Virman-SS-but I love you!!! part 15

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smileysmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#671

Res
Unres...

Me first this time🥳
Wonderful dear...I just loved it ..
Though it is a short update but very nice update..
Virat'z behavior after the meeting was expressed so well...
His happiness cool behavior portrayed really well...
Manvi'z reaction at end was cute...
Yeah even I liked manvi's conversation with her parents...
Lovely...

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vamps1996

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Posted: 12 years ago

#672

omggg anu short ko maro goli it was fabbb eeeksss im so loving it i cant even explain my height of happiness after reading the update the day dreaming part was awsomeee and yesss virat did it he will take his invention further himself that was the best part when THE VIRAT JI choose to take a risk rather than playing safe 😃 and the parents convo was funny as usual loved virat's confidence their new sides which they are exploring of eachother is a treat to read and ahhh im loving this naughty wale virat ji hahaha repeat telecast omigoshhh im jumpinggg alll arrrouuunddd thinkinggg of ittt 😆😆😆

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TeriKhamoshiyan

@TeriKhamoshiyan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#673

u are like awesome!!⭐️

i loved ur entire story! ❤️

just read it one go!!😊

ur an fantastic writer!!⭐️

every single update either i had a huge smile on my face or i laughed at something that manvi or virat said!!😆

i love the concept of ur story!👏

especially manvi!! she is so cute,especially, the way she calls virat, virat ji!!!😳

finally virat has listened to manvi's advice and has decided to finally do something that will make him happy!!😃

love the way manvi and virats relationship is progressing!!

please do update soon!! 🤗

will be waiting for the next update!!😛

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Anaida

@iamanaida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#674

Lovely update but a short one though...can understand you may be very busy...thx for removing out the time to pen down this for us.

Virat too is getting naughtier day by day...cant wait for the next update..

muah Anu..

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AKSH

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Posted: 12 years ago

#675

eeekkksss amzing update... cant wait for the next update... plz this time u have to continue this soonnn... plzzz

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#676

Doing the Rumba salsa Zumba watevaaa shakinggg...
STRIP CLUB!!!! Oh yaaa I'm getting wat I wanted :p
Can u make my boy strip himself?? Go out of control n act naive!!!!!!
OMG he said I will take u there if u show me the repeat telecast in my bedroom ... MY jaws were open n rolled on the bed unable to digest the dialog ROFL tooo good baby!!!!
I'll give u my desired list later rite now controlling since I didn't break my fast yet!

He crack the deal wohooo listen to ur heart... Love the imagination <3 now update hurry don't make us wait ok?

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kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#677

wowww virat is actually getting way shameless and naughty all coz of mannu's company😉 this is not virat the vadhera its mannu's viratji the self confidence self belief the happiness the naughtiness the shameless behaviour the flirty thing and most of all the excitment to spend time with mannu ...loving this change in virat he is just soo perfect now ...😃
and the last line omg at first i wud have never imagined virat saying it but now i think i shud expect the unexpected from him poor mannu she has to bear all this 😆😆

loving this viratji and mannu ❤️
anu awesomely beautiful update...👍🏼.waiting for the next one😃

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shaimah

@shaimah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#678

Update was awesome
Loved it
Loved the converstion between manvi and her parents...very cute
Excited for the next part...the last part was so funny
Continue soon

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shreeya121

@shreeya121

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Posted: 12 years ago

#679

1st ly congratss 4 dis ss... as it is d story of d week...🤗🥳

n now coming 2 d update...

wow.. such an amazing update...👏👏

so finaly he didn't sell his work... n did nt play safe...

bt now is one of d patners of such a big company...🥳🥳

i really loved it...😃😃

though it ws small bt chalta h...!!! as smthng id bttr den nothng...😉😉

plz update soon m really excited 2 read further...😊😊

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roshreb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#680

love it .. manvi is just the contrast of simmi... she is indeed an angel like virat mentioned earlier.. she has come as a new ray of hope in his life...but forget abt all these... i liked the end most.. mischievous virat JI ...he is getting naughtier..i want virman to go to the strip club nw..common mannu has never been to one...and then she may give virat a demonstration as he mentioned about "repeat telecast"...want to see him at his naughtiest .. & ya i love it wen he call her baby its better thn mannu..waiting for nxt part
(congrats once again for winning story of the week & nw u can turn it into an 18 + one :-p)

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