Arhi FF: The Storm Thread 2--LINK TO THREAD 3 PG 147!

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#781

Such sweet poignant moments ...Khushi waking up to his care and concern , his deep abiding love ...beautifully written . Looking forward to the next update , hope it's very soon .

Thanks dear for the pm.

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gopikaaji

@gopikaaji

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#782

...too much pain...finally she is see through him...she is accepting his care, concern...much needed...for him...

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#783

The pace of the story is slow; no doubt but in some cases the languidness is its USP. And this one was a perfect example of the same.

Many a times we might come across a romantic or touching scene in a show or film and then wish that it wasn't hurried. Well I wouldn't have to wish for the same after this chapter becasue the way you portrayed it all was nothing short of watching a scene unfold in slow motion.

And because it was also devoid of many references to Khushi's current state with the subtle yet beautifully etched scene, this one easily comes across as my favorite chapter in this FF.

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Samyxx

@Samyxx

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#784

Beautiful update...

I wonder what will happen..

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dharsh

@dharsh

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#785

awesome updatee!!

beautifully written as usual! u rock!

now wondering what would happen next...hope she'll get well soon/...

waiting...update soon :)

thanks 4 the pm :)

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#786

i hopt it is nothing bad and she gets to live her life..

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#787

Damn. What is Arnav going through.

His anguish and suffering =/

Warmed my heart to read that she couldn't see him in discomfort.

It always amazes me how they seek support and comfort in each other.

Here's hoping that Arnav will protect her from everything.

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Aparna

@-aparna-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#788

God how much both r suffering
aftr a long long time i cried so much over FF
ur each and every updt making me weep badly
i cudnt even feel happy when arnav realized he loved her
they r seeking confort from each other although that small gap is still bet them coz of shyam
plzzz updt sooneer