Virman-SS-but I love you!!! part 15 - Page 53

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome and lovely update...
plzzz update it quick...
waiting to read more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
U silly monkey donkey little rat like anu!!!! Screw u!!!! Wat te hack did u just do??? Or shall I say Wat did I read????? IM SPEECHLESS! First n foremost running a bulldozer for screwing up the whole scene by making manvi run to the bathroom!!! DID U REALLY have to do that??????? Likeee beep beep n extra beep!!! Holy smokeee that way HOT BABY!!!! *whistles* haizzzxxx let me take a deep breath... I still don't believe wateva I read.. It was so sudden move that my mouth was literary open throughout that specific section... Each line my eyebrows raised high n mouth opened so big that my jaw is hurting now!!! U r on a ROLL baby... But kamini saitan ki nani ullu kahikiii... "we wanna go Slow" GO HELL with ur slow.. Wat... *ok Faria calms down her nerves n controls the lose character mouth*

Taking a deep breath n screaming out loud oh boy u killed me... It was damn sexy sweeet innocent yet veryuuu naughtyyy!!!!!!!!!

U gave me my naughty bad boy!!! Can I crush u with a none breaking hug???? Oh yes I can.. I do loveee this virat! His passion n finally leting his feelings out... Loveee the way manvi Made the transformation.. Desi girl huh??? Loveee ittt! Manvi baby on a stole tooo her trick worked... N the kisss maar dalaaa! U r making me so much batamiz huh...

Abbb yeh pizaaa kahaseee agayaaa??? Screw that tooo... Ahem possessive virat huh... He don't wanna Take her this way.. Ahem. I like that..

Wat else.. Honestly speaking I don't remember I Wat read only that romantic section is hovering my head. *faria shuts up*

I love the rahul, Priya convoooi it was good both r guiding him... Hahahahha

Wat else.. See I am still stuck .. Tch tch ok.. Now hushing..

My expectation r way tooo extra high... I'm gonna demand moreee n u better give me everything I ask for


I want a stripping club scene! Make manvi or virat te show stopper doesn't matter!!! Go wild don't regret... Want a police case too.. Idk y but lol random wish... Wat else is pending haaa bikini scene .. Just to make him go wild.. Ok for now no more wish I'm already besharam.. All thanks to u... UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 12 years ago
Anuuu! Oh-Em-Geee! Kill meee! How the freaking hell do u write such awesome stuff??? Like do u have any idea how damn awesome this is!! Goshhh! From part 7 BILU has been driving me crazy!! Buahahah Manvi wanted to tease Virat but instead she got everything back in return! Lol! And OMGGG after she came out of the bathroom and he held her on the waist.. that was freaking HAWT!!! Ahem ahem! They want to take things ahead! ;) Am loving this!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
woww that was another awesome update just leaving us speechless ...can just read it 100 times and sure tht wud never get bored of it ... 😊
finally its affecting him manvi is affecting him and he wants to take their relationship ahead thats just soo woww 😊
update next part soon andthanx alott for the pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dark Chocolaty hot fudge YUM.

Finally Viratji is giving in to his emotions and loved the seductive Mannu. and I'm really glad they decided to go slow. All the more sexual tension for us to enjoy as well.

Awesome update BILU ROCKS.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank u for pm...
Update was superbly awesome...
Loved it...maanvi so much...
Fab...
Waiting for next one soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
it was so ramantic yr
pls contin soon nd
thnx for da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohh god, this is reallly one of the best ss that i have read in this forum ...
manvi you are just great,you have wrote the last part amazing,
im so happy, virat want to give them a chance😊
owww this is getting better and better

thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Anu !!!! kya kar rahi hai !!! this is way too awesome update ;) u noe i have read the update for 5 times now !!!! seriously this is Amazing !!! :DDD ❤️i don't have enough words to express how much i loved it !! i m totally in love with BILU !!!😛 this is making me crazy !!! i m blushing smiling throughout the update !!! this blushing blushing manvi is soo cute :D manvi confess tat she like whatever happen in evening gosh !!! not only tat virat teasing her is soo sweet !!! Look at my grin Anu !!!😃😃 N the kiss omg omg !!! i m dead🤢🤢 Hayye😳😳I come back to earth from whatever bestseller romantic novel I was just a part of. After reading BILU i can say tat 😛 N the last part !!! i juz loved the way virat tease manvi 😃 loved the update alot alot alot alot !!! ❤️❤️❤️ now i m being greedy !! i m juz too excited for next update !!! i noe u r busy but plz continue soon if possible !! will be eagerly waiting !! thank u so much for the pm :D<3


Edited by .Yamin. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ur such a fab writer must say...no words to describe

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