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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
nice start
please continue and pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2
priya:kya hua tani tum aise bahar kyu chali aayi...whats wrong with u...

Tani:jane do na priya woh kya hai na main unse hamesha coll mein milti hoon...maine socha kyu na main aaj shadi enjoy karu...

Priya:ohhh isliye chal aaja aise sentitypes sa chehra chod do ab chal main tuhme raj se milvati hoon...

Tani:kya raj bhi aaya hai...

Priya:han tuhme kya laga woh apne frnd ke shadi main nahi aayega kya...

Tani:haan yaar pata hain chal nautanki mat kar...

N they goes to meet raj...

Priya:hey raj look whoes here...

Raj:kon heyy tani u how r u dear aur kitne dino ke baad...

Tani:heyy raj m fine tu kaisa hai tu bilkul nahi badla yaar...

Raj:han main kyu badluga tum joh badal gayi ho sidhi sathi ladki se ekdam modern ha kya hua kya hai kahi pyyaar wyar ka chacker toh nahi...

Tani:smiles nahi aise koi baat nahiii...

Raj:maine na tuhse kahi dekhe hai mujhse chupane ki koshish mat kar aur agar tu nahi batana chahti toh mat bata...

Priya:tum yaha phir jhagda mat karo yaar...ham yaha shadi pe aaye hain jhagdene nahii...

Tani:actully yeh sahi keh rahi hai...

Scene shifedt to d3 gang.

Vicky:nilesh yeh tani uss ladke se kaise has has ke baat kar rahi hai...

Nil:haan yaar dekha maine bechara rey isne toh apne liye new bfrnd bhi kar diya aur rey abhi tak sad face leeke ghoom raha hai

vicky:haan hame kuch karna chahiye...

Nil:haan...

Rey:kya ho raha hai guys intne secretly kya bate ho rahi hai...

Vicky:ohhh na ham ladkiyonko dekh rahe the kitni beutifull girls aayi hain yaar...

Rey:ohh tum kabhi nahi sudhroge na ruk mein abhi neha ko batata hoon...

Vicky:ruk na yaar...kya neha ko hamara toh brekup hua hai...

Rey:sad mood haan main bhool gaya sorry...

Vicky:sorry kis baat ki woh main na mere liye ladki choose kar raha hoon...

Nil:haan kya ham issi bahane mein tereliye bhiii i mean...

Rey:no mujhe nahi tum conti karo m leaving...

N rey goes..

Vicky:yeh rey bhi na...

Scne shifed to tani n frnds...

Raj:tani toh tum batane wali nahi ho...

Tani:k tum itna kehte ho toh woh actuly mera brakup ho gaya ...sad mood...

Raj:wooohh m sorry tani woh main tuhme hurt nahi karna chahta tha really sorry...

Tani:its k yaar isme sorry ki baat nahi hai...

Raj:okk toh woh tani main na tuhme kehna chahta tha ki tum aai bohot beautifull lag raho ho...

Tani:thanxxx yaar...

Raj:so can u dance with me...

Tani:what...i mean k sure...

N they both started dancin on batamizz dil all were looking them...

Rey:yeh tani kiske sath dance kar rahi hai...kahi usne mujhse permenet breakup toh nahi kiya...

Sharon:no rey they r frnds...

Rey:sad no sharon ...

Sharon:sach rey...woh sirf dance kar rahe hain aur kuch nahiii...

Rey:i hope so...

Sharon:heyy swayam yeh tani ka sath kon hain...

Swayam:kya tum yeh qust kyu...

Sharon:owh aise hii bata na...

Swayam:i guss tani ka frnd hain raj...

Rey:rajj...

Swayam:haan rajj...par tuhme kyu...

Rey:aise hi...

Sharon:haan woh bas yuh hiii...

Swayam:toh ham chalte hain ab na hamari performance bhi khatam ho gayi we should leve na...

Rey:no...

Sharon:han swayam i mean hame rukna chahiye warna woh bura man lege right...

Swayam:kya...ok thodi der ruk jate hain...

Rey:bach gaye yaar...

Sharon:thankgod swayam ko kuch pata nahi chala...

Scene shifed to tani...

Raj:wohh tai tum bohot acha dance karti hoo kisne sikhaya...

Tani:wohh main...

Raj:k k bye the way pata hain sare log hamme ghorr ke dekh rahe the...

Tani:smiles

i hope u enjoyed it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
continue it pls if possible pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
nice update...
continue soon...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Super story .do update sn;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Nice story.. Just ad both parts, pls cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Great update plz jaldi se update karo :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: miss_neha

Nice story.. Just ad both parts, pls cont soon


m glad u like it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
nice updatee... =)
raj's character seems interesting...
and it was a cute update...
excited to see what happens next...
update soon =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Mohit_monaya

nice updatee... =)

raj's character seems interesting...
and it was a cute update...
excited to see what happens next...
update soon =)


m glad u like it...

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