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Amanram

@Amanram

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#931

have just caught up with chapters 72,73 and 74 - phew so much going on - Anjali playing her bit, Rohan protecting his sister like a true brother , arnav coming to terms as to how big a duffer he has been with khushi and khushi just in the middle of it all -

khushi going missing is the just the tip of the iceberg - the raw emotions of Arnav - complete understanding dawning on Rohan in that precap - that was just too powerful

and to involve Shyam as the villain of the piece - what a masterstroke and so much in keeping with our original IPKKND - just love it!!

And what is WRONG with Lavanya - what a selfish and childish B****H1!!

Arnav ki bache - you better find her SOONER rather than later and have it out with Shyam the snakewa and never leave the damsel in distress thereafter!!

Chapter 75 needed urgently please😆

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#932

Shyam!! You douche-bag!

I knew it wasn't Karan, just knew it, somehow!! Argh.. I feel like throwing something at that man. And a delicate vase at Lavanya's air-filled head too! Her friend's in danger, for heaven's sake! She saw it with her own eyes! What more in the way of a push does she need to go tell the police what she saw instead of crying over her idiotic thoughts!! She's stupid, I'm sorry. There is logic behind why she feels the way she is feeling now, but she's just shallow and stupid. Humph.

I loved that part where Arnav sees her everywhere - it was done to perfection, like I was watching it, instead of reading! The way you show how everything discombobulates around him and he can do nothing about it - his despair, his anguish, it's wonderful. I also love how Rohan sees the pain in his friend's eyes - I hope it told him something, more than Arnav's words did.

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#933

the update was really very good..very well written..keep it up...Arnav's pain, desperation all was clearly visible...really interesting...please do update soon..😊

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#934

How do you do this?
The emotional quotient was quite high and every person's worry, grief was clearly etched out.
Is Aman ever wrong? He has such a nice way of making people understand specially Arnav.
His logic, calmness even in the middle of this critical situation is worth appreciation.
I guess with Arnav kind of lost it lies in Aman's hand to shoulder the responsibility of Arnav with him.
Why La has to be like this? How can she do like this? I just hope her guilt & concern outweighs the fear of police and what everyone else would think before it gets too late.
I don't understand how could she leave her friend even if not her friend then a girl who she knows is in so much of danger?
La c'mmon get up and right your wrong. You still have got some chance.
As I thought its shyam..😡 Is Karan also with him?

The precap makes me feel more emotional with both friends focusing all their concern for one girl. This is making me cry.
I hope you update soon...

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564436

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#935

Farah what a brill update even without ArHi I'm speechless it was just...

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Shinja

@Rainbow_petals

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#936

So beautiful chapter..

Arnav's emotions was , they are described so nicely and beautifully

i'm glad aman said all that to Arnav..

oh i'm worried about Khushi..

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robinhood008

@robinhood008

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#937

That was an amazinggg update!!!

Clearly m in awe at your writing skills n how u moulded the story

Arrgghhh how can lavanya do this to a sweetheart like khushi n she is all mum even after locating the plc n culprits

But m sure aman will trace her down n I jUsss loved how he explained arnav the pros of marriage

Loved reading it to bitss

Amazinggg update!!!