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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome part.. loved d way sharon yelled at boys n d way she said she ll only come to c swayam til medical room n not rey.. bouys were funny.. loved it.. even loved d scene which was wonderful in show..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very pleased with the comments and likes :D
thank you so much. I couldn't write much the past few days...no time at all...12thie so...:P But this is an incomplete chapter...hope y'all like till where I've written :)
Part III
They waited in the waiting room and as they waited they thought about the events that took place earlier. "Mr. Shekhawat? Aap andar jaa sakte.." the nurse called him. They got up and went to the doctor's room. "Aah come in come in...Umm Swayam isn't it? Ok so what's the matter?" the doctor asked looking at swaron expectantly. "Wo kuch nai doctor, meine dance reharsals mein gira aur shoulder mein thoda dard ho raha tha, aur sab sab as in she" swayam said gesturing towards sharon "bought me here". "No doctor ye jhoot bol raha hai" she said glaring at swayam and continued, "Actually ye gira aur uske shoulder sprain hua tha, aur wo dard aggravate ho raha hai..." she said to the doctor. "Hmm...ye kab hua?" doctor asked. "Umm 2 din pehle" she said. "Ok, mein thoda check karlunga aur aap please shirt uthariye..." the doctor said. Swayam hesitatingly removed his shirt. The doctor flexed his arm up and down and then felt the place of injury. He frowned. "I think you need to take a x-ray and come back" the doctor said. "Kya hua doctor kuch serious hai?" sharon asked. "Maybe, aap x-ray lekar aaiye" he said.
They took the x-ray and came back to the doctor. The doctor asked them to come back the next day. And so they left for their respective homes.
"Bhai aap teek to hai na?" Taani asked anxiously. "Haan mein teek hoon ye tho..." he started only to be cut off by his dad "Tum kitni weak ho? Ek choti si chot ki wajah tum doctor se jaya? Tum unfit ho, Rey se kuch sikho fitness ke baare mein. Wo perfect hai" his dad told him. "Tauji par bhai ko..." Taani defended her brother. "chodo Taani ye nahi samjhega" Swayam said in disgust. "par bhai..." Taani started but stopped when Swayam left after giving his dad a disgusted glare.
Swayam banged the door of his room and then hit the table to vent his frustration. In his anger he'd forgotten about the injury and had hit the table with it. Pain shot through his arm and he yelled ow. Taani came running into the room alarmed, followed by his dad who looked curious. "Bhai! Lagi tho nai?" she asked. "Nai mein teek hoon, mein bhul gaya aur meine table ko maara.." he winced hard. "Taani wo hot pack mera bag pack mein hai please usse de do na?" he asked. His dad stood still watching the scene. Taani handed him the hot pack as he undid the buttons of his shirt. *ting tong* the bell rang.
"Jao Taani, mein khud apna khayal rakh saktha" Swayam said. Taani hesitantly went, before which his dad had gone to open the door. "Tum? Sharon..right?" his dad asked her. "Yes uncle...wo..is Swayam home?" she asked. "Haan wo yahan hai, apne kamre mein, andar aao na? Kya hua?" he asked gesturing her to come inside. "Wo actually, Swayam ko chot lagi na, isliye..." sharon replied carefully. "Tho? Wo thoda sa chot hai, badi si nahi, aap log myun itni pareshaan lag rahe ho?" his dad asked her. 'Kyunki usse uska pappa pyaar nahi kartha aur usse pyaar ki bohot zarurat hai' she thought to herself and replied, "Wo humare dance reharsals hai...so...we need him" she said. "Tum bhi dancer ho? Par I guess a smart dancer, the all rounder type?" he told her smiling. "All rounder nahi hoon mein uncle, aapke beta all rounder hai, athletics, academics, extra curricular sab kuch aata hai usse" sharon said absently, thinking of every aspect of his. "Bilkul perfect, be it in love friendship or anything else" she finished. "Love? Uska girlfriend bhi hai?" Swayam's dad asked eyebrows raised. Swayam entered to see who had come. "Who has a girlfriend?" he asked. "You...do you love anyone?" his dad asked him. Swayam felt awkward, his dad had to ask this question in front of the very person he loved with everything he had, every cell in his body said sharon;His eyes darted towards her automatically; "Haan pyaar karta hoon" he said automatically, making sharon look up in shock. "Huh? Abh yebhi karne lagi ho tum, sab kuch mere against" his dad asked. "pyaar karta hoon, bohot logon se, maa se, rey se Taani se...bohot logon se aap nahi samajh payengi" he cut his dad off, glaring at him again.
Pms later :)
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Vadhana
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
awww...such a cutee part...

m loving this caring sharon😳

i guess a showdown is on our way😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome part 👏
loved it ❤️
excited to read the next one do update soon!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome part.. loved it.. sharon was feeling revealed wen she understood swayam was complimenting her n not aashi n d feel which she felt was beautiful... thanks for that girl who fainted n nurse that sharon got to apply balm n ice for swayam which took both to another universe were only swaron were there ... loved d way she told swayam in authority that they r going to doc n not restaurant was beautiful.. waiting for next part..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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here's part 3b hope y'all like itRead Like Comment 😉

Part III b
Sharon just looked at both of them unable to ease the tension between father and son. "Sharon tum yaha kyun aayi?" Swayam asked. "Wo...wo...wo...haan tumhe chot lagi na tho meine..." she started when Swayam cut her off saying, "Yahan nahi...tum jao aur agar tum chahe tho call karo" By then his dad had left, thanks to Taani who had called him aside so that there won't be anymore fights. "mein tumhe dekhne ke liye aayi..i know ki tum khud apna khayal nahi rakh saktha" she said. It was his turn to feel awkward now. "No sharon actually I'm fine...tum fikr karne ki koi zarurat nahi." he said. "Wever, mein kuch nahi sunnewali, hot pack kahan hai?" she asked. "Wo...mere room mein" he said. "Chalo abhi..mein Taani ko bataungi ki mein tumhara khayal rakhungi" she said in the diva tone. "par sharon..." he started "Chup..." she said.
Swayam's room
"Kahan hai hot pack?" sharon asked looking around. "Sharon..." he tried again. "chup rahe nahi sakthe tum? Kitni bolthi ho tum? Shirt utharo" she commanded, while spotting the hot pack and reaching out for it. "sharon this is awkward" he finally told. "I don't care" she said, secretly feeling awkward herself but the satisfaction took over awkwardness, satisfaction of taking care of him. "Tum kyun ye sab kar rahi ho? Ho kaun ho tum meri?" he mumbled a bit too loud getting frustrated with the growing confusions in his head. Yes the confusion ate him up little by little. So many confusions...his dad, sharon, dance ndc d3 ACS so many responsibilities, so many roles it was taking its toll on him. He was helpless. He didn't know wether his dad had even an ounce of affection for him, if he had he didn't show it. He wanted to be appreciated by his dad, just like rey was..too much to ask? Then sharon, he knew she loved him...'liked' him...but why wouldn't she say it. She is perfect just the way she is. He loves her for who she is inside not the facade that she puts on. He loved every aspect of her...she was his other half. Break up was she wanted because of her asthma...but then why did she keep coming back to him...each time more friendlier and more caring, she understood him better, she showed it too...then what was dropping her? These questions haunted him, wrecked him inside. Yet he put on a smile for her sake for everyone's sake.

She stopped in her tracks. His question pierced through her again, like a bullet through her heart, a knife through skin...it broke her, wrecked her too not being able to tell him her true feelings. She knew that he knew. He definitely did, her eyes and her actions always gave her away. But still why did it hurt so much, everytime she tried staying away from him? So much that she couldn't bear the seperation? Why did she feel jealous whenever she saw aashi with Swayam, though they were having a normal casual talk unlike the intense ones that she and him shared? Why was she scared he'll leave her? So concerned for him? She shook her head to clear off the disturbing questions. Right now she only felt hurt above everything else. She replied curtly, "You're right...ho kaun hoon mein teri? Tumhare khayal rakhne ki?" and unable to say more she left, leaving a regretful frustrated Swayam and an astonished Taani. Swayam was cursing himself when Taani came in and helped him out. She pressed the hot pack to the injured part just like sharon had, but Swayam missed the feel of her hands. His siren's hands. He missed everything about the medical room. Her careful hands massaging his shoulder, the way she'd applied balm to the injury. She'd balmed this injury, but what about the injury in his heart? With these thoughts he slept, his dreams turning into nightmares that night.
She on the other hand was devastated. She was angry at herself. Furious at herself. Why couldn't she do it? She'd seen it for herself. He loved her, even with all her faults. He was concerned for her. He felt the same way for her as she felt gor him. They both were passionate about each other then why?! Her eyes blurred. Angry tears streamed down her face as she took out her anger on her room. She threw her stuff around and in the process hurt herself. Finally unable to vent out anymore, fatigue took over and she drifted off to a dreamless sleep, her last vision was of a drop of blood slowly making its way across her palm.
Next morning, they woke up in their respective rooms resolving to their selves to behave properly and think about last night. They quickly got ready and Swayam waited for sharon. She came to pick him up, and both of them gave each other a big smile that didn't reach their eyes. They drove to the hospital, and went to see the doctor. The doctor was grim. He ushered them in and then slowly said, "I'm afraid, you won't be able to dance much mr.shekhawat. Its a ligament tear and you'll have to undergo surgery after which you shouldn't do anything that will cause stress to your shoulder including dance." "What?!" sharon and Swayam spat out, completely shocked. "Ye nahi ho saktha doctor! He has to dance! It is his life our lives! Nahi aap galat keh rahe hai" sharon yelled at the doctor. Swayam remained silent trying to digest the news. "I'm afraid it is very much true, we'll know if he can or cannot dance only once the surgery is done" the doctor said. "Toh aap kisliye wait kar rahe hai? Do the surgery dammit!" sharon yelled at the doctor. "Can i have sometime doctor to digest the news?" he quietly asked. "Of course, but we need to operate by tomorrow" the doctor said. "Thank you" Swayam said quietly and left the room. "Mrs.shekhawat, please bear with me i know it's very difficult for both of you" the doctor said. "But I'm not..." sharon started to deny the mrs.shekhawat part but stopped. "Doctor mein usse sambhalungi, anything else?" she asked in a much quieter tone. "that's it then" the doctor said and then Sharon ran after him, but he was no where to be seen. She drove to the college knowing where he'd be. And she found him there too, sitting on the water tank on the terrace.

please read like and comment :) luv y'all :D <3 you're all amazing :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Puri story hi twist kardi...interesting...i m luving it...,
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow amazing update
Sharon at swayams place wah!!!
wat a twist u hv brought in the story
swayam cant dance n sharons reaction to it was wow
"dance is his life our lives"
n den doctor saying mrs shekhawat I couldn't stop smiling n Sharon didn't even responded back on dat😆
I am loving this story
update soon
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it's getting more and more interesting believe me!!
what a twist re!! 👍🏼
I am so damn excited to read further!!
awesome part 👏
and the Mrs.Shekhawat part was adorable 😳
do update soon!!! 😃
thank you for the PM dear 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update...👏
can't wait for the next part!!
plz update soon..

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