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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Dynamix215


huh, really?
u r one of the raareee kind!
everyone likes the redemption track =/
anways, why?
is it the concept of arnav's way of winning her back (i call it that, not 'redemption'... or it sounds sooo WEIRD) , or the word?

First of all, 🤣 - if this is going to be the tone of the so-called redemption track, bring it on! I loved the first chapter. The humor is high altho Arnav ends up looking a bit of an idiot.

Secondly - lemme explain why I hate the word redemption - it means a price has to be paid for acts committed as remission for the said act. This is the true meaning of the word redemption. However, here on the forum - it usually meant an Arnav who would cry and grovel at Khushi's feet. Heck no! ASR does not cry and he does not grovel. He wouldn't be an alpha male if he did. What he does do is action. Take steps to remedy the wrong or go ahead and do it right in the future.

Which is why the past had haunted him so much - because he knew he couldn't fix that wrong. With Khushi he knows he can fix it. So he throws his all into it - to FIX the wrong. Not apologise for it, because lets face it - apologies are usually hollow without the honesty to act through on them.

So thats one big old explanation of why I hate the word 'Redemption' in this context. But if you say - its wooing Khushi back, I'm settling down on my couch with my bowl of popcorns ready for the treat. And looks like that's what you are doing... !!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Yay redemption track
Waiting for it to start
Can't wait
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
I started reading the redemption tracking...I don't know what I expected but this was just...wow!!
Ashish!!!
I could imagine myself in Payal's place...
Looks like Arnav Singh Raozada is in for a lot of embarrassment...
Redemption track..name itself forms an impression..but reading the cHapter1, I know you wpuld make this different...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Arnav made a fool of himself but despite everything Khushi didn't let him realize that. She loves him so much. The last part was very sad. Khushi is still in pain and can't even seek solace in Arnav's arms. At least she could do it when he is sleeping. Poor possessive Ashish had to witness his BIL romancing his little sister. More reason to mess up with Arnav 😆 Awesome start
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Oh dear the yellow surprise was shocking
Poor khushi felt bad for her
Waiting for more updates
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Arnav had a long way to go if you ask me!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Ashish is really too much...
Beautiful update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
That was brilliant!

Good going by Asish hahaha loved that bit

and aww Khushi said she liked it

I loved what Arnav did in his sleep so cute but ofc the memories wont go this easily, at least they are together for now..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
khushi is so hurt after losing her child
can't wait 4 this track to start
thnx
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Brilliant! So wooing Mrs. Raizada starts now!

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