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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#211

oh obviously wht he is trying to do is not enough but its just the start and it really good for the start.

especially tht salman khan poster, it indicates tht he is willing to accept things which were previously not acceptable to him, if they make her happy.

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#212

sEcond page
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Edited!

Lovely👏

You have very beautifully displayed the play on emotions in their being. (I hope this line is correct?)

After going through the worst phase of life, it is very difficult to collect yourself & get back to your life again!

I loved this anjali here, who accepted the whole truth, filed a divorce & also is looking forward to help his brother to mend his strained relationship!

And khushi, I loved the fact that she forgave him and is trying to move on. That was the most difficult on her part to do so, and you have characterized a strong anjali I loved it, bas!

Arnav's attempt to her make her feel loved are are praiseworthy. Again something which was compusory in the show but it indeed didn't happen. Instead of this, arnav actually forced a birthday celebration on her though he made it up by wishing her at night <3

And I loved his confession to her, you won my heart with your writing skills. You should try write a novel😉

P.S. Chitra di all set to meet arnav haan? Do give him some tips as to how to win khushi back😉

Edited by dj_arshifan - 12 years ago

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Afya

@Afya

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#213

Mints, Thank you for such a long and beautiful part. It was a refreshing take on the subject.

And I am sorry about the delay in commenting. My weekdays are nightmarish busy.🤓

Loved how Anjali is taking care of herself and her situation, as she should. It surely is a tough time for her. Hated the way she depended on everyone for everything in the show. And here, she also notices something amiss in her brother's relationship. Loved how she comforts and counsels him.

Arnav has finally realised what Khushi means to him...she is HIS life...that he can't exist without.😊

And he is right! He had wronged her terribly...accused her of the most hurtful things...yet she bore it in silence...yet loving him. Am happy he confessed to his Di...every little thing he had done.

Ms Chitra Nair😆. Is Vandana Sagar going to make an appearance too?

Looks like he has a solid plan...After all he is ASR. Love this man's confidence...He will surely win her back.😛

I am glad Khushi feels better after hearing his apology for each and every wrong deed of his towards her. She has decided to leave him but deep down she wants him to beg her to stay...Thanks for keeping it so real, Mints.👏

Loved his surprise ...especially the starry ceiling. How sweet of him to change the whole room to her taste! 😊

Love how he tells her he won't stop her...but won't stop trying to win her back either! That is so beautifully written, Mints. He knows how wrong he had been...He also know how good their future could be...

"Khushi, as I said I will not try to stop you from leaving. But I will try to show you in every way, how much I love you. I will show you what you mean to me Khushi. I will keep giving you every reason to stay back with me. I will keep trying till the last moment Khushi, even if you want to run away from me. I know I don't deserve a second chance, but I will keep trying all my life to make you fall in love with me all over again.

Beautiful dialogues! How can a woman resist a man who says such beautiful things!😳

Thank you , Mints for this beautiful story. It was a treat to read. 👏

And I absolutely love how you give us both Arnav's and Khushi's perspective...in this part even Anjali's. And please don't end it anytime soon...Love this story.

Edited by Afya - 12 years ago

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#214

loved it...a you said ippknd changed our life...after the show ended i could not sit front of tv and watch any other indian serial...i love your story...please do not let khushi go away from arnav..let him woo her but no going away

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Kamala

@Kamala05

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#215

Loved the update. Hope Arnav will able to win the trust of Khushi.

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sumond

@sumond

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#216

Simply WOW!!!, thanks a ton for the pm

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#217

awesome update..really nice..interesting..continue soon..😊

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#218

Awesome update! Khushi should give Arnav little hard time but again I do feel little sorry for him 😃

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@BlueBloodQueen

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#219

Awesome up date dear.
Poor arnav,he loves her so much,eventhough she hate him.
Thanks for the pm.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#220

Wow that was an amazing and brilliant, simply outstanding,

The update was written exceptionally well.

The part where Arnav was crying on Anjali's lap and repeating the words that Anjali once has said to him was so sad and touching.

Awww love the fact Arnav is secretly helping Khushi out with her food business and getting her potential clients, that is so sweet.

Wow, loved the way Arnav redecorated his room too khushi's taste, everything in the room looked beautiful and Arnav had decorated it perfectly.

Khushi's outburst at the end was totally justified, she has gone through so much pain and is finding it difficult to accept living with him after the 6 months.

Love the way Arnav admitted that he is going to try and woo her back and make sure she falls in love and trusts him again.

Loved the update, wonderful writing.

Eagerly waiting for the next update,

Please continue please and thanks for the PM xx