Virman-SS-but I love you!!! part 15 - Page 64

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Posted: 12 years ago
ANUUU DIII I LOVE YOU FOR THIS!!!!!!!!!!!❤️❤️
I have never seen such a sweet & romantic update!!!!! It was just beautiful!!!!!!!!!!😃😳
I am really loving this Viratji...sweet as well as naughty at the same time!!!!!😃

What should I say that which part I liked...I just loved the whole update!!!!!
I can officially declare that BILU is my all time favourite story!!!!!!!!❤️

I just cannot get over it...!!!! This love story is so sweet, so pure!!!!!!!! Seriously it defines true love in every sense!!!!!!!!😃

I am just speechless!!!!! I just cannot say anything!!!!!!!!
And when Virat said Who simmi???? I was like...AAAWWW!!!!!!!!!😳😳

Seriously...YOU ARE THE BEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Anu, as promised, I am done with exams and back with a comment for each chapter I missed. I had to force myself not to read your stories during my exams because they are so good and addicting too. 😊

Chapter 7: Haye, Manvi's dream was awesome. I loved it. I am sure with the way your story is progressing we will get lots more. Haha, Virat teasing her was icing on top. It was too good. I loved the chapter, it was so sweet. Priya bhabhi and Manvi's talk was cute too.

Chapter 8: It was a wonderful chapter so your bad mood did not affect it at all, your writing is just too perfect Anu. Aww, Manvi told the receptionist they were newly married so they got the honeymoon suite, that was cute. Beechara Manvi, she just can't get the dream out of her head. Haye, I loved the caring mode she went into after Virat got sick. She really loves him. ❤️

Chapter 9: HAHA, "You are not asexual" that is the funniest line I have read. Thank you so much Anu for this wonderful update. Manvi drunk was too cute, and poor Virat just couldn't get her to be quiet. Haww, he kissed her, that was a shocker, I would think it would be the other way around since she was drunk but this works too.

Chapter 10: "There is an us," perfect ending to a very sweet chapter. I loved it, starting with their awkwardness to the kiss, it was written perfectly. I am glad Virat finally confessed to her that she affects him, this story is just getting better and better.

Chapter 11: Ok, you had me blushing like crazy with this chapter. Virat is so sweet and charming. I loved every bit of this chapter. Virat is so caring of Manvi, he wants her happiness and that's all that matters for him, that is too cute. Haww, Manvi's dream ka kiss, am I reading this correctly. The kiss was very ahem ahem 😳. Aww, bechari Manvi at the end, she should get rid of the sofa, it will make everyone happy. 😆

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS WONDERFUL STORY AND CONTINUING TO PM ME! 🤗

You are a fanstastic writer, you have me in love with each and every one of your stories, can't wait to read more.

Edited by nimi00 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
MindBlowing..!!! Love their bond growing each minute no second...Virat actually asked her what she thinks and wants to know whts goin on in her head...which is simply sweet...communication is imp..agree...but there were som many sweet moments...Awesome..Waiting for next n Thnaks for the PM Anu..!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww dear what an amazing nd romantic update
i read it 3 times
plz plz plz cont soon dear
Edited by shirhid - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh my ...Oh my ...Ooh my...Dat was an amaaazing update...*bows down*...u serious r one of the finest writers in the forum...n all ur works r quite unique...⭐️
M seriously luving the pace of the story...happy to c virat seriously thinking abt "their" future...leaving behind his bitter memories...n in midst of all ensuring that his mannu wont b hurt evn a bit...aww...virat z chooo chweet😳
Virman moments r really intense n passionate...n their slight "sexual tensions" z making it more interesting😃...evn m wondering hw will their "more" be...😉😆
Piano sequence was beautiful n so was their beach scene tooo...m luving the positivity n bubbliness of manvi...
Plzz cont asap n thnx a loot for the pm!!! 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

👏

WOWOWOOWWOOWOWOWOWOWO

AMAZING UPDATE
EEEKS !xxx

Awww He loves her !
Things moving on fast no fillers ⭐️
Loving this story !xxx

Ooo wats next hehehhe xx

Continue soon xx
Thanks for the pm x

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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME
ROMANTIC UPDATE👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was juz awesome
contin soon thnx for d pm!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Simply classic, wah kya likhti ho tm , love the way virat tease manvi,i cnt w8 4 next update plz jaldi se post it
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Posted: 12 years ago
getting...addictd to another story...!! ❤️ 😊

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