T2-ariya ss-tu meri jaan hai. part18

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kaveriw2008

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

omg...this is breaking news yaar

i really dont know how to comment on this

beautiful but still so bad...

u really written so well and awesome

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pinky gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Who was it..????????????????????

Riya: bhai bahar koi agar kisine sun liya hoga toh?

Ayesha: par hum toh akele the office mein…

Rathore: mein dekhta hoon..kaun hai wahan?

Suddenly a figure appeared… all tensed….

I can be shree, chotu or ajrun… or may sme 1 else…(new entry may be)

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pinky gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

hope u all like the update...i knw i took tme but i wanted to work on

every single emotion of riya...

i hope i succeeded in explaining riya's position and her feelings

comments ke liye waitng...

next part ,,,,, jaldi hi ...

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

you made full justice of all emotion of a girl and as well as riya

damm this is so realistic

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pinky gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

hey kaveri thank u so much for ur comment .. u r always the first to like and comment...

hearty thanks to u

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kaveriw2008

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

because u always full-fill all my needs for ariya as well as shana

i love you dear

u are a awesome writer dear...

ur every story create an enchant on me

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kriti22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

i just logged in and got ur updte...

just awsome... work ... teach me too write sme...

wait u did was beautifully treated...

i hope nw arjun cmes to knw the truth soon

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Anjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

so beautifully u have brought out the feelings of rathore ayesha and riya

i think it was shree at the door??? will he support her ...friend ??

will arjun realise ??? wow ...so may questions now ...plspls update soon else i go mad with curiosity

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573339

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

superb update :) loved it

riya is pregnant

and she doesn't wanna tell arjun about it

riya's emotions regarding the baby were portrayed beautifully

riya's mom wants her to abort the baby how sick

poor riya lost her family support 😭

finally rathore knows riya is pregnant

and glad that rathore and aisha are supporting riya in all this

omg someone heard their conversation

i really hope it's arjun

can't wait to read more

thanks for the pm

please continue very soon

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devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#100

super duper update yar...
omg so riya is pregnant...
her emotions feelings everything is very beautifully portrayed...
she doesn't want arjun to know anything... she loves him so much ki usko dukh mai ni sakti...
and her parents they aren't supporting her but
glad sameer and aisha are there to support her...
omg someone heard them??
who was at the door???
continue soon...