Virman-SS-but I love you!!! part 15 - Page 82

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Well well well.. I don't think praising words r enough for u cuz ur work is beyond that! So it's obvious that this update was super duper block buster hit! Sab box office ki money send kardu app ke home address pe? How much money u want baby? :p I hope they manage to give u enough

First thing first! Ur story's first catch for me was the song selection that u select. Enrique Iglesias <3 baby I'm so addicted to him! From addicted to BILU whatever song u selected was awesome n "Tonight I'm loving u" suits the plot very well

Coming to the dialogs I shall not mention the blunt ones cuz i was blushing tooo!

How was the first night? "earth shakingly good"

Don't go bombard first! Make him swear n don't show the nervousness!

Oh madam r u planning to kill me? My heart is already weak with all this n the dialogs r dangerous!

Describing scene n giving dialogs worth as portraying the scene is worth more cuz! Scenes u may read once or trice but dialogs stays in ur mind for a while n it shakes ur instincts way too much!
Above dialogs r haunting my mind ok that's y pointing that out!

LOVE the chem btwn bhabi n nanad
very nice n jolly duet! <3 too cute

Now ahem mr. Naughty vadhera hahaha OMG did he check out the waitress? Lmafoooi n the dancing with the strippers haiii sexyyy! Maar dalaaa... It was HOT babyyy u gave me my scene let me give u a tight hug! N when manvi rock the stage ufff love it n I love her inner feelings dialogs "oh it feels good" hahaha eee badtamizzz dill mane na mane naaa

One thing was left apart in ur story which was the marriage with heart n u did it n now it's complete perfection!!!!

Haiii he is becoming naughty hah!! Passionate kiss n don't giving a hoot about anybody oye hoyeee mujhe cooler dedo I'm burning here...

NOW do I really have to say wat we want? Tomorrow or Sunday u gonna kill me ok make it fast! Can't wait thank u for the naughty boy love him to core!!

Originally posted by: bluebolt

lol..how do u even know??

Biggest stalker.. dnt u knw 🤣

😳Omggg...it was amazing...starting frm priya and manvi talk...to the end. They gt married agn...I just luv the crazy,drunk virat...eagerly waitin for the next part... *wonders wat will happen in the hotel room😳

wow awesome update i just loved t to the core of my heart please do continue soon and thanks for the pm😛😛

amazing update

Ahhh! *Screams out loud* I wanna read more of ittt! Psh..why did u end it here? Writing queen..dont make us wait for so long plz..!!! See..its all ur fault..u write so amazingly that we cant help bugging u 😆 I dont wanna write anything regarding the updatd..u can guess what Im feeling right now 😉 writing queen..a quick update PLEASEEE

Hey Very Nice update liked it
Loved priya and manvis conversation
But i really loved drunk virat how he
Maked manvi jealous and they got married
Again just awesome i really love all your stories
Please continue soon
Will be waiting for your update

Awesome and Amazing..!! Like Maanvi's conversation with Priya...she needed to share her nervousness with some 1...who would be better than her bhabi...but the best their sweet banter which bought out a person he actually is..and he confessed ..he had become guarded...love the proposal and their 2nd time marriage..Virat is completely drunk.,..but he mentioned earlier he can handle which means a little sense is still there..waiting fr next...as in Virat actually meant what he has mentioned...😆..hope u understand..Waiting for next N Thanks for the PM Anu..!!

OMG!! Such am awesome and hot update! I am so glad you updated! I love your work and you are an amazing writer!! I loved their cute wedding in Vegas!!! Can't wait for the next update!