

awaiting the arrival of their baby

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meettu

@meettu

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Awsome update

Touched my heart

How khushi understands arnav

True soulmates don't need to communicate

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simran

@Laters_Baby

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

OMY GoSh u dedicated too me also me blushing ☺️nd happy m ths lucky to get dedication on my fav of ur wrkk 😛

finally me ready wd ur report card read at ur own risk

feedbck here 😉 👏

So frm strtng Jyo u choosed vry gd scene fr the begining arshi feeling the kicks of baby whch is 1 of the blissful moment in once lyf

I ws totly freaked out wondering wat is hs fear

sighh

So he is afraid dat wthr he all be gd dad or nt awww my baby arnie loved the way khushi assured him well I must say it here

yaar hw did u managed to describe the words so beautifully and I ws just in AWWW aftr readng

I can see a baby who has your ,

Sexy Smirk...

Crooked Smile...

Uncontrollable Anger...

Those Intense brown eyes...

A heart that can love its family like how its father does...

Thats how I imagine our baby, a complete replica of you , I see you in our child.

I see you all around me, your love surrounds me and thats how I want it to be, your web of love all around.

Totally flawless update must say a long 1 too so much in 1 update

Arnav shared hw he become ASR nd really it ws so touchy at ths point and again the supporting words of khushi dat hw much he is prefect nd comparison ws great .indeed arshi is epic tghthr frever a blissful couple who complete echothr

finally remark here HW could u do ths Jyo a cliff hnging

I ws just imagining the lip lock aftr reading hw her husband approached her luscious lips 😉

but u wat u did 😡

kabab mai haddi😲 .lolll

ok me running nw bfr u plan to beat me 👍🏼🤣

Edited by balsimransobti - 12 years ago

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Tasneem.. :-)

@MeWantBanana

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Oh my god, Jyo I was tearing by the end of it.!! :(
That was so so so god damn beautiful!! :')
Arnav's past was really heart wrenching and it was just so sooo well written.!!

I LOVED Khushi's assurance that he was going to be the best father any kid could have!! :D

The amount of love between ArHi is undefinable!! and I sometimes wonder how and why there aren't guys like Arnav in todays world!! but then again, when reality hits you, you realize that it can be pretty hard to be in a relationship with someone like Arnav!!

I love how you brought out the emotions of both Arnav and Khushi. Here, Arnav being the broken one! There truly made for each other!!!

And Yes, I was stalking you for updates!! lol :P

Amazing, amazing update!!!!!!! :D
Now i cant wait for the next chapter as well!!!!! :)

lots of love,
Tasneem :)

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#188

wow...too much beautifully written...Arnav's insecurity about himself...Khushi's assurance...Too awesome dear...loved it...
Is the past Arnav revealed has something to do with Khushi??Or I am thinking too much...

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Kinu22

@Kinu22

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#189

Update was super mind blowing I am so glad that Arnav love her so much & share his all feelings & worrys with her...
Khushi is so much understandig girl... She very well know how to make Arnav comfortable without any fear & worrys...
Awesome... 👏

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ara_000

@ara_000

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#190

DIS UPDATE SIMPLY BLOW ME AWAY...

FANTASTIC CHAPPY 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

EACH AND EVERY WORD OF DIS CHAPPY HAS SOOO MUCH DEPTH THAT I REALLY GOT LOST IN THEM...

NOW CUMING TO THE UPDATE -

I LOVE IT HOW ARNAV WAS FEELING HIS BABY'S EVRY MOVES BY PLACING HIS FACE ON KHUSHI'S BELLY...ND DEN SUDDEN FEAR EMERGED INTO HIM ND HE RUSHED OUT TO GRAB A GLASS OF WATER... A FEAR WHICH IS SOOO DANGEROUS,A FEAR WHICH IS SHAKING HIM UP TOTALLY,A FEAR WHICH IS BOTHERING HIM LIKE HELL...ND KHUSHI UNDERSTANDING DAT SUMTHNG IS BOTHERING HIM WENT TO HIM TO ASK IT ND THERE HE GOES,HE SAID HER ALL...HE SAID HER THAT HE IS AFRAID WHETHER HE CAN B A GOOD FATHER OR NOT,WHETHER HE CAN B ABLE TO MAKE HIS CHILDREN PROUD OF HIM OR NOT...ND DEN KHUSHI BEING KHUSHI,MADE IT CLEAR TO HIM DAT HE CAN B D BST DAD IN THIS WHOLE WORLD...

HER WORDS...AHHH THOSE WORDS R SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL ❤️

I LOVE IT HOW SHE SAID DAT ARNAV CAN NVR HURT HIS LOVED ONES...HE WILL NVR LET ANY EVIL TOUCH HIS LOVED ONES...

THE BEST LINES OF DIS CHAPPY -

"Do you know something Arnav ??

You always tell me how much you love me, have I told you how much I love you ??

I love you so much that I cant remember where I end and you begin, you have become so entrenched into my soul that my existence feels like an empty shell without you in it.

Every single second of my life, I can feel your life coursing through me, keeping me alive , making my heart race faster than a freight train when you are around, making me wish that I could spend every second of my life in your arms forgetting the rest of the world.."

OH GOD DIDZ TRUST ME WHILE READING THIS PART I WAS HAVING GOOSEBUMPS...HOW DO U MANAGE TO WRITE THESE WORDS WHICH SAY IT ALL DAT KHUSHI's LOVE IS PURE ND IT IS SO DAM STRONG DAT THEY SHE BREATHE FOR HIM...

GOSH I REALLY WANT TO GIVE U A TIGHT HUG FOR DIS

NOW CUMING TO ARNAV's PAST...ITS INDEED PAINFUL 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

ND I LOVE IT HOW KHUSHI DIRECTLY POINTED HIS FEAR...

TRUE NLY SHE KNWS HIM FROM IN ND OUT...

ND I LOVE IT HOW KHUSHI SAID IT DAT ARNAV IS TOO PERFCT FOR HIS FATHER TO EVEN IMAGINE ALSO...AHHH LOVED IT HOW SHE SAID DAT ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA -

Perfect Son

Perfect Brother

Perfect Friend

Perfect Lover

Perfect Husband

Perfect Father

TRUE THE NLY WOMAN HE HAS HAS KISSED,THE NLY WOMAN HE HAS TOUCHED,THE NLY WOMAN HE HAS EVER SAID THOSE THREE MAGICAL WORDS IS NONE BUT HIS WIFE,Mrs.KHUSHI ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA...

AND DATS IT HIS WIFE HAS YET AGAIN SUCCESSFULLY BROKEN ALL HIS WORST FEARS ND THERE HE BENT DOWN TO KISS HIS ANGEL...A KISS WHICH IS BILSSFUL,A KISS WHICH IS BEAUTIFUL,A KISS WHICH SAYS IT ALL...

DIDZ,U NAILED IT UP YET AGAIN...

FANTASTIC CHAPPY 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

LOVED EVRY BITS OF IT ❤️

AWSUM SIMPLY AWSUM 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

LOVE U DIDZ

MUAAAHHH

Edited by ara_000 - 12 years ago