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Posted: 12 years ago
great update...fully charged...but very tragic that the strongest bonds formed in this story are crumbling badly...extremely well written.

arnav has no control of what he says...its unfortunate khushi heard it. Her sorrow was so intense that her comeback must have hurt arnav equally...

rohan was good...ever loyal brother...his protection towards khushi, his thoughts before talking to arnav is very well said. Shows how mature he is amongst all of them.

the point where you had left definitely needed a follow up...Rohan witnessing arnav-khushi kissing is heights...mortification personified. Again Arnav-khushi exchange shows their comfort level and trust. Khushi expressing her feelings towards arnav to rohan shows her honesty and innocence.

thanks for the update and so glad your back,

take care...

sri.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice to see an update after a long long time😊...it was wonderful n as expected...i had thought he would say he loves khushi but marriage was far for now...guess once her marriage is fixed he might change in fear of losing her forever...but again his bad words for her have spelled their curse over their relationship...now he has to win her back along with fight his own demons of past...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb Update...
Congrats for the New Thread...

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Posted: 12 years ago
What a comeback update
ThunDerous clash between brother and lover ahaa

loved how you described everything
missed you so much farah
ahhh .. i still shivering at the impact of the update
this was beyond words


loved it immensely
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing Update!!! Back with a Bang... Eagerly waiting for the next update!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Farah, Welcome back!!
What an intense roller-coaster update you gave! Whatever scenarios I imagined about how the clash of titans will happen, this update was so much more than that!

I can't believe Arnav blurted that crap in anger!! I have no clue how you will show the mending. OMG! I felt bad for Arnav as well as Khushi!

I can't even ask you to update fast.

But thank you for such a looong update!
In your author's note before update, you meant all your readers right?

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow Farah what a comeback!!! Awesome update. Poor Arnav:-(( I wonder how he is going to make everything alright. Can't wait for the next part:-))

Thankx again.
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Posted: 12 years ago
welcome back..it lovely i am following this FF from past few months.. i just loved this ff..but i think its good that it happened as it will make him realize that how much he love her and that he is ready for the commitment..lets see
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Posted: 12 years ago
AND U R BACK WIT A BANG 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
WOW SUPERB CHAPPY 👏 👏 👏 👏
WEN WILL ARNAV UNDRSTAND DAT HIS VIEWS ABOUT MARRIAGE IS TOTALLY SUMTHNG UNACCEPTABLE...
WEN HE WILL UNDRSTND DAT THIS SOCEITY WILL NEVER CARE ABOUT HIS THOUGHTS...
HELL HE IS SUCH AN IDIOT 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡
KHUSHI,MY POOR KHUSHI 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
SHE IS DEEPLY HURT ND DIS TYM HER PAIN IS UNBEARABLE ND PRECAP SHOWS IT ALL...
HER WORDS R SIMPLY PAINSTAKING 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
I JUST HOPE ARNAV WILL UNDRSTND HIS MISTAKE SOON ND WILL DRAIN OUT HIS STUBBORNESS ND WILL ACCPT THAT HE WILL MARRY KHUSHI COZ HE CAN NVR LIVE WITOUT HER...
I WANT HIM TO REALISE DIS COZ NLY DIS REALISATION WILL HELP HIM TO BREAK HIS NOTION ABOUT MARRIAGE ND TO ACCPT THE FACT THAT HE WILL MARRY KHUSHI...
LOVELY CHAPPY...
SIMPLY FANTAFTIC...
EACH ND EVRY EMOTIONS HAVE BEEN PENNED DOWN MINDBLOWINGLOY 👍🏼
WELCUM BACK SWEETY 😃
WAITING FOR THE NXT CHAPPY NOW 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG farah, you are back with a bang my dear! It was full paisa wasool entertainment, I could see the scenes in front of my eyes. Perfect, brilliant! Don't have enough words! Thanks for the pm.

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