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Posted: 12 years ago
Matlab I get busy temporarily and YOU UPDATE? And I have no idea about the updates because they're on a new thread? Hayeee, Congratulations on the new thread!

The chapters, good god! Full fledged drama scene on yahan toh! Oye hoye! As sad as it was, it was equally thrilling. The ASR vs ROHAN show down, that was so sooo good! I think I was trembling with rage at Arnav's words, but also at Rohan's interruption when he didn't even let Arnav complete his sentence about his intentions for khushi.

Arnav and khushi, oh they're always explosive but this time, I was literally on the edge, almost jumping in my seat and at the verge of crying at everything they said, his every lost attempt to grab her, hold her, comfort her, that was just so so so brutal, she didn't let him touch her...

With Anjali's support, the future looks less dimmer if not brighter.

p.s. Welcome back, love :D

cheers
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww... I am feeling really bad for all...
Plz plz plz sab Jaldi thik kardo...
Well that was a great update I should say...
It made me cry...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update farah, those dialogues are powerful man, I remember each and every scene of the dialogues when I read them! Beautifully incorporated into the story! Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
So glad to see you back - just got caught up on the last 2 updates and loved it!!! Arnav really knows how to dig himself a nice deep grave when he gets angry. No surprise there!! Hope he realizes soon what he needs to do and get back with Khushi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Welcome back...so happy to read your updates😊

Arnav is a man who never learns from his mistakes...he always lets his anger get the better of him, and this time, it really hurt, both him and Khushi (as well as Anjali and Rohan).

I can see why Khushi is so hurt, but after knowing him so well, she should have understood when he was coming from. I'm not saying she should have forgiven him immediately but maybe listen to him, but knowing the strong minded person Khushi is as well, I can see why she decided not to do that.

I can definitely understand Rohan's reaction to what he walked in on. He of all people knows all about Arnav and his flings, and to see his sister as one of his "conquests" is not an ideal situation. Loved how protective he was of Khushi.

Great chapters, hope to read more soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Farah,

Take a Bow!! Not only for the brilliance in your writing but for the magnificently blending the famously IPK dialogues into your story.

I so agree with you, IPK had the best dialogues writers. They were brilliant and did exceptional job not just for Arnav and Khushi but each and every character. I personally liked the dialogues so much that even if somebody wakes me up in the sleep and asks me a line from an episode I can say it. And then Barun and Sanaya gave life to the dialogues.

"Words don't have the power to hurt you unless the person who said them means a lot to you." ~ Unknown.

Arnav and Khushi both are impulsive when they are angry and say things they do not mean and hurt each other and today they just shattered each other. Glad Arnav realized his mistake and understands he hurt Khushi and regrets it so first thing is done. Second he needs to apologize which he is trying to and I am sure he will.

Khushi the tigress is back and they attack you more when they hurt, and Khushi is hurt beyond words. I think she is hurt more for not what is said but who said it. Once the dust settles down I am sure she will be the one who will help Arnav and their relationship come out of this mess.

Glad Anjali stayed back with Arnav, he needs her right now, only other person who understands him and can console him. Oh! I felt so bad for Arnav when he kept his head on Anjali's lap and let all the tiredness and pain take him over.

Rohan, Anjali, Khushi, Arnav everybody is hurt and it's a dark phase in their lives. I only wish they all stand by each other and resolve this big mess because end of the tunnel there is light.

I am in line to read those 5 "SAYs"😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the conversation between arnav and anjali...reminded me the earlier days of IPK...waiting for new update!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm glad you're back finally. Just read 70&71. This story is really close that I don't miss checking for an update almost every other day.
Though Rohan knowing the truth was good in a way but I didn't expect Arnav to say what he did. Loved the way u used the IPK dialogues. I missed those days.

Both the updates were totally mindblowing. Can't wait to know more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Farah hun jaldi update kardo...
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Posted: 12 years ago
well written asr and Anjali world best sis-bro duo
loved it
was pretty sad update

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