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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#331

Wow! Chapter 71 up before I'd even had a chance to comment on 70!! You're spoiling us!! 😆

You've blown your usual high standard away with the last two chapters. You said before that it wasn't going to be smooth sailing and you weren't kidding!!

The revelation of their relationship was always going to cause waves, but this was like a perfect storm!...the wave was insurmountable !

Poor Arnav...he's only able to think in a cold logical way when his emotions are not involved...this is the way of someone who's ignored their emotions for so long that he can no longer handle them or have a way of rationally processing them...and...for someone who loves control so much, the frustration this causes leads to toxic anger. The man needs a few sessions with a good psychiatrist!...or his sister!!

Loved the second update for the Anjali/Arnav conversation...Arnav has a ready made psychiatrist in his sister if he'd only open up to her. An absolutely beautiful moment between the siblings. I love how simple Anjali makes things seem...and how much good she can do for him if he only lets her in.

These two chapters make me think how strength is not about keeping it all in but about being able to let it all go.

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nazca

@nazca

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#332

It is easy to say, think yourself putting the shoes of the other. But I always wondered how authors just change the emotions of the caracters with out overlaping the issues. Here the four, you expressed the views of four with the different modulation and depth. The cake may be taken by arnav but according to me the cherry goes to Rohan only.

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sb1234

@sb1234

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#333

beautifully written Farah .. the whole conversation between Arnav and Anjali was heart touching .. i hope Arnav gets into his head and apologises to Khushi and Rohan

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anonyasr

@anonyasr

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#334

Lovely chapter again. Oh, oh- is K being clairvoyant when she puts forth her Devi Maiya dialogue..

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wildandsweet

@wildandsweet

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#335

wow

beautifully written

and anger and hurt that khushi felt

the conversation between anjali and arnav was sweet

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#336

Fari thanks to you now i don't know what to comment *glares*

I loved the rehashed inclusion of so many brilliant dialogues delivered by two brilliant actors!

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#337

Very emotional...love will cross all barriers...they can't live without each other...I loved your update..so real!

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clarissajohn

@clarissajohn

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#338

Nothing more to say my song will convey what I feel

Dedicating this song for arnav case I feel bad for him more than khushi I dunno

Fab update farah feeling so bad

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte

Tere bina kya wajood mera

Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge

Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

Kyunki tum hi ho

Ab tum hi ho

Zindagi ab tum hi ho

Chain bhi, mera dard bhi

Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Tera mera rishta hai kaisa

Ik pal door gawara nahi

Tere liye har roz hai jeete

Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi

Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina

Har saans pe naam tera

Kyunki tum hi ho

Ab tum hi ho

Zindagi ab tum hi ho

Chain bhi, mera dard bhi

Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#339

I am glad arnav opened up to anjali!! He has finally voiced his fear out loud, and the worst possible thing has already happened!

Now he is going to have to do a lot of grovelling and making up to do to both Rohan and Khushi! I hope he succeeds, and anjali can help in her own way!