SS: Of Lemons & Limes #5 (Chapter 20 - 22) - Page 70

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Posted: 12 years ago
Farah - Sigh. It was magical. Arnav is in love with Khushi but kahi der na ho jaye. Hayee - you got the pain and angst of Arnav down to T on this update. Itna dard bhara update. I am like Devi Maiyaa sitting and hoping Khushi doesn't go ahead and do the most stupidest thing she can do. Wish these two talk to one another. Loved the way you incorporate the classic scenes of IPKKND in your updates. The Faraq padhta hai track was the best track in IPK and loved the way you have written down the dialogues of Arnav, the one he says to Anjali here. Anjali finally has told Arnav what he has to do. Just hope Arnav goes and gets his Khushi back. Can't wait for the next update now. Hayee - I am going to go in a blissful sleep now dreaming of Arnav and Khushi. Thanks for updating on time and before I called it a night.

PS:- The last photo of Arnav drenching in rain leaning on his SUV - Hayee, one of the classic scenes of IPK and BS. Loved the way you have written this shot with that scene in the update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
the update was ... no words...sigh...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Logged in to IF..and what did i get to see...Ur Update😃😃Ahhh...wat an Update it was Farha di👏Asusual Great one👏I Loved,Loved the update...The way u wrote his emotions...Love u for writing this Awesome chap this way🤗
Arnav and his inner turmoils...*Sigh*...I dunno wat to do jus like Anjali, to Smile or to be sad for his suffering...Finallly he is realising his Lemon is his everything in his life more than Money and Work.😃
But seeing him suffer like that😭... Arnav thinks she doen't understand him..But he doesn't kno she is the one who understands him more😃...I am really waiting for Khushi's Pov to their small convo in the dark alley...I really wanna see what is she feeling.I am sure she would have seen the pain and the ample amt of hurt in his eyes😃Oly Devi maiyaan knows hw much pain she was in
But in between all these things...I really loved the scene wer Arnav was waiting for her under the tree😉Jus like a Lover Boy waiting for his girl to come😳And him noticing his lemon's each and every Action😉
But wher is the Girl nw😕And Arnav remembering her saying abt taking leave before weddingEagerly waiting for the next chap and Khushi's Pov...
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww such emotional chapter u have written it very beautifully ...Arnavs pain hope he goes now n says whats is there in his heart,thank u so much dear for update...even u r not keeping well u updated 🤗
already excited for next part waiting, thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update loved it 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Edited by ajoop - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update!!
waiting for Arnav to go and find Khushi :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
This here is my heart. *imagine, please*
This is my heart, broken into millions of tiny pieces, all wailing the same thing, "Nahiii"!

NO! This can't be happening. I want to sob but I can't!! This is not fair!! You cannot write this so beautifully and make us sob. Cholbe na.

This was awesome! I could literally feel the waves of despair and restlessness flowing through Arnav. The wait and hope dying within Khushi. Ah!! IPK-dard all over again.

Next chapter, things fixed, na? Devi Maiya, help him!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Absolutely fantastic. Kept me on the edge of my seat.
Cant wait for the happy ending.
please Please devimaiyaa fix this . Give Arnav some solace.
Edited by vks11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Damn u arnav damn u khushi and damn this stubbornnesss and damn u farah( no no no damn u, ur still ill :D)
this guy is just tooo much
went ahead and said i believe u
like seriously
now K is going to get married...i guessshe is not...just lying*fingers crossed*
i want him to say i love u my lemon hahhaaa
hey plz updt soonish hun
and hope ur better now
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Posted: 12 years ago
God ! I hope Arnav does something now.

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