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JODI MADE IN HEAVEN

chapter 13

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Chapter 13

In the party

After talking with arnav, khushi went to party with geet with some disappointment in her face as arnav is not listening to her and going to party, she is tensed for him.. but after entering the party she is helping geet in placing the order..

Geet: "hey khush tum yaha sab sambhalo mai abhi jaakar owner se kehti hun ki uska order pahunch gayi" (hey you manage everything here, I will go and talk with owner saying all the order is placed)

Khushi: "geet tum yaha ki chinta mat karo mai aur ridhi sambhal lunga aur ha ridhi kaha hai" (geet you don't take tension me and ridhi will take care of things here.. where is ridhi?)

Geet: "ha voh kaha hai tum ek kaam karo usko phone karo aur pooch" (where is she now, you do one thing call her and ask)

Khushi: "teek hai mai abhi karthi hun"(fine I will call now only) with that she took out her phone and called riddhima.

Riddhima who is in tension in reaching the place found that her phone is ringing so she took out her phone and said "hey khush kya huwa? Tum party mein ho na" (hai what happened? You are in the party only right?)

Khushi: "ha riddhi hum dono party mein hi hai tum kaha pe ho?ab tak aayi kyun nahi? Kaha tak pahunch gayi thu ab?" (ya we both are in party only. Where are you? Why did not you come till now? Till where did you come now?)

Riddhima: "mai raasthe mein hun voh kya hai na meri gaadi kharab hogayi isiliye aane mein thoda time laggayi par mai 10 mins mein vaha hongi tumhare paas tum chinta amt karo" (am on my way, the matter is my car has given trouble and I will be there in 10 mins you don't worry)

Khushi: "tumhari gaadi kharab hogayi phir tum kaise aarahi ho sab teek hai na?" (your car has given trouble then how are you coming? Is everything fine?)

Riddhima: "ha dear sab teek hai mai waha aane ke baad tume sab bataungi" (ya everything is fine, after coming there I will tell you everything)

Khushi: "teek hai jaldi aana aur dhyan rakhna we will be waiting for you" (fine come soon and takecare we will be waiting for you)

Riddhima: "fine khush am coming"

With that both cut the phone and riddhima has asked the person "please aap bura mat maniye kya aap jara gaadi jaldi chalayiye naa meri friends mere liye wait kar rahi hai" (please don't think otherwise will you please drive fast that my friends are waiting for me there)

The person: "ok you don't worry I will try making you reach there fast"

Flashback:

Riddhima is on her way to the party she will be driving fast that she has got late for party and her friends will be waiting for her. Suddenly her car breaks down she tries a lot to strat the car but it goes in vain. The car will not start so riddhima has come out of the car only to see that her car has flat tyre so immediately she called her dad and said "dad yaha gaadi kharab ho gayi aap kisi driver ko bejhkar yaha se le jaane ki kahiye mai kisi se lift lekar party mein jaoungi" (dad here car has given some problem you say one of the drivers to come and take the car, I will ask somebody lift and I will go for party)

Riddhima dad: "teek hai beta par tum party pahunchte hi mujhe call karna aur takecare" (fine dear but you after reaching party immediately call me and takecare)

After the conversation with her dad riddhima will be waiting for any car so that she can take lift but to her surprise no car is coming finally one car has come in that way and riddhi immediately asked for lift to some place(where the party is going) "excuse me sir my car has flat tyre will you please give me lift to this place"

The person: "ok fine madam you can get in the car"

Riddhima has taken place in the front seat beside driver seat and she said "thank you so much"

The person: "no mention by the way your name please"

Riddhima: " my name is riddhima, riddhima mehra aur aap?"

The person: "nice name and am siddhanth, siddhnath malhotra, all will call me as sid"

Riddhima: "nice name and nice to meet you"

Sid: "same here"

While driving the car both are stealing glances with each other its like both are attracted by each other.

Present:

Now riddhima is in hurry to reach the party so she is looking out of the window whether her destination has reached or not where sid is enjoying seeing her by stealing glances.

In the party

Khushi is busy in arranging the items according to the order she is helping the people who have come to arrange it where as geet is in search of Mr.khurana so that her bill will be paid.

Geet is passing through the corridor in the party hall and suddenly she bumps into a man who is coming in the opposite direction without looking at each other both said "dekh kar nahi chal sakthi hai kya? Yeh tumhari baap ka place nahi hai" (cant you see and walk? This is not your father's place)

While saying that words both looked into each other, both are mesmerized by the other and there is an eyelock between them. They forgot about their anger and they are looking into each other eyes deeply. Suddenly geet phone rang and they came out of trance and geet is the first person to talk "am sorry mai thodi jaldi mein hoon isiliye maine aapko nahi dekha aur yeh sab hogaya" (am sorry I was in some hurry so I did not see you and all this happened)

Maan: "nahi meri galthi hai maine aapko nahi dekha issmein aapki galthi nahi hai" (no its my fault that I did not see you, you are not at fault)

Both in unison: "am sorry"

Maan: "ab yeh sorry ki baat chodiye aur aap ka naam kya hai?" (now lets leave this sorry matter and whats your name?)

Geet: "geet, its geet kashyap and you?"

Maan: "its maan, maan singh khurana" with that he extended his hand and geet also gave her hand for formal greeting..

Then suddenly maan said "so you are miss.kashyap with whom I have talked in the morning"

Geet: "so you are the person who has called in the morning for giving order"

And with that both got angry in the first later that turned into smile and geet said "so aapka order aagaya ek baar aap aakar dekh tho lijiye" (so your odere has been placed once you come and check it out)

Maan: "yeah sure dekhne ke baad mai aapka payment clear kardunga" (yeah sure after seeing that I will clear your payment)

Geet: "thank you tho chale" (thank you shall we move?)

Maan: "aap jaayiye mai thodi der mein aakar aapse milunga voh kya hai na mai guests ko receive karne jaane hai mai abhi abhi London se aaya hun isiliye mai apni friends aur guests se milkar aapke paas aaounga aur aap tab tak party enjoy kijiye" (you go I will come and meet you in some time I have to receive guests, I have come from London now only so after meeting my friends and relatives I will come to you, by that time you enjoy the party)

Geet: "thank you and welcome to INDIA"

With that she left from there and she is on her way to go the palce where khushi is arranging everything.

In Raizada Mansion

Arnav after talking with khushi, he took his blazer and said in his home that he is leaving for party then anji said "chotte tumhari tabiyat bhi teek nahi iss haalat mein tum party mein kyu jaarahe ho" (arnav you are not feeling well, in this condition why are you going for party?)

Arnav: "di aap chinta mat karo di maine maan ko baataya ki mai aaounga isiliye mai thodi der party mein rahunga aur jaldi ghar aajaounga" (you don't take tension I have said maan that I will be coming so for sometime I will go for party and i will come home quickly)

Anji: "teek hai chotte agar tume apni shehad kuch bhi teek nahi laaga na mujhe call karo mai driver ko bejhdungi tum akela mat aao" (fine arnav if your health is not well na immediately call me I will send driver from here, you don't come alone)

Arnav: "teek hai di mujhe agar aisa laga tho mai aap ko call karunga ab mai jao?" (fine if I feel in that way the I will call you can I go now?)

Anji: "teek hai tum jao aur jaldi aana" (fine go and come fast)

After talking with his di he went to his SUV and started driving to the party while he is driving he called khushi. Khushi who is in party immediately took out her phone and with tension on her face asked "arnu tum teek ho na? (arnav are you fine?)

Arnav: "kutty mai teek hun tum kaha pe ho?" (am fine where are you?)

Khushi: "mai party mein hoon aur mujhe mann nahi lag rahi hai yaha mujhe tumhari chinta ho rahi hai" (am in party and am not feeling to be in this party am tensed about you)

Arnav: with irritation he said "khushi tumhe aur di ko bol bol kar mai tak chuka hoon mai kitni baar samjhao ki mai jald hi party se laut aaounga." (khushi am tired of telling you both,how many times I have to say you and di that I will some soon from party)

khushi: with arnav anger tone khushi felt bad and said "teek hai tum dhyan se drive karo mai phone rakhti hun bye." (fine you drive safely and I will cut the phone bye).

Arnav: "fine bye".

Khushi is hurt by arnav angry because arnav when he is abgry only he will call her by his name so she is on the verge of crying but she controlled herself that she is in party so she tried to divert her mind but she thought "ab arnu mujhpe gussa hai aur gussa mein voh apne driving pe nikhal dega hey Devi Maiyya uski raksha karna" (now arnav is angry on me and he will show his anger on driving Goddess please take care of him).

Arnav is driving in full speed, he is angry on himself for getting irritated on khushi, he wants khushi to enjoy party but now he know that khushi will never enjoy the party because of him as he shouted on her, he also knew that khushi will be very hurt now. In the meanwhile arnav reached the destination that si he reached the party place.

He is greeting his friend maan, all are enjoying the party but he is not in a mood to enjoy as he has hurt his kutty.

Sid-Riddhima

Even sid also by the time has reached the destination and riddhima came out of the car so fast by saying "thank you so much mr.sid for giving me lift"

Sid: "its my pleasure to drop you here, enjoy the party"

Riddhima: "its my pleasure meeting you and thanks bye".

After saying this riddhima went inside but least she knew that even sid also has come for party.

When riddhima has left, sid immediately parked his car in the parking lot and entered into the party hall.

Meanwhile khushi is tensed about arnav so she is sitting in a corner and been praying that he should be fine and someone has called her so she got up in a haste that she did not see that her dress been struck to a nail, with the force she got up her dress tore, she turned back to see what happened and was very tensed now what to do..

She tried calling geet but her phone is not with her and she is not moving from there.

Here Arnav is not in mood so he thought of sspending some time alone and thought of calling khushi to fine out how is she? When he came some far from the members of the party he took out his phone to call her but she did not attend his call so arnav thought "lagta hai kutty bahut hurt hai meri phone bhi nahi utha rahi hai lagta hai mujhe bahut samay lagega usko manane mein" (guess khushi is very hurt by me, she is not even attending my call, I guess it will take more time for me to make her laugh now)

While thinking this suddenly his face glow with happiness as he saw his kutty in the same party, first he did not believe his eyes but again he saw tension on khushi's face and felt that she is here only, she is in some tension and saw her hands fidgeting with her dress and immediately understood that her dress is torn so he went to get some thing that can solve khushi tension.

While khushi is in tension of how to overcome this problem she thought of calling geet when

Suddenly one pair of hands caught her from waist and took her to the corner, due to the sudden lift khushi's back fell on his chest, she was so depressed that she did not even recognize him by his touch and she did not knew who it is so she is beating him on his chest saying "kaun ho tum? tumhari himmat kaise hui ki mujhe aise uthane ki? Chodo mujhe" (who are you? How dare you to get me like this? Leave me)

The person is adjusting her dress in sich a way that her skin is not visible to others. Khushi understood that and she stopped beating him then he said "ab teek hain tum chinta mat karo, waise kya zarrorat thi yeh kapde pehne ki ha? Ab dekho kya huwa? Lo meri coat pehen lo" there was some authority in his voice she got angry on him for that voice (now its fine you don't worry, whats the need to wear such type of clothes? See what happened?anyway take my coat and wear it)

Khushi thought "iski itni himmat voh mujhse aisi unche aawaaz mein baat karthe hai, mai usko abi sabak seekathi hun" (how dare he? He will talk to me in such high tone I will teach him a lesson)

With that she turned back and her mouth turned into perfect "o" shape

no precap

I will stop here and you people have to wait for her reaction..

I know am crazy for writing such update..

Hope you liked it..

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Edited by sarun21 - 11 years ago
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Why did you have to stop here? 😭 The guy is already possessive about her! Terrific! 👍🏼 Loving this. Thanks for the PM.
Edited by wiwy - 11 years ago

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