ARHI FF:MASTERCLASS THREAD 9: LINK TO NEW THREAD ON PG 161

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Hey!

Thankyou for the PM.

Hope you are doing well ...

Well-written.

I'm enjoying the cameradie and the flirty and fiery comments passed between Payal and Aakash.

Its fresh ... amusing at times to read.

Ummm ... a challenge is what Payal wants ... then that is what she'll get ... well from Aakash's point of view 😳😆😉😉 Sexy!!!

Wow! Angad ... Khushi was engaged to him ... ok take a deep breath ...

What ... why ... How ... When ... Apart from these questions ... ASR ... aka Arnav ... Khushi's husband ... I'm sure he'll have something to say about Khushi being uncomfortable whilst being in the presense of Angad ...

I love this story! Please do continue it and end the story how you intended to. You have done a fabulous job so far 👏👏👏

This has been an amazing journey so far and I hope this continues ... 😊

It will be sad to see the end of this ... 😭

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

oh come on Naina, never base the future of your story on the no of response you get..I need not tell u this as u know this well. You are a talented writer with a smart way of writing scenes and situations in a unique way...this story is so good...dont kill it...its a humble request...

coming to the update, i loved the way the husband and wife interacted during their meeting with Irani...even though on opp ends, both supported each other..arnav by calming down khushi and khushi making him proud by applying his lessons into practicality...also i loved the akash-payal challening...its so good to see that pair having some sparks and tug of wars...

again i am mentioning through this story you have imparted so many wise ways of handling relationships, jobs, family,business...am not flattering u..but telling u what i have felt while reading this story from chapter 1 to this very last update..so keep rocking...

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@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

congrats on new thread

loved the updates

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

What a superb twist dear..Kushi is in trouble now :(

Hey..nothing like that..in fact there r more people reading FFs in general now..

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barbiebala

@barbiebala

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

extraordinary update
i loved the update completely
its so interesting to watch both arnav and khushi
both did their job very well
the msg's exchange were so cute
i think problems will occur becoz of angad

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eroni

@eroni

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

this was just a wow chapter. loved payash challenging attitudes. and i loved arshi's message segment. and the end was just mind blowing!!!!! Loved arna's possesiveness. thnx for updating xxx :)

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Raadhiya

@Raadhiyaaa

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

congrats for d new thread
awesome update

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swarnakolasani

@swarnakolasani

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Who is this Angad?!!...engaged with Khushi. Good to see that Arnav clearly understood Khushi's uneasiness and came to stand by her. Their bond is sooo strong that how many Angads come in between nothing will happen to them.

On the other hand, loved the cute little fight between Akash and Payal.